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Part 26:

Antara still couldn't believe in her eyes. Raghu is actually over dere. She was feeling Happy wen she first saw him afterall she was seeing him after 1 week nd she only knows hw hard dis 1 week for her nd today he's here in front of her. Just den she heard her Mother's Voice.

Geeta: Antara, Bachha u came?

Antara: ya Mom, but Raghu (she said while pointing towards him)

Geeta: oh Raghu! He came just 2 hrs before only.

Antara: 2 hrs Before?

Raghu: yes Sweetheart (he said while coming closer to her nd puts his Arm around her shoulders) Afterall I was missing u so much so I thought of giving u a Surprise. Hope u like it

Antara(with a fake smile): ya Ofcourse (she was hell irritated wen Raghu calls her sweetheart but somewhere was happy also)

Geeta: awww u both make such a good couple. Antara u must be tired na. I'll go nd make a Coffee for u.

Raghu: Mom y r u bothering so much.

"mom" an amuzed expression came on Antara's face

Raghu: I mean, I'll make coffee for my Sweetheart. May I?

Antara(with irritation): No thanx (den changed her tone) I mean Raghu tum thak gaye hoge. Mom coffee bana dengi.

Raghu: Not at all sweetheart hw can I get tired for u.

Geeta: Antara, Raghu itna keh raha hai to bana lene do coffee. Raghu u make me remind of Antara's Dad. He was also like u.

Antara: Mom pls Nw don't get emotional.

Raghu: Wats d Problem in getting emotional Antara. Well leave it I'll go nd make coffee for u nd for Mom also.

Antara: But

Raghu: I know Mom doesn't like black Coffee nd she takes 2 cubes of sugar in it.

Geeta: that was really so sweet of u Raghu.

Raghu: anytime Mom.

By saying dis he left for Kitchen

Geeta: u knw wat Antara? I was so worried till morning about both of u but nw Seeing of u like dis I m relieved. U both really love each other so much.

Antara smiled faintly to this.

Geeta: Acha u go nd help Raghu in d kitchen he may need u. I m going to ur Nanimaa's Room.

Antara: But Mom.

Geeta didn't listened nd goes to another Room. antara has no choice but to go to the Kitchen nd she found it rite also as she can easily talk to Raghu over dere nd ask him about all dis. she too headed towards d Kitchen

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At the kitchen Raghu was making Coffee for her. he knews that Antara must be very much irritated at his dis kind of Behaviour but he didn't care for it nw as he knows that Antara's anger will not last for long because she too has missed him badly like he did. Suddenly Antara came to the Kitchen furiously. She looked at Raghu who was quietly making d Coffee. His behaviour was so cool like nothing has happened.

Antara(irritated): Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Raghu: Antara, I know that u have missed me so much but dis much dat I dnt know

Antara: Means?

Raghu: I mean tumne mujhe itna miss kiya that u had lost ur sense of hearing nd Seeing. I mean I told outside that I m going to make Coffee nd wat else do u expect me while standing at the kitchen. I'll not do swimming over here

Antara: Very Funny Raghu but unfortunately it didn't make me laugh.

Raghu: I can see dat.

Antara: I mean to say tum mere ghar me kya kar rahe ho?

Raghu: Y? cant a son-in-law come to meet his Mother-in-law?

Antara: Son-in-law?

Raghu: Ya. See wen we'll get Married then I'll become her son-in-law only na.

Antara: o really! R we? Because our engagement was fake na as u put it dat day. To fir kyun kar rahe ho yeh nautanki

Raghu stopped for a while but den decided to handle it in a cool manner.

Raghu: Antara, main Nautanki kaise kar sakta hai wo department to tumhara hai na. sweetheart (he winks)

Antara: Wat? Sweetheart? Nw wats dis? y r u calling me sweetheart? U have called in front of mom also

Raghu: y? u didn't like it wen I called u Sweetheart

He said while looking into her eyes which makes Antara lost into his eyes once again. Ofcourse she likes it wen he called her sweetheart but den she regains herself nd looked at the other side.

Antara: Raghu Pls. its no use of talking like dis nw. I really dnt care. Nt after wat u said

She was about to say further wen she heard a scream from Raghu.

Raghu: Aaahhh!!!!

Antara: Raghu Wat happen?

She noticed dat Raghu is shaking both of her hands in air as He has got burnt by the utensil he used for making Coffee as he tried to hold it with his hand instead of holding it with some cloth.

Antara: Raghu kya hua? Dikhao mujhe

Raghu: Antara Relax! Nothing as Happened.

Antara: O ya? I can see dat (she said while holding his hands)

Raghu: Antara. Trust me I m fine

Antara: Will u just Shut up nw. let me do my work.

She quickly take out an Ice cube from the Fridge nd started rubbing it in his Hand where he has got burnt to avoid any Bristle. Raghu looked at her face, he saw the restlessness in her eyes. the way she was rubbing ice on his Hand has showed hw much she loved him. Her eyes has reflected her love for him.

