New FF: RagNa-Love As We know it(PART 13(LAST) UPDATED@pg 69 on 22/8)

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Hi, This is my first trial on writing FF , hope you enjoy reading!!!

~*~LOVE As We Know It~*~

Characters: All characters are same as in the show "Ek Mutthi Aasmaan".
About Story: Story is same as shown in show till 30th may, I am starting my story after Raghav and Pakhi divorce, that is after one year.
PART 1- A new beginning


At chawl:
Kalpi: Aai, see dada, he is irritating me, he is not giving my saari.
Kamla: Pakhya, don't irritate her, give her that saari, however, she is going to leave us forever by tomorrow, to a different home, today she must have smile on her face only.
Kalpi: (With tears in her eyes, ) Aai, why are you talking like this, I am not leaving
you, I am just shifting house.
And kalpi hugged kamla, pakhya also joined them later by saying, me too, me too.
Today is haldi ceremony of kalpi and Raghav, and tomorrow will be their wedding day.
Kamla(to vitthal): Vitthal, From Raghav's home , haldi has not reached yet, I am really scared , its going to be alright , isn't it.
Vitthal: Don't take tension kamla, I know you are scared because of whatever happened in past. Trust bappa, he will make everything right. And haldi will start at 6 pm , and its 5 pm , don't worry. Haldi must be on its way.
Kamla felt relief by Vitthal's words.

~oOo~

At Singhania Mansion:
Gauri: (in Raghav's room) Chintu, are you here?
Raghav came out of washroom with towel clearing haldi marks on his face.
Gauri: Chintu, I sent your haldi to kalpi's house, soon it will be reaching them. You were little tensed about being late with haldi ceremony , that is why thought of informing you. Call anyone from jadhav family after 10 minutes to make sure , that , haldi reached there or not. I am going busy with other stuffs.
Raghav: Ok ! Mom.

