What Can I exactly say about this wondrous piece of writing? You have outdone yourself Women! This SS is Bloody amazing. I am so elated that you kept writing and I feel blessed to have a special friend like you who can write so well too. I am glad I can inspire you to continue, but I feel that you can do wonders all on your own. Your so talented & I love you š¤
Okay now back to the 2nd part of the SSWhat a scene that was when IshRa had the almost "Kiss" jesus, I died and went back to heaven in those two lines. I loved it to the core, Such a short few lines but I could actually imagine DivAn portraying that in an episode. You have an amazing skill of writing so realistically thats its not even funny..I adored that whole chapter. Even when Raman Dragged Ishita away from the Field & shut her mouth, is something else I could see happening. I don't understand how you do it! I'm flawed šOMG Divs in a Holter neck blue & white trousers, I can bet Karan AKA RKB is dead and flustered after seeing his MRS in that, Yup in your story he didn't want others to see her beauty, wanted her all for himself, but funnily after watching yesterdays episode where Divs in that dress and Karan RKB was dumbfounded I could understand the mans plight šI also loved the way you portrayed Raman in that Chapter of subconsciously falling for Ishita and thinking how much of an amazing mother she is to lil Ruhi :) Its so cute isn't it when Ruhi says Ishi Maa Awww āŗļø I can hear her voice in your writing!3rd Part of the SSNamy, what the hell was that ? masterpiece yaar, I read the whole last part right through and goodness me! it was just stunning! Why did you end the SS so soon though yaar? š³I totally imagined a emotionally driven scene like you created between IshRa in the episodes and you actually captured elements of that, I can't believe it. I don't even write and you spoke my mind. Finally Ishu broke down and told Raman how it was and he then realized her worth & basically falling for her, WOW What a amazing portrayal that was when he Ran to Ishu's saving grace in front of the truck & Shagun aww he put his hand around her waist HE MEANT IT to protect her how amazing. Finally he Undesrstands.EVERYTHING & I MEAN EVERYTHING you've written was exquisite & I can't express how it was a pleasure to read all 3 parts.Finally I'm finished with this comment HAHA, as its you I'll tell you that it took me almost a hour, if not an hour to read both parts and write my thoughts. I'm not very good at this but I sure loved it!Please continue to write Os,SS,FF and some longer versionsUrsh LOVES YOU! š¤
Hey Urshuu honey š¤, This one is indeed a huge compliment!! I was desperately waiting for your comment.. With such a lovely, touching comment, you won my heart.. Again.. š³.. You know how much I love your comment.. Whatever you wrote is indeed a huge praise!! Touched my heart.. Make me fee great that you loved it so so much..
Love all the observations you pick up along the way.. I really like inclusion of details in the scene I write.. And I am so glad you notice them really well ā¤ļø
@bold part , Bingo!! It was kind of difficult for me to put it in words but that was exactly what I wanted to say.. Spot on.. And I like you use KP alongwith RKB in your comment šāŗļø .. Divyanka looks pretty in sari but she looks breathtakingly gorgeous in western attire.. and I agree with you, Divyanka in any western attire, would defo take KP RKB's breath away.. Ad with his stunned emotions, he will take our breath away.. š³āŗļøš
I am really very happy you enjoyed this SS so much !! I wanted to portray a simple story with multifarious emotions of IshRa.. RKB is impulsive, emotional & sensitive.. So my attempt was to sort RKB's feelings for Ishita.. him to understand her insecurity.. with the tendency to care for her.. Hope it didn't go unnoticed.. It makes me happy to know that I was able to stick to IshRa's characteristics.. It's a high praise for any writer.. It makes me feels great that you loved it so so much!! Am so glad that I was able to stick to their characteristics and u all appreciated it.. Your words always mean a lot to me.. Thanks once again for making my day and IshRalicious comment.ā¤ļøš¤
Namy loves you too jan-e-manš¤ā¤ļø
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