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Lovely OS it was a simple adorable but an honest attempt at writing..😊.
I liked how you started off with their monologues.. Then Swayam's outburst in front of rey and then Sharon's confession everything was a plaesing read for me.. I liked seeing Swayam care about her health..
Then the payal chor moment was fun to read too..😳.
All in all a good read keep up the good work..😊
I liked how you started off with their monologues.. Then Swayam's outburst in front of rey and then Sharon's confession everything was a plaesing read for me.. I liked seeing Swayam care about her health..
Then the payal chor moment was fun to read too..😳.
All in all a good read keep up the good work..😊
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