"And she says dat she didn't care about me" He thought in his mind

Antara: Just wait I'll bring d ointment. Dnt u dare to move from here. (she warned like Raghu was a kid)

She quickly get the ointment nd comes back to Raghu. She took his hand nd started applying the ointment on it. Raghu closes his eyes as d ointment was causing a burning sensation over his hand. Antara noticed Raghu's pain so she started blowing softly over dere so that he couldn't feel day burning sensation. Raghu opens his eyes nd saw Antara's concern. It seems that she'll cry at any moment. His wounds were paining her more den it pains him. He smiled at her care

Antara: Akal naam ki cheez hai ki nahi tumhare ander. Waise to har kaam soch samajh k karte ho, to itni akal nahi aayi ki garam bartan ko aise hath se nahi uthana chahiye. Ab jal gaye na. Raghu,Hw can u be so immature?

She said nd lifts up her head to look at him nd saw him smiling

Antara: Nw wats so funny in dat which makes u smile. Do u think that I m a cracking a Joke over here? Do U have any idea hw much it ached me wen I see u in pain. I.

Den she stopped realizing wat did he said

Raghu: Ruk kyun gayi Antara?Bolo na

Antara: Main dawa rakh ke aati hoon

She was about to leave wen Raghu grabbed her wrist nd pulled her close to him. His one hand was on her waist while other hand is holding her hand. Antara tries to free herself from him but failed. She looked into his Deep, intense eyes full of love nd Passion. She can feel his warm breath on her face. Their lips were just mere inches apart. Antara found herself melting in him.

Raghu(Slowly): Bolo Antara? Y it ached u wen I m in pain wen u say u dnt care for anything? Den y ur eyes were in tears wen u were applying ointment at my wounds? Bolo Antara kyun?

Antara slowly frees herself from him nd turned her back to him nd closes her eyes. she don't know how to answer Raghu. She has d answer of all his questions but something in her is stoping her.

Antara: chale jao yahan se Raghu. U'll get nothing from here. Pls go.

Raghu was stunned to listen dis but he decided not to give up. He turned her towards him

Raghu: Chala jaoo? Kyun? Because I have hurted u that day or because u cant control urself in my presence?

Antara: wat?

Raghu: Yes Antara admit it, admit it that u loose ur self control wen I m around u. thatsy u ran away from me na.

Antara: that's not true nothing happened to me wen u r around me.

Both of dem knows that wat Antara has just said was not true but still antara said dat she don't know y? Even Raghu couldn't understand y Antara has said dat wen he knows that She loves him too but den he thinks wat Arman has said to him that she has been hurted by the person to whom she loved d Most so deciced to handle the matter calmly

Raghu: oh really? Den y did u run away dat day wen I confessed my feelings for u. u straight away came to Amritsar. Didn't even care for telling me. Just left a letter nd came over here. Do u have any idea hw much it hurts to me?

Antara: Do u have any idea hw much would it hurt to me wen u did all dat. Wen u said dat everything was fake. Raghu the moment u said dat, everything was finished then nd there only.

Raghu held her by her shoulders nd pulled her closer to her

Raghu: I admit I have done a mistake nd I regret it, I should not have said dat. I know I have hurted u but do u realize hw much u r hurting me nw by staying away from me, by running away from me like dis?

Antara was standing speechless she knows that she's hurting Raghu. Raghu left her shoulders nd looked at her

Raghu: Antara it didn't took u 24 secs. To leave me but one thing I promise u nw nd here dat u'll be going wid me to Mumbai within next 24 Hrs.

Antara who was standing speechless has came into senses wen she heard Raghu

Antara: Wat did u just said?

Raghu(smiling proudly): Yes u heard me rite. 24 Hrs. just within 24 Hrs. u'll be going to Mumbai wid me

Antara: oh really? Aur tumhe lagta hai ki main tumhari baat manoongi?

Raghu: ofcourse Manoongi

Antara: Nice Dream Raghu. But unfortunately dis will never come true. Because main kahin bhi nahi jaoongi.

Raghu: Tum zaroor chalogi Antara. It's a challenge. NAIK's Challenge

Antara: den listen Mr. Raghu Naik u r going to lose dis challenge because Antara Kaul never loses any challenge.

Raghu: Wo to waqt batayega Antara. Dekhte hai kisme zyada dum hai. tumhari naraazgi me ya mere pyaar mein?

Antara: We'll see.

By saying dis she left the kitchen leaving Raghu behind Smiling.

Raghu(to himself): Kitni bhi koshish kar lo Antara but is Baar yeh Dilwala aoni dulhaniya lekar hi yaha se jayega. Wow! I m speaking like any romantic hero. Good going Raghu.(den he tooks out d ring from his Pocket) I promise u Antara I'll make u wear dis Ring once again. Dats a promise

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In Sanjeevani Arman was at locker Room nd Shilpa came running to him nd hugged him tight. She was so Happy that she didn't realize wat she is doing. Arman felt amuzed at her dis kind of Behaviour but den hugged her back.

Shilpa(still hugging him): omg Arman I m so happy today?

Arman: I can see dat. But wats make u so happy dat u r hugging me?

