Tare Dewani -A blind girl a love story(pricap @ page 3)

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Tare dewani -A blind girl s love story
Chapter 1
Its beautiful morning at kasmeer..one girl was dance at garden of house..one little girl was came. .an see was sleep one antra.. sorry main ne apko dekha nahi. .the girl said
Antra was smailing
Koi baat nahi apne to sirf muje nahi dekha main ne to kuch nahi dekha..antra said
Antra was try to tuch little girl a face..aap bahot beautiful ho..the girl said
Tnx angel. .antra said
Ruksaana was came
Antra aj achi news hai.. ruksaana said
Muje pata hai. .mera selection ho gya na..antra said
Haan. .but tare papa tuje jane de ge..Rhoda'na said
Papa ne he to muje Al nayi umid de.. use raat ke baad..har taraf andhera ho gya..but papa ne muje se kaha ke dill Jr najar se dekh..antra said
Ruksaana an antra came at house
Papa..antra said
Slowly slowly antra was walk an came..
Beta. .muje pata hai tu consirt kar ne jana chahte hai na.. antra a Papa said
Theek hai..but main tare sath chal ga..antra s papa said
Papa. .Al baar muje jane se mat roko..antra said
Antra s papa hug her..
At mounten
Antra was wigh t fo some one
Antra wo aya..ruksaana said
Are tare sath mail line sing kar ne mail aa raha hai..ruksaana said
Acha ..antra said
Machmach was come
Aap song sing kar ne wale ho. .ruksaana said
Nahi. .raghu..mchmach said
Kaha hai raghu..antra said
Jab uth jaega to aa jaega..machmach said
Antra start walk ..suddanlyantra sleep on some one..ita raghu
Andhi hai Kya..raghu said
Haan. .kya aap bhi andhe hai..antra said
Raghu look antra
wow..raghu said
Kya..antra said

After few minits
Raghu say ye lo ise yaad kar lo..
Antra start sing song
Nahi..raghu said
Raghu start sing song
Ye to gazal hai..antra ne to fock he sing kiya hai. .ruksaana said
Nahi..song to gazal he sing kar ge. .raghu said
Antra say theek hai kal dekh ge..
Raghu hold the chocolate..antra take the chocolate from raghu s hend
Tuje kaise pata chala chocolatr mare haath main hai..raghu said
Papa ne kaha tha dill ke najar se dekh..antra said
Antra was smailing..
Haan. .agar kal time pe nahi aye..to main intjaar nahi kar ne wali ..antra said


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BabyHimavari thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res..
may you name it as teri dewani... or something like that... would sound good i think
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES

Originally posted by: ifians

res..

may you name it as teri dewani... or something like that... would sound good i think


Yup, Teri dewani sounds better
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
yeh name it what RI said
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Posted: 11 years ago
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suar..
the name tari diwani done..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful chapter...loved it...
So rantara are going to perfom duet song.. grr8.. cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, yrrr tujhe ideas bade kamaal ke aate hai.
Must say, it's super awesome.
Arrey, Ab Chapter two dene ke liye kya legi...
I wanna Chapter two...
Teri deewaani...One of my favourite song.
Nikki khush hui...lol
update soon
Jaldi Jaldi...
I'm not asking for hafta, joh itna bhav kha rahi hai.
Chapter two update kar de...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Hey Yashvi one request Please dont use these words Subhanallah

Because of religious issues Thanks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

Nice update

Hey Yashvi one request Please dont use these words Subhanallah

Because of religious issues Thanks :)

ok..sorry..i removed it..
love u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lohananivedita

Wow, yrrr tujhe ideas bade kamaal ke aate hai.

Must say, it's super awesome.
Arrey, Ab Chapter two dene ke liye kya legi...
I wanna Chapter two...
Teri deewaani...One of my favourite song.
Nikki khush hui...lol
update soon
Jaldi Jaldi...
I'm not asking for hafta, joh itna bhav kha rahi hai.
Chapter two update kar de...

tnx niki
Edited by RANTARAlovelife - 10 years ago

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