New FF: RagNa-Love As We know it(PART 13(LAST) UPDATED@pg 69 on 22/8) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Super adorable start..
Raghav just makes me go awww cho sweet..



Continue asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sinalfan6

loved it ...enjoyed the naughty Raghav😉😉😉😉

i m enjoying writing naughty ragz😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Awesome update
I love RagNa phone conversation
They both understand each other so well
Raghav is so romantic
I love how he came to see Kalpi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its nice... plz update next part
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PART 2- Wedding
Raghav : (with a naughty smirk, moving his hands around kalpi's waist and placing them on her back) You know very well. What I want.
Kalpi : (shying) You have no self control, na Raghav. We are getting married tomorrow, and then I will be all yours. Have little patients, no one will stop you tomorrow. And anyways patients gives you sweet fruit.
Raghav : (rolling his eyes, and nodding his head like saying what I can do with this girl) Ok! Ok! "Aai ki beti", stop lecturing me, like your Aai.
Kalpi : (surprisingly) Raghav.
Raghav : (widening his eyes, and pulling his brows) What. Now don't tell me your Aai never gives lectures.
Kalpi : (in arguing way) Yes. She gives lecture but it is always for someone's good.
Raghav : (Unbelievably) O really! Like when she lecturing us about not marrying each other, Right.
Kalpi : (angrily) Raghav, one more word against my aai, and I will never talk to you.
Raghav : (cupping his hands around kalpi's face) Ok! Aai ki beti. (Teasingly)Even I don't want your Aai to come between us.
Kalpi : (with wide eyes,pushing Raghav's head with her tiny hand) You are impossible.
Raghav : (smiling) And your lips right now making it impossible for me to resist.
Raghav pushed his lips slowly against hers and kalpi closed her eyes, and then he broke the kiss by pulling his face just an inch apart. Kalpi opened her eyes in surprise, the man who never leaves a chance of coming close to her, has broken the kiss so fast, this was the first thought came in her mind. But Raghav have some other plan, he knew that the lady standing in front of him is drug to him, he can't resist his desire of kissing her, her fragrance, her eyes, her lips, her perfect figure, every essence of her was drug to him. But still he broke that kiss, not to let her go, but to start this in different way.
Raghav : (complaining) By the way, it was you who was going to please me, not me. So, you have to kiss me first.
Kalpi : (with wide eyes) But how does it matters, who starts first.
Raghav : It matters for me.
Kalpi has no choice, because another argument means, more time, more time means, Raghav will not leave soon, and risk of expose of their meeting. So she just pressed her lips against his without thinking so much, but after that she has no more senses to think about anything else than their kiss, because Raghav has taken the charge after that, it was not just pressing lips now, the kiss was going deep and deep, they were drinking each other, they were completely taking everything (the happiness, the sorrow, the love) in them with their kiss. Kalpi's hands were continuously moving up and down through Raghav's hair to his neck and from neck to his hairs, while Raghav's hands was continuously moving over her back to her waist, and from waist to her back. There was no ending to
the sensation they were feeling. This was their first kiss after spending a long time apart, they kissed like there will be no tomorrow. They continued kissing till they both got breathless. Finally they broke apart, and a beautiful smile with blush has taken place over kalpi's face. Raghav was also smiling but never leaving his eyes off kalpi's face.
Kalpi : I think you got, what you wanted , so please Mr. Singhania do me a favor, and leave. (turns to go, and takes her steps towards stairs) And yes be on time tomorrow.
Raghav : (biting his lip) Ok! Mrs. Singhania, as you command.
~oOo~
Next day morning at Chawl:
Wedding mandap was decorated with beautiful yellow and orange marigold flowers completely covering all four pillars of mandap, where the top of mandap was decorated with white roses, making a pyramid on top, all these flowers were kalpi's favorite, so vitthal himself decorated the mandap. Kamla was busy in keeping track of arrangements for rituals, vitthal was busy in hosting guests, while pakhya was busy in fixing defected speakers.
Kalpi in her room sitting in front of mirror, wearing a baby pink with light green color bridal lehanga and blouse with a pink chunari with light green border, whole dress with golden embroidery over it. She was full of golden jewelries, necklace, bangles, maang teeka, earrings, everything matching with her dress, everything was given by singhania's as shagun as they have tradition that bride should be wearing everything given to her by groom side. Kalpi kept her chunnari over her head, and given herself a satisfied look in mirror.