Shilpa realizes wat she has done she quickly backed out with embarrassment. Arman cursed himself for saying dis.

Shilpa: Sorry Actually I was so happy that I didn't realize.

Arman: I can see dat. Wat Happen? Did India Won d Match?

Shilpa: uggghhh Arman cant u guys anything other den Cricket?

Arman: ok Baba Tell

Shilpa: Guess wat? I talked to jiju rite nw nd u wont believe where is he rite nw?

Arman: where?

Shilpa: At my home. U knw wat jiju was telling dat Di as hell irritated with his behaviour nd he challenged her also that he'll bring her back within 24 hrs.

Arman: Really?

Shilpa: ya. I don't know who's going to win, because both of dem were equally stubborn.

Arman: definitely Raghu. U know Power of Love

Shilpa: ya I wish d same too. U know wat Arman I learnt one thing from all dis

Arman: Wat?

Shilpa: dat we its not necessary who confess first all is necessary we confess it before things go wrong. We should not wait for telling our feelings.

Arman: ya rite.

Shilpa(to herself): Dhakkan! Itni hint di fir bhi nahi bola aur kal jiju ko blame kar raha tha. Stupid

Arman(to himself): I know wat u r trying to say nd I'll confess it as soon as Raghu's problem is solved.

Shilpa: u said something

Arman: no. u said something

Shilpa: Ofcourse not. Acha I need to go. Bye

Arman: Wait I'll drop u.

Shilpa: ok.

Suddenly Arman's cell phone rang so he asked Shilpa to wait for him in d parking. Shilpa nodded nd left from dere

Arman: Hello.. oh its u. wats up?... u r coming? Wen but suddenly.. ok will come to Pick u from Airport... But y?... o ya i forgot u r big Enough to manage urself... will wait for u. bye

Arman(to himself): nothing special going to happen these days then y such a sudden Visit. Well will come to know Soon.

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Back to Amritsar, it was 9 PM nd every1 was at dining table for Dinner. Geeta has specially made Italian for Raghu. Raghu was happy to see dat.

Raghu: Wow Mom hw did u know that I love Italian.

Geeta: Antara has told me.

Raghu: ok.

Antara too comes to dining table nd was going to herself seated at d chair in front of Raghu wen Geeta stops her.

Geeta: Arey Antara wahan nahi, Raghu ke sath baitho.

Antara: Wat? But mom

Geeta: C'mon Antara u were shying like u r meeting him first tym.

Raghu was smiling slowly. He was not knowing that God will also help him like dis. Antara leaves d chair nd sits beside him

Raghu(Whispers): Dekha Sachha Pyar ho to bhagwaan bhi sath dete hai

Antara gives him an angry look but she didn't want to create any scene over here so she remained quiet. She served her plate nd going to have it wen she realized that someone has caught her Right hand. She looked at Raghu who was behaving like nothing had Happened nd having his Dinner calmly while talking to Antara's Nanimaa. She tries to frees her hand but Raghu's Grip was so strong that she couldn't do that. Finally she have to gave up nd started having her Dinner with her left hand. Antara is a Right hander so its being difficult for her to have food with her left hand but she's managing somehow. Suddenly Geeta noticed that Raghu is having his food with his Right hand.

Geeta: Raghu Beta, y r u using ur rught hand? I mean I heard that u r Left hander

Raghu: U heard rite Mom. Actually I got burnt at my left hand in d kitchen so couldn't able to use dat hand.

Geeta: oh! Y didn't u tell me before. I should apply some ointment on it.

Raghu: Dnt worry mom Antara has already Applied it. Rite Sweetheart?

Antara(smiled faintly): ya Rite.

Geeta: den its ok. But Antara y r u using ur left hand? U always use to use ur right hand

Antara has got almost choked with her Food wen her Mom say dis.

Raghu: ya Antara. Y r u using ur Right hand?

Antara gives Raghu a "I'll tell u later" Look but rite nw she's thinking hw to answer her Mom. Her hand is still in Raghu's hand who made his grip more strong.

Antara: Wo. Mom actually I also got hurt while cutting vegetables in the kitchen today.

Raghu: Really? Wen? I was with u all the tym. Mere saamne to tumhe chot nahi lagi

Antara(irritated): I got hurt in d morning. U were not with me in d morning.

Raghu: oh! Sweetheart dhyan rakha karo apna.

Geeta: Raghu is rite beta. U should take care of urself.

Antara: yes mom

Den she looked at Raghu who raises his eyebrows with a mischivious smile Gesturing hows dat. Antara said nothing but somewhere she was liking it that Raghu is holding her hand.

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It was 10:30 PM nd Antara is going to her for Sleeping as it has been a tiring day for her moreover she wanted to sleep as soon as possible before she has to face Raghu again. Only she knews hw hard is it for her Sitting next to him at the Dining table. As soon as she entered her Room she saw Raghu sitting at her Bed. She was shocked to see him over dere.

Antara: Wat r u doing over here?

Raghu: Generally people sleeps in the bedroom so I m also doing dat.