~oOo~

Haldi ceremony is over and its 9pm. Kalpi is sitting alone in house, while everyone
was outside and busy in decorating "mandap".
Kalpi(in her mind): Why I am so nervous? Everything will go fine, he loves me more than anything
else in this world, then why am I so scared. Bappa, please give me peace of mind. (Kalpi looking at her phone) Should I call him, ask him, if everything is fine with him? No, I can't , what if he will think that I am doubting on him? Where the truth is, I don't doubt his love, I can't, but I doubt my fate.
Raghav(in his room looking at his phone, thinking!): I know you are tensed Kalpi! For whatever happened in past, and I am no less tensed. Today, sleep is not going to come in my eyes tonight, and I know you are going in same mental state as mine. But don't worry! I am going to call you, so that both of us can get our peace of mind.
Kalpi's phone starts ringing, and she looked at phone, it's none other than Raghav. A smile just spread over her face unknowingly. She picked up phone.
Kalpi: Hello!
Raghav: Delicious!
Kalpi: What? What are you talking about Raghav?
Raghav : I am talking about your voice, sweatheart! When I hear your voice, I feel
like someone is feeding me my favorite sweet.
Kalpi : (Rolling her eyes) Don't start again. Sigh!
Raghav : You are sounding tensed.
Kalpi : a...hhmm. I just wanted to ask you, you are ok , no? Everything is fine, isn't it?
Raghav : Don't run your question on circular track. I know what is bothering you. Don't worry I will come to marry you tomorrow at mandap, even if I will be taking my last breath, I prom...
Kalpi: (Interrupting him before he complete his sentence) Don't ever say this again. (Tears filled in her eyes, but didn't escaped her eyes) you and I will live a long happy life together, and when death will come, we will die together. (After a small silence) You know na, I trust you, I trust you more than myself. It's just I don't trust my fate. I am sorry if I hurt you asking this.
Raghav : I know you trust me, it's because of your trust and love that our relation is still living. Otherwise, the mistakes I made in past was unforgivable. It's because of you that our anonymous relation is going to get a name tomorrow. And I can't tell you how lucky I am to have you in my life.
Kalpi : It's because of your love Raghav. Which made me trust you more than myself. So our relation is living not because of me only but because of us(finally tear escaped from her eyes and smile came on her face).
Raghav has no words to answer , for whatever just kalpi has said. Silence spread over conversation. Kalpi realized that this discussion have gone too emotional. So she broke the silence.
Kalpi : mm..Raghav. Please on your video chat, I want to have a video chat with you.
Raghav (Confused): o...kay...
And kalpi moved to the terrace and kept her phone on terrace boundary at stand .While raghav kept his phone at stand on table.
Kalpi : Actually, I am a little confused, and need an answer, will you answer me?.
Raghav : Confusion! About what?
Kalpi : Actually! My husband to be is behaving too serious, just day before wedding. Now I am scared if he behave so serious after marriage, my life will be spoiled, because I am wanting a very romantic husband. What should I doNow. Should I marry him or not(making a puppy face).
Raghav : I think you should definitely marry him. Because to where I know your soon to be husband, he is damn romantic. And I bet, he will not let you out of your bedroom or should I say bed, in first week after your marriage(With a naughty wink).
Kalpi's eyes gone wide like soccer, and her cheeks gone red like tomato . She was trying hard to hide her blush by looking down . While raghav was just noticing, her blush, unknowingly giving her intence gaze. From which kalpi was trying hard to escape. But finally she looked up and started in a commanding tone.
Kalpi: What is this Raghav, you are going shameless day by day. Who talks like that?
Raghav : What? Just before few minutes you were complaining about your unromantic husband. And now when husband is talking romantic, you are declaring him shameless. Not fare Mrs. Singhania (showing fake anger) .
Kalpi : ok! Ok!. You are not shameless, you are the most romantic husband in world .And every second in my life I want to be beside my romantic husband. Happy?
Raghav : Not so soon. You have to try harder. ( looking at his watch ) actually, kalpi I have some really important work to finish, it will take 10 to 15 minutes can you please excuse me for this. We will continue this talk, I will call you back, I promise.
Kalpi : (smiling) You don't need to be this formal, go and get over with your stuff. And anyways its too late now, I have to go to sleep. Tomorrow is going to be hectic day for both of us, you also go to sleep after completing your work.
Raghav : I said , I am going to call you back and you are saying you want to sleep. No ways, just wait for my call and don't go anywhere from there, it's final.
Raghav cut the call. Kalpi shakes her head in a way like saying, I just can't believe this man.
Kalpi thought , he will take 10 to 15 minutes , I can just go for washroom till then. She left her phone on terrace and went to washroom. After 10 minutes she came back to the terraceand looked for her phone , but it was not there. Suddenly kalpi got tensed , where is my phone?,I remember, I kept it right here, oh god, now if Raghav will call, how I would answer him. Kalpi started looking here and
there in a rush but didn't find the phone. Suddenly, her eyes stopped at a figure hiding behind Duppatta hanging on stretched wire on terrace.
Kalpi(in her mind): It must be dada, he don't get a peaceful sleep, till he don't irritate me. Dada I swear, I won't leave you this time.
