Trishna laajvanthi !an OS!

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Trishna Laajvanthi! An OS!

Note:This is my version if Nikhil has seen Laajo in the mall .
Laajo was excited looking at there parents and she wants to show them the whole city of Delhi.Aaj Saagar sab chutti Diya unka poora fayida utana hi.(sagar sab gave a holiday. I want to take advantage of it) Looking at Laajo's excitement her parents were very happy.They have got lot of goodies from village .Laajo's mom wants to feed her with her own hands .Laajo says maa muji abhi khana nahi.(mom,I don't want to eat now) Mai my baad mei kallunga.( I will eat later). Sarswati's face becomes sad,dekoji thumari laadli beti bade ho gaye ji.( look your daughter became so big)
Laajo convinces they go to mall.They were surprised to see big mall,Laajo was talking non stop and bumps in to a guy!That was Nikhil who is on the phone and phone drops on the floor.They both bend down to pick up the phone and Laajo says I an sorry.They look at each other and Nikhil says you in Delhi.
Laajo was stunned and Laajo's parents come there and tell the truth.The rest of it is revealed by Laajo and How she met momji?How she said,she will not let her win?
So,you are Trishna Sagar is going to launch.Laajo's parents are very happy to see Nikhil.They took leave from both Laajo and Nikhil .

Laajo and Nikhil are walking holding hands.There was pause between them and they want to tell each other so many things. But the silence in between them is killing.Nikhil breaks the silence by asking what are your plans for the day.Laajo says nothing specific.Nikhil says I will be back in ten minutes.Yaha say hilna math.( don't move from here)He wants to make that day special.He booked a spa where he wants Laajo to be pampered.
He said Laajo there are so many historic places in Delhi.But I want to take you to one of my favourite place that is the Lotus temple.They reached lotus temple.They found a quite spot in the rose garden.The roses are in full bloom because of the monsoon.The colorful roses brought new color to there love.Laajo can see the love and pagalpan in Nikhil's eye's.Laajo relaized how much they both missed each other.They sat on a bench covered with canopy of night queen plant.It looked like the flowers are welcoming the lovers with there fresh cent.
It was almost evening and it is very windy .Laajo's tiny body can't tolerate the wind.

Nikhil noticed her shivering.He quickly took of his blazer and put it around her.He put his arms around her and pulled close to his chest and kissed her on forehead.Gave her the comfort and warmth she needed the most and forgot about the surroundings.
Living in the moment,Nikhil was very happy and looking at the beauty of his wife It was almost time for them to go to the spa.They checked themselves in to luxury suite spa.Where it is specially for the couples.Yet first Laajo refused to be there.Nikhil convinced and Nikhil noticed some changes in her externally she Made for the society.Laajo and Nikhil enjoyed the spa and are revived .Laajo wore beautiful yellow sari and left her hair open.He was just lost looking at her and with Laajo calling him he came to senses.After dinner they decided to go for a walk .They took a stroll on the road with hand in hand and noticed that there were in front of Laajo's place stopped and looked at her face,that was full moon day.In that moonlight her face looked more beautiful then ever.Hello guys,you are in front of my house and if the owner will see you she create a drama.You guys go inside and I will keep Aunty busy for some time.As they enter in to Laajo's place, Nikhil cupped her face with both his hands and kissed her.He started telling her ,how much he loves her and what made him fell for her.
Laajo kissed Nikhil on his forehead and the action of this left speechless.He doesn't want to miss this chance,he caught her by waist and kissed her softly on her sliky lips.They both heard a knock on the door and that was Ranjo,says Love birds it is time for you to part your ways.They decided to keep secret untill Laajo achieves her dream.


Note: sorry friends! I have been working on this from yesterday on wards and I know it is not that great but thought any way I will post it.By the way I am not a professional writer.I know it is a miss.All your suggestions welcome.😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Tulsi.. You are a great writer yaar.. Keep going.

Was so nice to imagin the wind and lajjos little shiver and nikhil giving her the comfort.. Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nicely done ,kaash ho jaata aise..but we are not that lucky. Instead of sweet kiss on forehead what did we get...babuaji got bumped by even Laajo's parents...must say it is wonderful OS thank you for sharing it here...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASH_99

Hey Tulsi.. You are a great writer yaar.. Keep going.

Was so nice to imagin the wind and lajjos little shiver and nikhil giving her the comfort.. Loved it

thank you Ash! For your encouraging words.Which I badly need😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sami01

very nicely done ,kaash ho jaata aise..but we are not that lucky. Instead of sweet kiss on forehead what did we get...babuaji got bumped by even Laajo's parents...must say it is wonderful OS thank you for sharing it here...

thankyou!Sami!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tulasi that was great and you're very good story teller. We needed this badly. It has been so long since we had such a romance in the show and this encouraging all the GD lovers. Thank you sharing with us and it's marvellous loved it👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZulekhaLLaKhil

Tulasi that was great and you're very good story teller. We needed this badly. It has been so long since we had such a romance in the show and this encouraging all the GD lovers. Thank you sharing with us and it's marvellous loved it👏👏👏

thank you Zulekha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A ray of hope lifted the spirits,
Still not happy,but have to take what we get.
I see the rainbow in the sky,
Where all the seven colors looked so happy,
Painted an arch of VIBGYOR,(rainbow colors)
Under the arch I see so many friends,
Enjoying each other's company,
My dear Friend's a pat on back is a great encouragement ,

This journey of writing ,started long time ago,
I will keep writing and I am not professional writer
I am not perfect but
This brings solace,comfort and joy to me,


They say sunset is an artist's pallet,
The colors are so intense,it became
A dream of the photographer,
Every time he want to capture ,
Something used to go wrong.
But never gave up.

This is life people come n go,
Only few people stick with us,
Memories we carry thru generations,
Friend's to night
I see all the colors of autumn,
Reds,yellows,oranges,green
And many more...

Enjoy the Mother Nature ,
The best place to find solace,
Thanks for all your love.




ziks thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Tulasi it was really good . Nice scene . 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I wish something like that would of happened but we are not that lucky but thank you anyway really nice what you written

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