ff suhani si ek larki : meray dil ki duaein hain, teri galliyan

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Aslamalaikum everyone...


I am yusra , you can all call me yush.. and I am here to start my very
first fanfiction on suhani si ek larki basically on yuvani... as yuvani are my new found love , I feel they
have potential. And Inshallah soon their couple would become the famous duo.
All the characters are same as they are in the show.. my
this piece of work is yuvani centric but it will also have Krishna soumya
track. And other angle too.

The difference will be suhani is just not AB fan but she
is fully filmy.


the title of this ff is inspired by one of my favourite
songs galliyan unplugged...


FF Suhani si ek larki : meray dil ki duaein hain , teri
galliyan


prologue

Chorus : pyar kia hai?


Soumya: hmmm (thinking mode) pyar...


Yuvraj: pyar ? (with attitude) all this definition and all toh ni pata, and
interested bhi nahi hoon janay mai. But one thing I know for sure, and that is
kay jisay mujhay pyar hoga wo dunia ki sabsay khubsurat larki hogi... beauty
personified


Lata: suhaniii betaaa...

Suhani turns around

Suhani: pyar .. (she thinks dreamily) surat say ni jo
seerat say hojaye usay kehtay hain pyar...


Yuvraj: bullshit! Mujhy har us cheez say pyar hai jo
khubsurat hai...


Soumya: (still thinking) well... Pyar... (she snaps
happily) yes pyar who hai jo aek jhatkay mai hojaye , yes usay kehtay hain
pyar.. exactly... (she told herself)


The screen divides in three portions
One side soumya smiling, in the middle yuvraj typing
something on his phone and on his left suhani dreamily revolving


Chorus: jinhay milna hota hai, toh kuch bhi hojaye woh mil
jatay hain.. jodiyan toh..

Suhani: jodiyan toh asmano mai banti hain(she blinks)
Soumya: par unhay milwana neechay walo ka kaam hota hai..

Yuvraj: rubbish ! mujhay kis say pyar hoga yeh mai khud
decide karon ga koi aur nahi..


Suhani laughed and threw her dupatta in the air..

Suhani: dur kahin asmanoo par hotay hain yeh saray
faislay.. kaun janay koi humsafar kab kaisay kahan milay...


The screen divides into two , on one side yuvraj shooking
his head and on the other suhani dancing..




On tv

"dekha aek khwab toh yeh silsalay howay
Dur tak nigahon mai hai gul khilay howay"

Suhani got up from the bed and start dancing on one of
his favourite actors , favourite films , favourite song..

Suhani: (while dancing send a flying kiss to tv) mwaah
Amitabh ji rekha ji kia nacha hai, kia gana hai, wah
(she resume to dance again, while suhanis dad, pankaj
came into the room but suhani didn't noticed as she was dancing, pankaj smiled
and went to television and switched it off which made suhani to instantly stop
and look around)
Suhani: papa yeh apnay kia kiya? Hum kitnay mazay say
nach rahay thay na apnay sara maza kirkira kar dia.. (she pouted)

Pankaj squeezed suhanis cheeks
Pankaj: suhani teri behn ki shadi hai na? aur tu yahan
nach rai hai.nachna par apni behn ki sagai mai . Teri ama ko pata chal gya na
toh khamkha dantay gi. Tunay toh jana tha na meethai ka order dainay keliye. Kal
engagement hai beta
Suhani bit her tongue and hit her head
Suhani: oh papa hum toh bhool hi gaye abhi jatay hain aur
abhi saray kaam nibta kay atay hain...
(suhani covered her face with her scarf and ran outside
on the road to stop a rikshaw, she sat in one and dialed her phone)

Suhani: soumu?

Here soumya's eyes got bigger when she heard suhanis
voice, she looked at Krishna who was standing infront of her and made a face to
just give her 2 minutes
Soumya: acha suhani ab tu gusa ku hai? Haan baba mai
bhool gai.. woh mai ghar pay hoon.. acha mai phonch jao gi tu fikar mat kar..
chal bye..

Soumya cut the call and turned around to see Krishna standing
not in a good mood, he turned the otherside angrily, soumya smiled and hugged
him from behind
Soumya: Krishna , ab tum ku khafa ho? Jab bhi suhani ka
phone ata hai tumhara mu itna utar ku jata hai?
Krishna: ku kay us suhani ki waja say tum sabko nahi bta
saktii . kay tum... (he turned to face her) kay hum..(he paused) kay hum pyar kartay hain.aek dosray say
Soumya smiled a little
Soumya: Krishna gusa mat ho. Tumhay pata hai.. mai akeli
thi suhani nay mray sath apni zindagi share ki hai wo meray liye bohat
important hai. Sach kahu toh wo meri family hai. Aur tum toh jantay ho na kay
uski aur tumhari bilkul ni banti. Thora wakt
do mai chahti hoon suhani bhi khush ho jab usay pata chalay kay tum humari
pasand ho . wo bhi tumhari izat karay aur ismay thora wakt lagay ga. Sai wakt
anay pay mai usay zaror bta doon gi tab tak chup chup kay milsaktay hain na.. ab
hasoo bhi kay tickle karu?
Krishna smiled : kia chup chup kay. Jab miltay hain toh
us madam suhani ka phone ajata hai ya wo khud tapak parti hai..
Soumya: tum is angry man look mai kafi acahy lagtay ho...
Both of them smiled...



Suhani was walking on the road , her face still covered
with her scarf...

Suhani: order bhi day diya.. abhi tak soumu ku ni aai yeh
larki bhi na..
She was about to go when she saw the shop infront of
petrol pump on fire.. and the people in panic.. suhanis eyes got bigger she saw
a guy throwing water buckets.. for one moment her life came to a still and she didn't
knew why.. the voice of the guy was
making her go numb... suddenly the wind started to blow... suddenly she
heard a kid cry from inside the shop. And shani stopped for non her attention
fully on the kid.. she ran and straight went in the shop which was heavily on
fire..

Yuvraj: hey you stop...
He shouted but it was late suhani has went inside... yuvraj
was about to go when sharad held his arm
Sharad: kia kar rahy ho guru. Pagal hogye ho? Kisi maha insan
nay kaha hai bus train aur larki kay peechay nahi bhagtay aek jati hai dosri
ati hai...
Yuvraj looked at sharad unbelievably
Yuvraj: shutup sharad. Tu pagal hai..
They were bickering when the kid came out of the shop
crying... sharad and yuvraj saw it
Yuvraj heart didn't knew why started to sink
Yuvraj: woh larki? Wh kahan reh gai? Kahin kuch
He was about to go when sharad again stopped him.this
time yuvraj threw his hand away
Yuvraj: tu chup chap idhr khara ho...
Yuvraj ran inside the shop skipping the fire that was
oozing... yuvraj stood at the start of the shop , his eyes searching for the girl
in pink
Yuvraj: hellooo? Kahan ho...

Suhani: bachaooo
Yuvraj turned around and saw the sight which made him
glued to his positition, suhani whose scarf caught fire.. she opened the scarf
which was covering her face , her hairs went open.. yuvraj saw it her hairs
blowing but he couldn't move.. yuvraj opened his mouth but couldn't utter a
word...suhani was moving with fright... She threw her scarf away... and saw a piece
of cloth took it covered her face again...
her eyes went on yuvraj who wasn't moving... suhani looked at a pillar
which was about to fall on the guy... suhani shouted...

Suhani: hatooo whaan say...
Suhani signaled with her hands to make him move... but
yuvraj wasn't able to do anything... suhani ran towards him and pushed him to the
other side which lead both of them to fall yuvraj beneath suhani and suhani
upon him. As soon as they hit the floor suhani became unconscious and yuvraj
came back to reality. Suhanihairs on yuvraj face.. he tucked her hair behind
her ear and saw her face.. she was average looking but why she was affecting
him so much? Why .. yuvraj shook his head
Yuvraj: no way... Uthooo...

He touched her face...
yuvraj got up and took the cloth again and covered suhani face.. took
her in his arms and went outside the shop... just to face soumya... who was crying
Soumya: suhaniii...
She came to yuvraj who was holding her..yuvraj mouthed
her name...
soumya: kia hogya meri suhani ko? Neechay utaroo isay...

yuvraj put suhani on the road and saw soumya
yuvraj thinking: she is beautiful
then his eyes went to suhani again and got stuck. He came
out of his trance again what was happening...
soumya shooked suhani who opned her eyes... soumya hugged
suhani
aoumya: thankgod tujhe hosh agaya.. merit oh jaan nikal gait
hi.. wo toh inka shukriya jo tujy bachaya...
soumya signaled towards yuvraj.. both yuvanis eyes met...

"kitnay door door hoon undono kay rastay
Miljatay hain jo banay ek dujy kay wastay"

The end..


Precap: suhani aur scooty ki kahani.. when scooty met
yuvraj birla's hoarse

ignore the mistakes...

*whoever want to get pmd just buddy me.. like and
comment..

Yush updating

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kishu81 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can you please right in English? Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kishu81

Can you please right in English? Thanks



ill try to give english translation from next time 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yusramazhar1



ill try to give english translation from next time 😊


Thanks dear coz I just understood about 70% of the words. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start Yush & I like the title, looking forward 4 the next parts! 😉

I really liked how u used the actual scene in ur story. I really liked their the dialogues with both Yuvi, Soumya & Suhani's definitions of love & of course the fight wala scene with Yuvani, now waiting 4 the scooty scene. 😃
Edited by Rishani7 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey yush, it was awesome, eagerly waiting for the other parts!!!! 😉
yusu1993 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rishani7

Nice start Yush & I like the title, looking forward 4 the next parts! 😉


I really liked how u used the actual scene in ur story. I really liked their the dialogues with both Yuvi, Soumya & Suhani's definitions of love & of course the fight wala scene with Yuvani, now waiting 4 the scooty scene. 😃


hugsss rish...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srutika

Hey yush, it was awesome, eagerly waiting for the other parts!!!! 😉



thankyou will update soon

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