~Rishbala SS-Fanaa~(Part 6 updated-Pg 25) 01/09

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Hi people I haven't visited forum for ages. I am Richa. I am trying to write something on Rishbala though I have started this story on Zaya also. Its inspired from movie fanaa. Tell me if I should continue...

Fanaa...
"Tere dil mein meri saanson ko panaah mil jaye ... tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaye"

"Pani, Pani"
"Papa he is waking up!!"
"Madhu beta bring some water for him"
"Ji "

Rishabh could not assume what they both were saying. What he could hear was only voices which was confusing him. He slowly opened his eyes, still not able to properly see. A girl was standing in front of him with a glass of water. She gave the glass to the person sitting beside him.

"Here, have water"

The man made him sit and offered him water. Rishabh was not able to sit properly. After drinking water again he dozzed back to sleep.
"Papa", the girl was confused.
"Don't worry beta, he will soon wake up. Lets leave him and let him sleep."
"Ji "
After an hour.
Rishabh again woke up to find that same old man sitting beside him.
"Captain Rishabh Kundra"
"Huh?"
"How are you Jawaan", the man sadi enthusiastically.
"Fin..fine", Rishabh was confused. He looked and examined the place he was staying in. It was a room made of wood. There was a window in front of him from that he could see the snowfall.

"You are at my home", the man said smiling "My daughter found you injured..." Rishabh had forgotten that he had had bullet on his right shoulder, but now that the man had made him remember, the pain was again terrible. His head was also paining a bit...he had hit a stone remembered Rishabh.

"Great job...you all do huh! Sacrificing life for the nation. Brave thing!", the man opened her mouth to say more when the same girl entered. Rishabh could not see her face properly as she was standing at the door with some things in her hand, also blocking half of her face. It was clothes she was handing, assumed Rishabh.

"Papa? Uncle wants to talk to you", the girl left saying that.
All Rishabh wanted was to see the face behind this beautiful voice!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX
Part 1-Above
Edited by sarcastic_teen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just read it dear it is awsmmm BTW Fanna is 1 of my fab movie...Plz cont soon nd pn me sending u buddy request plz accept me
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Originally posted by: noiseygirl

Just read it dear it is awsmmm BTW Fanna is 1 of my fab movie...Plz cont soon nd pn me sending u buddy request plz accept me

Glad u liked it!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww... the story looks awesome... plz continue soon..
Thanks for pm
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thnks😃
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Originally posted by: k.atrina75

Wowww... the story looks awesome... plz continue soon..
Thanks for pm

thnks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have never seen that movie completely!!! Always watched it after he starts staying in Kajol's home... ROFL!!!
So,your Story will help me to imagine the rest...
I really liked it Richu!! You write so well yaa... Don't forget to PM me...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous! Please continue soon and pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start ...quite intriguing...! 😃
Update soon hun...but i hope tera lappy ab tak hospitalised nahi hai 😆

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