Kalpi's heartbeat was audible to herself, and with every passing second , she was telling herself in her mind " don't worry everything will going to be alright", then suddenly Manda entered in room, smiling in her usual manner.
Manda : Wow! Kalpi, looking like a princess, I must say money can change everything. Anyways your groom has came with "Baaraat". Finally your star is going to shine, he came this time to marry you, not like last time.
Kalpi didn't concentrate on her other words than arrival of groom. She was smiling with happiness, the news that filled her heart with such happiness that she has no more hold on that happiness and it started coming out from her eyes in form of tears. After sometime she has been called for "Jai mala".
Raghav's eyes were impatiently waiting for its pleasure. His heart was waiting for the sight of its owner. And there she came, moving down through stares like an angel holding mala of red roses, looking down, then taking steps towards him from front. Once she looked up to catch his eyes, and after that not for a single second their eyes left each other's eyes.
After jai mala they head to mandap where pandit has started chanting mantras, for kanyadaan girls parents were called but to kalpi's disappointment kamla was not there at that time , and for the fact kalpi knew that where will be her mother. She looked at vitthal with helplessness, and vitthal looked at her with disappointment, anger on kamla, love for his princess in his eyes. Vitthal came forward and said " I am her everything", Let only me do the kanyadan alone", and he did it and pandit started again with mantras. Kalpi was sad but then she looked at Raghav, whose eyes were telling her that "Don't worry I am here, and will be there for you always", and she forgot about kamla. After that marriage has completed with every ritual and kalpi was still feeling that it's a dream or real, she has pinched herself 5 times since she came down. Raghav watched her pinching herself, so teasingly he pinched her himself, a little hard, it was so hard that kalpi was just about to scream but she put her other hand on her mouth to stop herself from screaming, then looked at Raghav in confusion, and Raghav said, "Now you believe, it's not a dream" and smiled . Kalpi controlled herself to not to hit Raghav on his head.
Finally it was time for time for "Bidaai" , kalpi hugged pakhya with tears in her eyes.
Pakhya : (breaking the hug with tears in his eyes ) Don't cry kalpu, its time to be happy, finally I am getting rid of you.
Kalpi : (smiling with more tears) Dada.
Pakhya : (clearing his tears) Ok! Lets talk serious , if this Raghav ever brings tears in your eyes, inform me , I will see him(looked at raghav who broke in a smile hearing this).
Raghav : (smiling) Don't worry, brother-in-law I will treat your princess as my queen, you will never get , any complain about me, I promise.
And finally kalpi moved towards vitthal, and started crying like a baby in vitthal's arm, even vitthal has no control over his emotion, everyone standing there has eyes filled with tears watching father daughter emotions without any utterance of words the pain of separation was visible, finally vitthal composed himself.
Vitthal : (cupping kalpi's face in his hands) Raghav baba , I am giving you my piece of heart, handle with care, my life lies in her.
Raghav : (assuring) Sure, I will love her and take care of her more than my life.
Taking millions of emotions, sorrow of separation, happiness of unison, disappointment of absence, with them, Kalpi and Raghav sat in car, and headed towards Singhania mansion. And when they reached their destination, Gauri was already waiting for them for "Grah Pravesh" with "Aarti ki thaali", All the rituals done with newly wedded couple. And finally the time for the last and most important ritual came "The Golden Night".
Note: All comments are invited, leaving this part with a promise of much interesting next part😊


Edited by DayAndNight - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Just loved the update..Raghav's naughtiness.. Pakya's teasing..RagNa pinching scene..all are super beautifully written.. Love it..update next chapter asap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: appyK

Just loved the update..Raghav's naughtiness.. Pakya's teasing..RagNa pinching scene..all are super beautifully written.. Love it..update next chapter asap..

RagNa pinching is my fav scene of this part, feeling gud that u loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
lovely ff its awesome👏 do pm me when u update😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Lovely Story 👏 please do continue soon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Amazing update . Plz next update soon. 👏

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