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Ok i always wanted to read your current track works. and here it is.
The fact that it was on current track captured me so much and plus the way you have pit it up on paper. aww!! so good.
it was uber cute and sweet yet simple, keeping both the cuteness and the intensity of Swaron alive.
From the starting, to their monologues and their convo, everything was very well visualized and amazingly put to words.
I liked how u cleared each and every misunderstanding between them.
Then the idea of sharon to complete their camping date and chai banana with help of swayam😉
The shayari! aww so good. loved how you put it up.
The best part was sharon asking for her payal. dono! 😆
All in one it was superb. and i have already said this but u r one hell of a writer dude! continue writing!!!!!!!!😊
Love
Shreya
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