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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tulasi14

A ray of hope lifted the spirits,
Still not happy,but have to take what we get.
I see the rainbow in the sky,
Where all the seven colors looked so happy,
Painted an arch of VIBGYOR,(rainbow colors)
Under the arch I see so many friends,
Enjoying each other's company,
My dear Friend's a pat on back is a great encouragement ,

This journey of writing ,started long time ago,
I will keep writing and I am not professional writer
I am not perfect but
This brings solace,comfort and joy to me,


They say sunset is an artist's pallet,
The colors are so intense,it became
A dream of the photographer,
Every time he want to capture ,
Something used to go wrong.
But never gave up.

This is life people come n go,
Only few people stick with us,
Memories we carry thru generations,
Friend's to night
I see all the colors of autumn,
Reds,yellows,oranges,green
And many more...

Enjoy the Mother Nature ,
The best place to find solace,
Thanks for all your love.





Great yaar very well 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi! Tulasi,
Great O.S! Wish something like that would have happened but alas..!! Your depiction of emotions of Nikhil and Laajo are awesome...even the description of the ambience...is very beautiful''
Your poem is also wonderful...😊 Congratulations!!👏
Well I am not a good writer but my kids find my bed-time stories good!! ( maybe it helps them feel sleepy fast!! 😉 😆😆😆) So I get many ideas but cannot write!!😳( I don't want people to sleep!!😛)
Your O.S made me think what would happen if Nikhil met Laajo when she bumped his car!! That too in the company of Sagar!! What would he do?!! feel jealous...( seeing Sagar)..,.Angry for hiding from him all the time being in Delhi or overwhelmed to see her after long...forgetting about everything?!! I am still thinking...😉 I don't think we will get answers!! the story has become so unpredictable and the foolishness of Laajo so predictable!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshitap

Hi! Tulasi,

Great O.S! Wish something like that would have happened but alas..!! Your depiction of emotions of Nikhil and Laajo are awesome...even the description of the ambience...is very beautiful''
Your poem is also wonderful...😊 Congratulations!!👏
Well I am not a good writer but my kids find my bed-time stories good!! ( maybe it helps them feel sleepy fast!! 😆) So I get many ideas but cannot write!!😳( I don't want people to sleep!!😛)
Your O.S made me think what would happen if Nikhil met Laajo when she bumped his car!! That too in the company of Sagar!! What would he do?!! feel jealous...( seeing Sagar)..,.Angry for hiding from him all the time being in Delhi or overwhelmed to see her after long...forgetting about everything?!! I am still thinking...😉 I don't think we will get answers!! the story has become so unpredictable and the foolishness of Laajo so predictable!!😆😆😆

hi Varshita ,
Thanks for your kind words and definetly you are good writer..Your posts are excellent and coming to your kids liking your bed time stories that shows you are good story teller and good narrator. 😉
But kids going to sleep because they are already exhausted by then😃 I think you shud start writing dear!gud to see you back on the forum🤗

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