FF: Naya Rang - upd chapter 3 pg 4

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sfarazi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: fraser
beutifully penned..
i guess this is the apt of excellence here and a applause for the story the way you written with proper closed loops

Thank you Fraser! This means a lot 😊
I'm not much of a creative writer but I'm trying. Please do keep reading and commenting in the future 😃

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Mohima

@mastaTmohi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Shegs enjoying your touches to the naya rang!! Do update soon!! 😃 😃

Edited by mastaTmohi - 11 years ago

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sfarazi

@sfarazi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6" color="#ff0066">Shegs enjoying your touches to the naya rang!! Do update soon!!😃😃</font>

Aww thanks Mohi 😊
Sure thing! 😃

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sfarazi

@sfarazi

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Mrityunjay is getting flashes of Tara but can't seem to remember her!!!!!🤔

Not only that but he remembers her mole on her neck as well!!!!😊

Kalavati found Mrityunjay and gave him a new identity and even told him Aditi is his daughter!!!

Ab pata nahi Tara usse kaise dhundegi!!!!😕

Hmmm yehi toh baat hai...kaise milegi Tara aur MJ? 😉
I couldn't help myself so I added in Tara's mole! I really want the CVs to bring back the mole!