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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Sweet os!!

Swaron back to one! yippee

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Abay

@ikki215

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -spongy-
i really loved the OS
it was swaron-ish
like too cute
all those sweet scenes and the end ☺️
superb yaar !!

and it was so well written !!
too good 👍🏼
beautiful OS

Thank you so much...:)

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Un res. .

It was so simple n cute os. .
Liked d simplicity of dis os. .
Very beautifully written. .
First attempt really very well done. .
Keep writing more. .

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

that was sweet and care amazing os... loved it

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome os..
superb plan by rey..
n d way u executed d os was brilliant..
sharon's coming to swayam's place n he getting lost in her n then remembers her asthma was well penned..
d way sharon proposed her love n made swayam realize him being coward n not listening to wat sharon was trying to say al d while..
loved d end.. again a proper camp date wow.. nice..

ps: hope something like this happens in show... hmmm *big sigh*..

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

i m speechless yr...
Pls its a req do write more on current track pls
N about ths one i luvd it
Rey ka plan work kr gaya...n thn swaron reunion in rain...
I luvd every bit of ths os superbly writen yr...

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nidhi

@nidhi1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice os

loved the content

waiting to read more from you

kash epi mein bhi aisa hi ho

kya pata cvs tumhara os churakar

d3 mein dal de

and meri pyaari si

sans dii

aise ache kaam karte rehna

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Abay

@ikki215

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Suni-
Amazing dear...

thank you so much..:)

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Abay

@ikki215

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: bhavz_vrushan
i m speechless yr...
Pls its a req do write more on current track pls
N about ths one i luvd it
Rey ka plan work kr gaya...n thn swaron reunion in rain...
I luvd every bit of ths os superbly writen yr...

thank you ! i will definately write on the current track soon.I will be writing a SS on Swayam and Sharon's patch up and 5th wish soon !:)

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Abay

@ikki215

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: vaishu88
awesome os..
superb plan by rey..
n d way u executed d os was brilliant..
sharon's coming to swayam's place n he getting lost in her n then remembers her asthma was well penned..
d way sharon proposed her love n made swayam realize him being coward n not listening to wat sharon was trying to say al d while..
loved d end.. again a proper camp date wow.. nice..

ps: hope something like this happens in show... hmmm *big sigh*..

Thank yooou so much..i didnt do full justice in showcasing the emotions since i was writing casually , but after seeing such wonderful and motivating comments,i will next time definitely give my best ! :)

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