And kalpi picked up a stick, lying on terrace , and started moving towards Duppatta without making noice of her steps. She reached Duppatta and pulled it with her other hand. And get shocked.
Kalpi : (shocked) Raa..ghav!.
Yes, it's raghav, and he also is in little shock watching kalpi holding stick, but not wasting his time in shock, he made himself busy in admiring his lady love. How beautiful she was looking, a perfect figure in light yellow saari, her pallu was instead of hanging was making circle around her waist , and end of pallu was slightly dipped in her left side of waist, so that it can be stopped there. Her hair tied in loose bun, incapable of holding front hairs of her, which were got partially wet, when kalpi washed her face in washroom. No makeup, no ornaments, the lady was looking damn gorgeous, completely divine beauty. Raghav's heart skipped many beats while admiring her. Suddenly, he woke up when he felt a hand waving before his eyes. It was kalpi, trying to talk to raghav, but seeing no response , she just waved her hand before his eyes for attention.
Kalpi : Raghav, Are you ok.
Raghav : (composing himself) Yes, off coarse! But what about you, what are doing with this stick.
Kalpi : (hesitatingly, while putting down stick) actually I thought, it was dada, hiding my phone to irritate me. So...
Raghav : So, you bring this stick to beat him.
Raghav started laughing loudly and kalpi feeling a little embarrassed. Raghav continues laughing till he got, glimpse of angrily staring kalpi.
Kalpi : (Angrily) so what, he can irritate me all the time and I can't just teach him a lesson.
Raghav : Sure you can, after all he is your brother, you can do whatever you want to do with him. It's just, I think I really need to be little careful with Mrs. Singhania. Anyways do you have anything else in your weapon category other than stick, So that I can prepare myself for future?
Kalpi : (with a naughty smile) Yes. Off coarse , I have a really long list of my weapons like, "baylan", "comb", "sleepers", "jhaadoo", and many more.
Raghav was moving towards kalpi with a cute smile, nodding his head in yes, with every count of weapon. And when she said "many more", he has already reached her, putting his hands on either sides of her waist. And he pulled her closer with a little force such that, kalpi got hold of his shoulder to balance herself. They were so close to each other, like their heart seems no more two, both of their heatrs were beating monotonously right beside each other, their faces were just inches apart, both of them were clearly feeling the warmth of each others breath. Kalpi was melting down in his arms, her face became all red with blush.
Raghav (with a lipbite): So, my lady dabang is trying to scare me, Hhmm.
Kalpi was too busy in thinking about their position and in blushing, so didn't answer the question. Instead she tried to get out of Raghav's hold, which seemed impossible for her after a little try, and then she gave up.
Kalpi : I think you should not be here, it's not good for a bride and groom to meet just before their marriage. Aai says it's a bad omen.
Raghav : Well talking about bad omen, I guess not the same case for us, we are already married, don't you remember your last birthday night. And about my being here, in last video chat with my wife, she said every second she wants to be beside her romantic husband, so here I am, fulfilling her wish. And one more reason, I was angry on her, so she has to butter me, so that I forget my anger.
Kalpi : (smiling with surprised expression) So you are still angry? Ok, tell me what to do, to butter you, and make you happy? But promise me after that you will leave, because after not finding me in house, someone will definitely come to terrace. And I don't want anyone to get wrong idea about us.
Raghav : (with a naughty smirk) You know very well, what I want.
PART 2:The Wedding
PART 3:The Golden Night
PART 4:Got All the Rights?
PART 5:The Uninformed Honeymoon
PART 6: Don't Go
PART 7: Never Changing Relation
PART 8: Womanizer
PART 9: Misunderstanding


PART 10: You means a lot

PART 11: The Confession


PART 12: She is Alive


PART 13: The End Or A New Start

Note: All your valuable comments r invited. Plz let me know if i should continue this😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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raghav and kalpana getting married😳...its awesome dear...enjoyed reading naughty raghav😉...pls continue soon...little frustrated with the show track😆...
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it is sooo good!! please update soon and keep up with the good work!!!! or shall i say incredibley amzing and fantastci work!! :D
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Excellent work dear please update soon 👏
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Lol..I'm waiting for part 2..
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Originally posted by: incredible96

it is sooo good!! please update soon and keep up with the good work!!!! or shall i say incredibley amzing and fantastci work!! :D

thanx, it means a lot, sure i will update soon😊
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Originally posted by: Shivanie05

Excellent work dear please update soon 👏

😊thanx, nxt update is on its way
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Originally posted by: turypriya

Lol..I'm waiting for part 2..

i m ready wid part 2... lol
jst giving final touch to part 2
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awesome dear...please do continueee...😊😊😊
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loved it ...enjoyed the naughty Raghav😉😉😉😉

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