IshRa SS- 'Tera Hone Laga Hoon' Final Part(s) updated Pg 8

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Loved the updates 😃 ... and no they weren't too long.

Quite amusing where he ask her if she would prefer to be carried by him or the driver 😆 ... and her insecurity was really well portrayed.

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BeautyFooL

@BeautyFooL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Live-life

Sorry for the late unres!

😆

Oye Mamma, finally i got to read your 'precious' comment... 🤗 Great to see your long sweet comment..

Wow Karanwa! You are a fantabulous writerrr! I didn't know you were sooo good!
*cough cough* You get the genes from your Maa! Lol Just kidding hehe!
Well said Nabi maa.. I agree with you 😛

Wow I love seeing this side of Raman! He look so cute when he rubs his temples like that! Very attractive. And When he said to the receptionist that he was Ishita's husband Lol...I wanted to see her face right then 😆 Oh RKB you rock
I am fida over RKB's attitude and his arrogance..😳
And Awww...Ishita had tears in her eyes looking at Ruhi's pic! That moment was just really adorable for me I don't know why.
Aww thank you..
You know I just love when Jhansi ki Rani and Ravan Kumar fight it is sooo intense and funny! I can't help but laugh when they have a fight or a nok jhok. They seriously look like children fighting over a silly thing. After all at some point we are all young at heart ..
😆
yeah Ishu-RKB's fights/arguments are the highlight of YHM.. damn entertaininng!! Underline- Look who said this!!😛😉 Its defo the 'Philo Nabi' talking..😉😆

And then when he said tumhe Thank you aur Sorry to bolna padega I was like, RKB give me a jhappiii!
😆

I just love the way he notices everything about her. Hayeee! It is sooo cute!
And I loved how Ishita observed him during his sleep. So cute!
ANd he held her hand hayeee...mein to tabhi faint hogayi thi...Maa kasam!
Ishra rocks! 😳

And I loved how iSHITA WAS TRYING TO PERSUADE HIM TO let Ruhi go as she was going with her! But I didn't expect him to say that he will also go along! RKB...ek aur jhappi please! 😛
Hayeee! It's going to fun reading the next parts!
off to read them now!
Namy aka Karanwa keep writing dude You are a great writer
Love you loads
🤗
Thanks a ton for sparing time for your studies and commenting.. Really touched by your words.. Love you too Mammaa
🤗

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Awesome updates Namy Di!Thanks for pm & sending the buddy request!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

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580212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

What Can I exactly say about this wondrous piece of writing? You have outdone yourself Women! This SS is Bloody amazing. I am so elated that you kept writing and I feel blessed to have a special friend like you who can write so well too. I am glad I can inspire you to continue, but I feel that you can do wonders all on your own. Your so talented & I love you 🤗

Okay now back to the 2nd part of the SS

What a scene that was when IshRa had the almost "Kiss" jesus, I died and went back to heaven in those two lines. I loved it to the core, Such a short few lines but I could actually imagine DivAn portraying that in an episode. You have an amazing skill of writing so realistically thats its not even funny..I adored that whole chapter. Even when Raman Dragged Ishita away from the Field & shut her mouth, is something else I could see happening. I don't understand how you do it! I'm flawed 👏

OMG Divs in a Holter neck blue & white trousers, I can bet Karan AKA RKB is dead and flustered after seeing his MRS in that, Yup in your story he didn't want others to see her beauty, wanted her all for himself, but funnily after watching yesterdays episode where Divs in that dress and Karan RKB was dumbfounded I could understand the mans plight 😆

I also loved the way you portrayed Raman in that Chapter of subconsciously falling for Ishita and thinking how much of an amazing mother she is to lil Ruhi :) Its so cute isn't it when Ruhi says Ishi Maa Awww ☺️ I can hear her voice in your writing!

3rd Part of the SS

Namy, what the hell was that ? masterpiece yaar, I read the whole last part right through and goodness me! it was just stunning! Why did you end the SS so soon though yaar? 😳

I totally imagined a emotionally driven scene like you created between IshRa in the episodes and you actually captured elements of that, I can't believe it. I don't even write and you spoke my mind. Finally Ishu broke down and told Raman how it was and he then realized her worth & basically falling for her, WOW What a amazing portrayal that was when he Ran to Ishu's saving grace in front of the truck & Shagun aww he put his hand around her waist HE MEANT IT to protect her how amazing. Finally he Undesrstands.

EVERYTHING & I MEAN EVERYTHING you've written was exquisite & I can't express how it was a pleasure to read all 3 parts.

Finally I'm finished with this comment HAHA, as its you I'll tell you that it took me almost a hour, if not an hour to read both parts and write my thoughts. I'm not very good at this but I sure loved it!

Please continue to write Os,SS,FF and some longer versions

Ursh LOVES YOU! 🤗

Edited by -Ursh- - 11 years ago

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sunny303

@sunny303

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Namy!!! I loved this story bud:)))

Our Ravan Kumar is a hottie...you capture Raman and Ishita perfectly.

Looking forward to what you come up with next. Please PM me next time as well.

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Divan_Sashona

@Divan_Sashona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

wow I did not felt its a long ss i was totally lost when i was reading, awesome work

Edited by dark.lig8 - 11 years ago

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Sona

@Sona_Chandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Love the update, Namy. Thanks for the PM. 😊

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Why did u end it do soon. The concept was really good and the updates were fabulous. Very well written. The end was too good. