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ammukuty

@ammukuty

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Ayyo anithu presentla ennappa irukku 😲 am afraid and eagerly waiting to know present position please konjam quick a update pannunga asap.

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

aarambame third gear... wonderful.. exciting and nice :)

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Devi

@Devino

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

👏👏👏

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No words anithu...

Past, Present nu summa kalakureenga pa, Karthi always smart & sweet dhan😳

waiting for the next part pa

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Devino
👏👏👏
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No words anithu...

Past, Present nu summa kalakureenga pa, Karthi always smart & sweet dhan😳

waiting for the next part pa

Thanks friends..Will update part2 today.

Present and Past kalandhu irrukum for atleast 10-15 episodes..Konchaam confuse aagamaaa padingaa😆😆

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veda

@sizzling78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow anithu a big hug to u 🤗

yennama feel panni story yezhudirikeenga 👏👏 chance illa 😉

nice to see KR like this in a different way apart from the original plot 😳😳

yenapa X - MEN effectah ingayuma pastum futureum mari mari vara pogudha hmmm varatum varatum 😆😆😆

but andha past yennavah irukkum 😲 adhanaala futurela yenna probs vara pogudhunu nenaicha thaan confusedah irukku 😕

Edited by sizzling78 - 11 years ago

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Mathi

@mathimathi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice start Anithu...waiting for next...

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Part 2:

Present..

Bus Driver:Karthik Sir...office vandiruchu..

Karthik:Time ponnadhey theriyala..Chaaa romba time agiruchey..Already it is 10.00AM..I need to go in fraction of second to my Cabin..

Vishnu:Dei Karthik..Ennadaaa...ingaaa oruthaaan...ivalavu periyaaa uruvam...irruken...You are like as though no one in the world..Ennada..Pastaaa nenachu paathiyaaa..

Karthik:Unkitaaa eppo pessa ennaku time ilaaa..I have an important meeting with a client in next 15mins..We will talk after 12.30PM..

Vishnu:No Problem daa..nee tension aagamaaa po...appramaaa pesikkalam..

Lakshmi:Ennadaa karthik ivalavu tensionaaa poraaan..Any problem..

Vishnu:Hmm..ilaaa..Raji two years kku appram indhaa Chennai OMR Branchkku transfer agi vaaraanu Karthik kitaaa sollamnu paathaaa..two days aaa naanum try panreeen solla mudiyala lakshmi..

Lakshmi:Raji kkum karthik ingaa work pannraaa matter theriyadhu laaa..

Vishnu:Lakshmi..office laaa inimey nalaaa romantic scenes..Fight scene..possessiveness scenes..kankolaaa kaatchiyaaa irukaaapogudhu..Nalla time pass dhaan..

Lakshmi:Avalavu periyaaa fight kku appram avangaa romance ellam chanceae ilaaa vishnu..

Vishnu:Lakshmi unnaku Karthik-Raji aaa namma Ciber Tech bangalore branch laaa irundhu theriyumaaa..Enna oru 2 yrsaaa unnaku theriyum..Ennaku Karthik paathi theriyum..adaavidaa..Raji odaaa character patthiyum therium..Ellam..varaporaaa days/months laa theriyum parru.,.

Lakshmi:Vishnu ennaku oru client deliverables work irruku..We will meet in lunch..Bye daa..

Vishnu:Ok Lakshmi continue..

It is 12:30PM..Karthik room is in third floor and food court is in tenth floor..He started to switch the lift..

Karthik(Mind voice):Indhaa ciberaaa katunavanukku arivae ilaaa..Endhaaa foolaavadhu tenth floorlaaa food court veppanaaa..

Rekha:Hi Karthik..Enna panraaa..

Karthik:Liftukitaaa enna pannuvaanga..thanniyaaa kudipaanga..edho kekanumnu edhukku kekuraaa..😆😆😆

Rekha:Karthik unnaku softaaa pesaa theriyadhu..

Vishnu and Lakshmi comes there..

Vishnu:Ennada problem..

Rekha:Vishnu naan solren..As usual dhaan..summa enna panraa ingaa nu dhaan ketaen..Adhukku poi...kovamaaa agitaaan..

Lakshmi:Rekha unnaku dhaan Karthik paathi theriyumlaaa..

Rekha:Thats ok Lakshmi..Seri bye karthik and vishnu..Time for me to have lunch..Catch you guys later..

Vishnu:Ennadaa idhu..neee two yearskku minnadi eppadi irundhaaa..Karthik naaa..Cool...nee kovakaranaaa irukradhu unnado attitude..but eppidi harshaaa maruvaanu we never expected..Enna moraikuraaa..

Karthik:I just dont want to talk about my past and what happened before two years..Ella girlsumm...ambalaingalaa...hurt pannaa porandhavangaaa..Evalavu nambikkai koduthalum..namalaa kaikaluvi vitturuvaanga..Ennaku vittupoiruchu daaa..I am so frustrated..

Vishnu:Seri daa..thappu dhaan..Raji aaa unnala marakkamudiyalaaa..othuko daa..Adhu oru misunderstanding daaa..Ellaaam seriagidum..Neee endaaa..raji melaaa irukuraa kadupulaaa..ellaaam girlsaayum..thappaa..oru kanakku pottu..oru circleaa irukuraaa..

Lakshmi:Enna karthik idhu..Neee eppidi irundhaaa..Once upon a time..girls used to drool over you..Raji pannadu thappu dhaaan..But we never knew what really happened..

Karthik:Lakshmi...un melaaa ennaku deep friendship of what i have for vishnu iruku..But ungaa rendu perum thaviraaa..Yaaraum...naaan nambaaa virumbalaa..So please..dont open the topic of raji..I just dont want to hear her name..

Vishnu's(Mind voice):Saami...Raji aa veraaa..indhaa floor kku vara sollitomae..Ennayum latchuaayum..indhaaa Komban kitaa irundhum...andhaaa Kumki kitaa irundhum kaapaathu..

Lakshmi:Vishnu angaaa paarudaaa..yaarunu..

Vishnu:Yaaru...edavadhu new figureaaa..

Lakshmi:Erumaaa..Raji daaa..Sethom..

Vishnu:Vaaa..Latchu...nadandhey 10th floor kku egirulam...Ivangaaa.eppo sandaaa poduvaanga..appram..Romance pannunga..Loosungaaa..Vaa.Vaa..

Karthik Turning Back and speaking to himself:Ennada vishnu..suddenaaa silentaaa irukeenga..

Raji:Karthik...

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Karthik:Yaru neenga..I dont know you..

Raji:Karthik...Naaan raji karthik..Unnoda raji..

Karthik:Ennaku rajinnu yaarum theriyadhu..

Raji:Karthik..nee innum edhayum marakalayaaa..Unnakaga dhaan after two years kku appram ingaa transfer vaangitu vandiruken..Please forgive me Karthik..

Karthik Goes inside the lift..Raji too enters..

Karthik:Oru vaati sonna puriyadhu..Nee enaa losaaa..Oruthaan..ivalavu ignore panreen..Sutti Sutti enkitaayae varaaa..

Raji:Ennaku urimai irruku karthik..

Karthik:Enna sonaaa..

Raji holds karthik hands so firmly..

Raji:Karthik..Please da...

Karthik unable to ignore her..Raji has a great influence on him.His hands becomes hot.Suddenly a sound from lift..Lift has struck in middle..Some lift problem..

Karthik:Vidree kaiyaaa..

Raji:Karthik..lift stop agiruchu..Bayamaa irruku..

Karthik murmers to himself:Ayyo kadavulae..morning laa irundhu time seriulaaa..Eppo lift veraaa stop agiruchu..Evaa koodaa irukuraaa ovaru minutes uum..Karthik...Control da..Control..

Raji:Enna yosikuraaa..

Karthik:Nee vandaa neraaam..lift kooda struck agiruchu..

Raji:Karthik..

Karthik:Eppo edhukku nerungi varaaa..

Raji:Unnaku dhaan enaaa pidikadhu laaa..Appram edhukku tension aguraaa..

Karthik:Nee ennodaa edhireee..Ennoda kadhalaaa..konnavaa..I am just least bothered about you..

Raji:Karthik..Ennaku unaaa romba pidikum..Neee rombaa maritaaa..Unnoda beard eppo ilaaa..Eppodhaan oru smartaanaaa oru IT guy madiri irukaaa..

Karthik:I dont need your compliments..Suddenly again a sudden comes from the lift..

Raji:Karthik..romba bayamaa irukku..Shall i hold your hands please..

Karthik:Nee ennaa thodaavae kudadhu..You dont have any rights on me..

Raji:Karthik..enna oru..strangerkku help panradhaaa nenachukoo.Please..

Karthik is silent..

Raji comes here karthik and holds his hand tightly..

Raji's(Mind Voice):Karthik..Unnaku naan eppidi solli puriyavekka poren..My life time mistake i have done to you..Nee unnoda kadhalaaa sollum bodhu unna naaan purichukalaa..Eppo two yearsaaa unaaa pirchirukum bodhu..I am so crazy..I am Crazily in love with you..I am hear to make you understand..what happened that day..I am here..Naan unnoda raji karthik...

Karthik slowly close his eyes and firmly holds raji's hands more tightly too..

Karthik's(Mind Voice):Raji..again why you came in my life..I am trying day by day to forget you..Each second..unnoda mudal mutaaam..Unnoda mudal..sirrupu..Unnoda mudal kovam..Unnoda mudal saree..Ellam enna poraati edhukudhu..Naan yen girls naaa verukanum..Ellaam unnala dhaaan..I wont loose my stand..You can never come to me..I promise myself..

Raji suddenly hugs him..

Karthik:Raji..vidu...I dont know what will i do..

Raji:Karthik..Nee ennavenaaa think panniko..I was missing this hug so badly for two years..

Karthik(to himself):Even me raji..Each second Your touch is so passionate..and i missed this so badly..Unnoda indhaaa..touch...ennaku venum..But..I cannot forget..Anything..Till the end..Karthik sternly removes her from his body and she fells down..

Raji is shocked..

Raji:Karthik..nee ennadhaan enna insult pannalum..i will never give up..

Karthik:Raji palli...

Raji:Engaa karthik...

Karthik:Dho unnoda duppataa laaa..He was enjoying raji getting scared..

Raji gets tensed and pulls herself to karthik..

Raji:Karthik...I miss you...

Raji kiss him on his neck and her sweet ravlon lip mark on his neck which can be clearly seen..Lift comes back to normal..

Seeing KR vishnu inside semaaayaaa smiling and laughing , giving hifi to Lakshmi..

Vishnu:Vaa daa..ellaam nallabadiyaaa overaaa..

Karthik:ellam unnoda velaayaaa..Indha madiri velaakku nameae veraaa..

Lakshmi:Mamaa dhanae karthik..

Raji:Adhey adhey...

Vishnu:Snegidhigal...onnu koditaiyengaa paaa..

Lakshmi notices lip march on k's neck and whispers to Vishnu..

Vishnu:Machaaan...kalakitaa polaaa..

Karthik:Enna solraadhaaa..

Vishnu:Lakshmi unnoda purse laaa small mirror irukaaa..

Lakshmi:Irukae..

Vishnu:Karthik thambi..paaru paaa.unnoda kaluthulaaa..edho redaaa iruku..oru velaaa..bloodaaa..

Lakshmi:Blood eppo daa..lip mark ooda irukum..

Vishnu:Amaa laaa..Karthik ennakum solli kodudaaa..

Karthik:Fine..rombaa nallairuku..You people are making fun of me..Ungalukku ennoda valli..avamanam..ennoda frustration..dhrogam puriyadhu..Naaan edhayum marakka mataen..neenga yaarum ennaku thevayae ilaaa..Bye...

Raji:Sorry vishnu..ennalaa dhaan ellam..

Vishnu:Raji ungalukku theriyadhu..indha two yearsaaa karthik was so crazy about you..ungalaa marakalaaa..Ennaku theriyum..Neenga pannadhum thappu dhaan..Seri past is past..koncham time kodungaa.Karthik romba kovakaraaan..sensitive veraa..manasulaaa irukradhaaa othukaaa mataaan..We will all help you too..Dont worry..

Lakshmi:Yes raji..we both are there for you two..

Vishnu:serupadi..vettukuttu confirm..adhanae lachu..

Lakshmi:Frauduu..

RVL laughs and goes to food court..

Precap:

KR are nominated as the best employees of Ciber..KR struck in rain..Stay tuned for more turns and twist..

Edited by anithu - 11 years ago

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Adade,sis...romba nanna iruku update...besh besh.😛..

adhana parthen,karthikum,kovathukum otrumai misss aguthennu😆...ippa vanthuruchula...

aiyoo...vishnu...semaya comedy panran.😆..

KR scene...romba alaga iruku...rendu perum manasukulla avlavu kathal kotti kidaku😳...

vishnuthan antha lift struck aanathuku kaaranama...kedi payathan😉...

karthiku en ivalavu vali,raji appadi enna pannita...ponnugala verukara alavuku ethuku kovam