FF: Naya Rang - upd chapter 3 pg 4 - Page 3

No one liked it? 😛

Originally posted by: fraser

this is exactly what we are lookin for in the show..
looking forward for this story...
update soon

updated 😊

gr8 update! :)

full comment mai ghum ke aane ke baad karungi.. :P going to the bustop within an hour :)

continue soon shegs! and plz, thora aur lamba update kiya karo!! :D luv u! Xxx

Aah u finally updated 😊 I love the first paragraph in this chapter . U penned it so beautifully especially Tara planting a Kiss on MJ 's mole the Two scenes I always wished to see in the show 1) MJ kissing Tara's beauty spot on her neck and Tara kissing MJ's mole on his nose.i don't see any of that happening in the show 😔 so I am glad u used one of my fav scenario's 😳 I seriously love ur writing shegs u give importance to all those tiny moments .i wish the CV's had slowed down a little bit and have shown all those small family moments with Pari.MJ 's anger and frustration that Aditi has been kidnapped and at the same time Tara's restlessness was so well written . Now the actual story begins .can't wait to read the next part . Please update as soon as u can without delay.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

I loved the first scene where Tara wakes up in Mrityunjay's arms!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Tara kissing the mole on his nose was so cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I always wanted to see this scene!!!

Mrityunjay's anger and frustration and Tara's dismay and helplessness was very well portrayed!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Tara has been unconcious for a whole month but where is she now??😕 😕 😕 😕

Your story makes much more sense than the serial and I am glad you just took a leap of one month!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It is more logical that Tara would be weak and would faint again after coming around instead of walking around as was shown in the show!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

The real mystery begins now!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: ...Oyshee...

gr8 update! :)

full comment mai ghum ke aane ke baad karungi.. :P going to the bustop within an hour :)

continue soon shegs! and plz, thora aur lamba update kiya karo!! :D luv u! Xxx

Originally posted by: Ananya80

Aah u finally updated 😊 I love the first paragraph in this chapter . U penned it so beautifully especially Tara planting a Kiss on MJ 's mole the Two scenes I always wished to see in the show 1) MJ kissing Tara's beauty spot on her neck and Tara kissing MJ's mole on his nose.i don't see any of that happening in the show 😔 so I am glad u used one of my fav scenario's 😳 I seriously love ur writing shegs u give importance to all those tiny moments .i wish the CV's had slowed down a little bit and have shown all those small family moments with Pari.MJ 's anger and frustration that Aditi has been kidnapped and at the same time Tara's restlessness was so well written . Now the actual story begins .can't wait to read the next part . Please update as soon as u can without delay.

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Loved the first scene , specially Tara -MJ's cute moment...I always wanted to see this scene...Tara planted a kiss on MJ's mole...!!! :)

Beautifully written each & every scenes, the way you described Tara-MJ's expressions, their frustration, anger is beautifull...

& jahaan se Cvs ne kachda kiya tha show mei...that scene you executed in really a nice & interesting way...

The real mystery begins now...

Pls update as soon as u can...thank you for the long update... :)