Antara: I know it Raghu but I'll sleep over here.

Raghu: Antara (he said nd came to her) Dheere bolo Koi sunega to kya sochega?

Antara: Matlab?

Raghu(naughtily): Matlab mujhe tumhare saath Room share karne me koi problem nahi hai but shaadi se Pehle is tarah se humara ek room me rehna Acha nahi lagega. hai na?

Antara: Shut up Raghu.(little embarrased) I didn't mean that. Moreover dis is my Room nd I'll sleep over here.

Raghu: wen did I denied dat. But today I'll sleep over here. So u go outside.

Antara:Excuse me! Raghu, this was my Room since childhood to is Room se Main nahi tum bahar jaoge.

Raghu: Very Good. Jab tum mere outhouse me rehne aayi thi to kya maine tumhe bahar nikala tha? Nahin na. to tum mujhe room se kaise bahar nikal sakti ho.

Antara: outhouse me rehne ke liye mujhe Aajia ne permission do hai.

Raghu: Aur Yahan rehne ke liye mujhe Mom ne permission di hai.

Antara: Wat Mom ne?

Raghu: yep!!

Antara(shouts): Mom!! Mom!!

Geeta came inside d room running wen she heard Antara calling her.

Geeta: Wat happen Antara? Y r u shouting like dis?

Antara: mom did u asked Raghu to stay at dis room

Geeta: ya. Y?

Antara: but mom u know I don't share my Room with anyone except Shilpa.

Geeta: Who r saying u to share ur Room with him. U can shift to my Room for tonight.

Antara: No thanx. U stay awake late at nite with lights on nd I couldn't able to sleep. Ask Raghu to shift at Guest Room

Geeta: Hw can he shift to Guest Room. nanimaa is over dere.

Antara: oh ya. I forgot.

Geeta: Antara, come to my Room Bachha.

Raghu: Antara if u want u can stay at dis room with me. I hope Mom wont mind as she trust me.

Antara: no thanx. I m going to living room

Geeta: But Antara hw will u sleep at Couch. U'll not feel comfortable.

Antara: I'll manage.

Geeta: ok as u wish.

She left from dere. Antara looks at Raghu who had a victorious smile on his face. She takes her pillow goes to living Room

Raghu (to himself): Pagal!!! Gusse mein aur bhi achi lagti hai.

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Antara cames to living Room murmuring to herself

Antara(To herself): ye acha hai! mujhe mere hi Room se bahar nikal diya. Dusht daanav. Koi nahi Antara. Bas kuch ghante ki baat hai den he'll go back to Mumbai (Den she reminds Kitchen Incident) M I really hurting him? Yes I m. he has came from Mumbai To Amritsar just because of me nd I havent talked to him properly till nw. main bhi to wahi kar rahi hoon jo usne kiya tha. Poori baat sune bagair react kar rahi hoon. I should talk to him. I'll talk to him in d morning nd will try make him understand to leave dis Challenge of his. Ya.

She said nd laid on d Sofa nd within few mins she was asleep

2 Hrs has been passed. Raghu slowly came out from d Room nd goes towards d Couch. A smile of Fulfillment came across his Face wen he looked at her. She is cuddling herself like a Ball as she was feeling cold. She was so upset at that tym that she havent taken her Blanket. He walked up to her nd sat at the corner. He could see her Face due to Moonlight coming in d Room. She was looking so innocent just like a small child. Who can say that its d same Antara who was fighting wid him few Hrs Back. Raghu slowly tucked her loose strands behind her ears that was coming to her face. Nd caress her cheeks. His lips curved in a smile wen he saw her sleeping so peacefully.

Raghu: I know Antara u r very much angry on me but I also know dat u love me from d Core of ur heart. It has been shown even in ur anger also. That's y u didn't protest much wen I hold ur hand at the dining table, u didn't argued much for d Room, the way u r taking care of my Wounds. I know Behind dis Anger of urs there is immense love for me nd u have to admit it.

Saying dis he gets up nd leaned on her. den he slide his one hand around her waist nd one around her knees nd scooped her up in his arms nd started heading towards her Room without taking his eyes away from her once. He didn't even blink for a once as he didn't want to miss to watch her beautiful face even a sec. as soon as he reached to her room, he kept her on her nd cover her with her blanket. For a few Mins. He checked her beautiful face nd den leaves d room nd goes to the couch taking his pillow nd blanket.

Before he goes to sleep he reminds of something. He quickly opens his Laptop nd sign in to MSN nd found someone Online waiting for him.

Raghu: Hi

Other side: Hi. Wat took u so long?

Raghu: nthing much

Other side: I knw dnt hide it now.

Raghu: Anyways wen r u coming? I had tried my best till nw but from here I need ur Help.

Other side: Dnt worry Dude. I'll be there soon to help u.

Raghu: thanx yaar

Other Side: Dnt be so Formal dude. Nw go to sleep because m also feeling tired nw.

Raghu: ok Good nite.

Other side: Gud nite and see u soon.

Raghu had a smile of satisfaction on his face nw. he knews that Thing will be under control soon.He signs off from MSN, closes his Laptop nd goes to sleep with a thought that Tomorrow Antara has to come with him.

Precap:

Antara asks Raghu to forget about his Challenge but will he let her go so easily?
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haha raghu amazed her..he is sure that he will take her Mumbai n i am very sure he will be succeeded by any how!!!
loved the dinner n couch scene a lot.thanks fr updating dear :))
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yes raghu dilwale dulhaniya le jayenge 😆...
jst loved him in dis update 😉...
antara toh abi b gussa h 😔
hope soon raghu wins d challenge n takes her back
wid him 👍🏼...
wonderful update... update soon.n thanks dear
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Antara tum hamaare Raghu ko nahi jaanti. Vo ek baar jo taan letha usse poor karke hi dam letha hai. Vo tumhe Mumbai vapas lekar hi aayega😉
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finally
loved the whole update
speechlees right now
pls cont asap
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👏 Finally u updated,that was awesome, lovely and long update,love it.plz keep updating yaar
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wow...such a wonderful update...👏...
dey met n den deir bickering...he'll definitely win d challenge...👍🏼...
Arman-Shilpa cute moments...sum1's coming...🤔...
Antu is getting irritated...while Raghu is cool...😎...
ok so Raghu has a plan...😉...

Waiting for more......
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Part 27:


Next Morning it was 8:00 AM wen Antara woke up. She rubbed her eues to get out from her Dream World, then she noticed that she was not at Couch infact she is on her Bed. She looked around d Whole Room. yes it was her Room

Antara(To Herself): Main yahaan kaise aayi? Main to Couch pe soyi thi to fir? Kahin mujhe Neend me chalne ki Bimaari to nahi ho gayi? Shut up Antara wat r u thinking? But then hw I came over here?

She closed her eyes to remember wat has happened then opens her eyes because she realized who brought her over here. None other den Raghu. Only he's d one who can think so much about her. no matter hw he irritated her last day but the fact is dat he loves her thatsy he cant see her in any kind of Difficulty ns she loves him too thatsy last nite she didn't argue much for room. though she has shown lots of anger to him but only she knews that it was all fake. She smiled wen she thinks hw Raghu has brought her over here

Antara (to herself): He cares so much about me nd I was so rude to him yesterday. Dnt worry Antara just talk to him today. I'll ask him to leave for Mumbai but I wont go so soon I'll come later hope dat'll conveince him. But where is he? Did he already left? No she has to check out.

She quickly gets up from her Bed nd moved outside d Room. She saw that there was no one in d Couch, she looked at the Kitchen nd saw her Mom alone over dere, her Nanimaa is still sleeping in her Room. She quickly goes to the Balcony thought that May be Raghu would be there but found no one over dere also. She wondered where he could be. Did he left without even telling her? Her face was started frowning with the Thought that Raghu has left from dere. As soon as she was about to turn she bumped into someone which makes her lose her balance. She was about to Fall wen someone catches her through Waist. Antara's eyes were shut in fear dat she was about to fall in ground soon she realizes d grip of strong hand around her waist. She knows of whom dat Grip is. It was none other den Raghu. She slowly opens her eyes to look at him nd she was right. She was safe in Raghu's Arms. There was an eyelock moment between both of dem for few minutes, den slowly Raghu raise her up nd Antara settles herself. They looked each other for some moments den Raghu decides to break d Silence.

Raghu: Y u r always in a hurry? Mana ki I use to call u Amritsar Express but that doesn't mean that u behave like dat only.

Antara: Actually I was worried. I thought u left without telling me so I was searching for u nd...

Den she stops wen she saw Raghu Looking at her with smile.

Raghu: So u thought that I had left huh?

Antara: No, I mean yes...

Raghu: Antara relax! I completely understand wat u want to say. Ur eyes has told me everything. Actually I had gone for a Jog.

Antara: Oh I thought that u left

Raghu: Antara, u know RAGHU NAIK he never backs out from any Challenge

Antara: Challenge?

Raghu: ya challenge. Remember last evening at kitchen?

Antara: O ya I need to talk about that only. i...

Raghu: So u agree to come wid me

Antara: Raghu pls let me complete.

Raghu: ok go on

Antara: Raghu I cant come wid u. pls Try to understand its not easy for me not after all happened dat day. Pls dnt make dis Stupid Challenges. Its of no use. Just forget about all dis nd go to Mumbai. Dadimaa is alone over dere nd u know that she use to have Palputations Problems still u r behaving like a Kid. Pls Raghu.

Raghu Listened to her quietly. He loves dat Antara cares for everyone so much

Raghu: If u really Care for Dadimaa So much den y r u not coming with me. Ok I'll go without u but tell me wat Answer I'll Give to Dadi wen she'll ask me about u. u think that she'll be in good health after knowing about the truth.

Antara: Raghu, dnt try to blackmail me emotionally. U know very well hw much I love her. but pls Raghu u r clever enough to give her any excuse

Raghu: I wont give her any excuse Antara because u r coming with me.

Antara: that's not Possible Raghu

Raghu: don't decide too early Antara because 24 Hrs. r not over yet. There's still 11 Hrs. left. Nd life can change in a minute then 11 hrs r enough to change ur Decision.

Antara: But Raghu...

Raghu: See u at Dining table for Breakfast

Saying dis he left from dere leaving Antara Puzzled. She knows that it was not easy to win from him but she'll also wont give up.

Antara(To herself): Fine Mr. Raghu Raghu naik Khurana. I have came here to make u understand Politely but I guess it will not work as u consider it to be war. Ok 11 Hrs. r left na. let see Who'll win.

Saying dis she also left from dere.

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It was 10 AM in d morning nd everyone has almost finished their Breakfast. Wen dey heard d Door Bell. Geeta was going to open d Door wen Antara stops her.

Antara: Mom u finish ur Breakfast. I'll go nd check.

Geeta: ok

Antara goes to the Main Door nd as soon as she opens it she saw A girl standing facing her back towards her.

Antara: Excuse Me!!!

As soon as d Girl hears d Voice she quickly turns back cheerfully to face Antara. She was in her early Twenties nd wearing Blue Halter Top dress dat came acroo just above her knees.

Girl: Hi! Umm Let me Guess. Antara Rite?

Antara: Ya. But u...

Before she completes d Girl hugs her tightly

Girl(excitly): Hi!!! Finally I met u. it was so good to meet u.

Antara hugged her in amuzed away den parted herself

Antara: umm Excuse me dnt mind but Have we met before?

Girl: Oh! So stupid of me I havent introduced myself to u. Hi I m Savera. Savera Malik

[Enter Savera Malik. A young, Cheerful nd lively girl from London. Twin sister of Arman who is just 5 mins. younger from him nd Raghu's Good Friend. fond to be called as Savy A fashion Designer by Profession nd having a Good Bonding with his Bro. Will act as a Cupid for our Raghueet]

Antara(confused): Savera Malik.

Savera: Hey, tum Savy ko nahi jaanti. Kaise janogi I havent able to come for ur engagement. U know Arman Raghu's Friend?

Antara: ya

Savera: I m his Sister. Just 5 mins. Younger from him.

Antara: oh ok.

Savera: Will u mind if I come inside?

Antara: oh ya Sorry. Ya sure pls come.

Savera: thanx.

Wen it took Antara so long to come den Raghu decided to go to check himself. As soon as he goes to living Room Area he saw Savera over dere. He felt Both Happy nd Excited to look her over dere.

Raghu: Savera!!!!

Savera(excited): Raghu!!!!

As soon as Savera saw Raghu he ran towards him nd hugged him tight. Antara saw dis nd her Face become to frown. Before dis she has not Seen any other girl being so close To Raghu except her. Raghu noticed d change in Antara's Expression so he Hugged her back nd it has been a warm hug. Antara didn't feel good wen she saw Raghu hugged her so tightly. Finally Raghu Broke d Hug nd looked at Savera.

Raghu: Hey! Savy, it was so good to see u. but wen did u came back from London

Savera: yesterday only nd after Landing to Mumbai I had gone straight away to ur Home to meet u, pata chala ki tum to yaha Amritsar me ho. Fir kyat ha Savy ne apna Bag uthaya nd straight away came to Amritsar. I hope I havent done anything wrong. Did I Antara?

Antara(came into senses): Umm no Ofcourse not. Its good to see u.

In the Meanwhile Antara's Mother too came in d Room.

Raghu: Mom, she's Savera Arman's Sis.

Savera: Hello Aunty.

Geeta: Hello Beta! Hw r u?

Savera: I m fine Aunty. Hws u?

Geeta: I m fine too. (den turned to Antara) Antara y dnt u arrange breakfast for her. She must be both tired nd Hungry.

Antara: Sure Mom.

By saying dis She leaves for Kitchen.

Geeta: Savera Beta I would love to talk to u but I need to go to Office rite nw but I'll be back today soon.

Savera: No problem Aunty. Carry on. Bye

Geeta: Bye!

After Geeta has left Both Saver and Raghu sat on the Couch nd started Talking.

Raghu: Thanx Savy for coming here that too in such a short notice.

Savera: dnt say thanx Raghu I m ur Friend afterall. Moreover I was curious to know too that who's dat Girl who had made RAGHU NAIK's night restless.

Raghu blushes

Savera: omg did I saw RAGHU NAIK blushing. Bro. was rite u have really changed a lot

Raghu: Pls Savy change the topic.

Savera: ok Fine nw tell me everything from start.

Raghu told her everything hw they met, their engagement, hw he falls for her, hw he got misunderstanding due to which Antara yells at him nd came over here.

Raghu: So now u understand wats d Problem is. thats y i asked u last nite for ur help

Savera: Dude its really a big problem

Raghu: Wen did I denied from it? Datsy I need ur help

Savera: Raghu tumhari help ke liye hi to Savy London se yaha tak aayi hai aur ab Waapas tabhi jayegi jab tumhari Love story ko track pe le aayegi. Waise u know u r a big Idiot?

Raghu: y?

Savera: Aur Kya? Achi khaasi love story chal rahi thi tumhari. Ab tak tumhari Love story ki train ka Destination Platform bhi aa gaya hota but thanx to u Tumne Vridant naam ka ye jo Back gear lagaya hai isse tumhari Train waapas usi Platform pe chali gyi jahan se Shuru hui thi ya Shayad usse bhi pehle.

Raghu: Ab galti ho gyi na

Savera: Dats at I wanna say ki tumse Galti kaise ho gyi? I mean After Aamir Khan if Mr. Perfectionist title suits to anyone den its RAGHU NAIK. Den hw can he do any mistake?

Raghu: Savy, I m not a god ok

Savera: Dnt get Irritate Raghu. Actually dis is d Problem of u guys. U Guys never understand wat a Girl Feels in her heart nd dats d main cause of complication.(she said seriously)

Raghu: Hey, wat makes Savera Malik so serious nd by the way u were saying like u have confessed for ur Luv to ur Mr. Rite many times.

Savera: No, I havent nd waise bhi agar Savy ka koi Mr. Rite hota to savy is waqt tumhari problem nahi solve kar rahi hoti but I m D younger Sis of the Gr8 Love Guru Remember.

Raghu: ya hw can I forget that. Anyways nw tell me wat I do nw. only 9 hrs r left.

Savera: Hhmmm. Acha tell me Did Antara saw u with any other girl before dis

Raghu: No. y

Savera: ok Den I have a plan. Its quiet ols but always works But before dat there is something that I want to tell u before only.

Raghu: wats dat

Savera: See may be in this Period Antara will feel hurted because u r going to ignore her, may be that bothers u too but u have to do this. U have to be strong

Raghu: But is it necessary? I mean I already hurted her a lot

Savera: Yes Raghu it is necessary. See Antara has not seen u with any other girl before dis so she thinks that she's d only girl in ur Life in other Words she's taking u For granted. So wat would be her reaction if she sees ur interest in someone else?

Raghu: Hhhmmm Sounds interesting. But r u sure it'll work

Savera: Ofcourse it will afterall Savy the Great ka plan hai.

Raghu: But Savy...

Savera: Trust me Raghu. Nothing will go wrong.

Raghu: ok lets see.

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While dey were chatting in d living Room Antara was in kitchen. She is really not having a Good Feeling wen she saw Savera with Raghu. She has never saw Any girl so close to Raghu. Nd to her surprise Raghu too responded for her hug dat too a warm one. An unknown Fear has started to overcome in her mind. Fear of losing Raghu. Then she shrugged off all her thoughts.

Antara(To Herself): Wat d hell wrong with u Antara. She's just a friend of Raghu. That's it. Moreoevr she is Arman's Sis who is d Best Friend of Raghu as well as ur Friend too den hw can u think like that about his Sis. But the way they were hugging... so wat dey were friends nd meeting after long tym. Wats d big Deal. But wat if Raghu shows his interest towards her. Afterall I m being so rude to him. Shut up Antara!!!!! Wat r u thinking. Just chill ok.

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In d Living Room:

Savera: Relax Raghu! I told na everything will be fine nd Antara will go with u Mumbai today

Raghu: U know wat Savy. I don't know what should I have been done if u were not there. Thanx

By saying dis he again hugs her. As soon as he hugs her Antara came out from d kitchen nd saw dem Hugging. She acted like she was about to faint. Den she controls herself.

Antara: ummm sorry to disturb u guys. But savy y don't u get fresh

Both Savy nd Raghu broke d Hug nd looked at each other with a smile

Savy: ya Sure. Shona I'll be rite back.

Raghu(smiles): ya sure

Antara opened her jaw as soon as she heard word shona from Savera's Mouth. Her innerself was burning wid anger. But she decided to control it rite nw. Antara showed Savy the way for her room nd as soon as she lefts from dere she turned to Raghu.

Antara(angrily): Wat was dat?

Raghu: Wat?

Antara: Dnt act like u dnt understand anything

Raghu: Antara, I really didn't understand wat r u saying?

Antara: y is she calling u Shona?

Raghu: Well, she love to call me Shona

Antara: dats wat I wanna ask, y?

Raghu: well she's my friend nd a friend can call by any name

Antara: oh really. As far as I know u said u never had any Friendship with a Girl.

Raghu: Wen did I said dat? I said dat I stay away from girls. But Savy is Diferent u know. But Wait a Sec. y r u getting so restless if she's calling me shona? R u jealous?

Antara(muffled): Who me? Ofcourse not. Y should I care if she calls u shona?

Raghu: But ur tone is saying something else

Antara: whatever I just wanted to tell u that only 8 Hrs. r left nw so better go nd pack ur Bag instead of talking wid ur Savy

Saying dis she left from dere angrily. Raghu looks at Savera who was hiding behind d door listening to them smiling. She shows him Thumbs Up to which Raghu responded with a smile.

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It was 1:30 PM nd everyone is going to have lunch. Antara's mom has taken half day off because of Savy. She really liked her because of her sweetness. Antara was going to Sit wid Raghu wen suddenly Savy takes her seat nd sits over dere.

Savy: sorry, its reserved for nw. I hope u dnt mind

Before Antara could say anything her mom Intervenes

Geeta: ofcourse not Beta. Y would she mind? Afterall u both met after so many years. Antara, u come nd sit with me.

For the First tym Antara is getting irritated on her Mom. Last nite she was d only who make her sit Beside raghu nd today wen she really wanted to sit she asked Savera to sit beside him. But she controls herself nd sits beside her mom. She notices Raghu nd Savy talking with each other like there was no one around. She was hardly able to have her lunch.

Geeta: Antara, wat happen?

Antara: Nothing Mom

Geeta: Den y r u not having ur Lunch?

Raghu notices nd about to say something wen Savy stops him by holding his Hand. Raghu looks at her nd she gestures from her eyes to be quiet.

Antara: Wo Mom'. I don't feel like having.

Geeta: y? r u feeling fine?

Antara: ya mom I m fine.

Geeta: Den have ur lunch. Dnt skip it. Ok

Antara: k Mom

Geeta(turning to Raghu): So Raghu, at wat tym u guys will leave for Mumbai

Raghu: Mom, somewhere around 5 of d evening because Savy has some work at Mumbai so we both will leave by 5.

Geeta: No, I mean to say U nd Antara

Raghu: oh! Sorry Mom I thought u were talking about me nd Savy. Actually Mom Antara wants to stay with u for few more days so I wont force her she can stay over here as long as she want.

Antara(To himself): Ya nw y would he care that I'll go with him or not? Savy jo aa gayi hai. Ab to usiki fikr hogi.

Raghu: u said something.

Antara: uumm.. no. Excuse me I need to go.

Raghu: But lunch?

Antara: I m done.

Saying dis she left for her Room. Raghu looked at Savera who assured her to relax. Antara closed d Door nd sat on d Bed thinking about the closeness that she was seeing between Raghu nd Savy.

Antara(To Herself): Wats wrong wid u Antara? Tu khud hi to chahti thi ki Raghu yaha se chala jay end nw wen he's going den y m I not feeling Fine. Because he's going wid Savy nd not wid me M I getting Jealous of her. ofcourse not. Den y I m having dis strange Feeling. I don't want to hate her she is too sweet but still I couldn't able to Accept their Friendship. Babaji! Wat should I do nw?

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Its about 4:50 nd Raghu nd Savy were in d Living Room with their Luggages. Raghu looked Worried as Antara has not yet came out from her Room. He fears that whether this trick of dem will work or not.

Savy: Wat Happen Raghu? U look Worried

Raghu: Savy, only 10 mins. R left for us to go nd Antara has still not came out.

Savy: Relax Raghu! do not fear wen Savy is here. We still have 10 mins. She'll definitely come.

Raghu: hw can u be so sure?

Savy: Raghu, I m girl if u remember nd I know the mentality of girls so just chill ok.

Raghu: ok

Suddenly Geeta cames in d living Room.

Geeta: so u both r ready to go.

Raghu: ya Mom.

Geeta: ok its really feels great to spend tym wid u Raghu. Nd Savera I couldn't able to spend tym wid u properly. U should have stay with us for few days.

Savy: I m sorry Aunty but if d Work was not important den I would definitely stay wid u. but dnt worry I'll visit u before I go back to London.

Geeta: Anytime Beta.

Raghu: Mom where's Antara?

Geeta: Beta she's still at her Room. I guess she's not feeling well nd sleeping. Should I call her?

Raghu(hopelessly): No mom let her sleep. (den turned to savy) lets go Savy. Otherwise we'll get late.

Savy: ok.

Savy hugged Geeta nd both Raghu nd Savy turned to leave. Raghu closes his eyes to accept the fact that Antara is not coming wid him even Savy couldn't believe that her Plan didn't work dis tym. She don't know how to console Raghu.

Raghu(To himself): I don't believe dis Antara that Mygoing wid Savy doesn't affect u but y do I still feel that u'll come with me wen I know that every hope is over nw.

He started moving towards outside wen stopped by Antara's Voice

Antara: Wait!!

Antara's Voice brings smile back on Raghu's Face. He quickly turned to look Back. He saw Antara standing over their with her Bag.

Antara: I'll also Come wid u.

Raghu: But u say u want to stay over here.

Antara: Ya... But... Pinki has called me to tell that Mr. Chopra is Arriving tomorrow nd he demands for meeting day after tomorrow so I felt necessary for me to present over dere.

Raghu: oh! R u sure? (Raghu knows dat Antara is lyieng because he talked to Mr. Chopra a few hrs. before nd he had no plan to coming back)

Antara: ya. Just wait I need to meet Nanimaa before I go.

Raghu: sure

Antara left from dere. Raghu looked at Savy who was smiling.

Raghu: Hey! its Working.

Savy: I told u.

Both of dem smiles nd waits for Antara to come

Precap:
Back to Mumbai


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