Arshi SS: I LIKE THE WAY IT HURTS-Interlude 6/8/14 pg 74

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laksh65

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

awesome update loved it thanks for pm

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Thank you Chaverah for this wonderful gift...

Buddy I love it...

Cheers!

Sorry dearies I am late and also because the update is small.

But somehow I am not feeling up to the mark and couldn't manage to think or type more than this. I promise to update Part -5(B) soon.

Okay now I want to thank you Chaverah one more time for your huge support and believe me buddy I am already getting positive responses of your effort.

And I believe all the reader here are already know who Chaverah is, because it is impossible to miss her beautiful work and if you have then here is the link of her index, a must read: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3810819&PID=95851619&#p95851619

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Thank you all guys for your support and lovely comments as I never thought that any of my work will reach 90 likes and I am overwhelmed to say the least

Thank you

sonakshimehta29 welcome aboard darling. hope you find this story as interesting as it goes.

now here is the update, forgive me in advance for type errors and mistakes, didn't find the energy to recheck.

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Edited by _Oorja_ - 9 years ago

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piggie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Yet another beautiful update.!

Her words .. OK m.speechless.

Continue soon.

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fan95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Loved the update. i like this Khushi very much.

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

RES

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Gosh yaar, its too..hilarious?! Am I supposed to feel that way? Seriously Moumitha! You rocked it baby..

Yeah the update was short, but it had everything what needs to be there..

So the change is visible now? To the family? Well they cant expect Khushi to be a door mat for them forever do they? And yeah, this is one thing I really hated about in IPK.. I mean, though it was cruel on Arnav's part of marrying Khushi the way he did, looking past the facade of that ruthless man, we see a insecure lover, a broken man, a lost child and a devastated brother.. But the family? They worshiped Khushi till an hour back, I guess and suddenly she became the chudail? I mean, she cant get married all to herself, can she? There had to be the other person, and that was the captain of their home, whom none of them obviously couldn't raise thier fingers on.. And so the entire rage and loath was transferred to Khushi? I really hated that part, when they couldn't see the broken woman, the confused girl and the shattered soul...

To be honest, I'm looking forward to see how the Khushi in ILTWIH would react to the entire family.. And Jesus! True aint it? Unbelievable family yaar!! They do keep barging into his room whenever they want though I seriously doubt if he ever stepped into any other room except for his Di's (that too rarely).. Bang on regarding that, buddy! I literally laughed when she pointed it out so casually and Arnav couldn't contradict to it, give that its one hell of an embarrassing fact!

A new bed?! Hmm.. I like it.. But more than that, it thrills to see the explanation Khushi gave for the new make-shifts.. And Arnav? Well, the man needs to see what he forced his Love to become.. I honestly dont know how he'l cope up but I do think he needs this reality check...

And writerji.. Kamaal karthe ho app!! Badhai ho behna, badhai ho!!!

Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 11 years ago

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Awesome prt
Loved it 😛

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

First of all ..m gonna gv a bigg kissi to chaverah fr introducing ur infex n dis story to us..m speechless reading dis!!
Khushi ki judwa sis hai ye..sacchi na..ye uski sis hai..bataya ni tha show mein uski koi twin sis b hai..m speechless buss!!
😲 😲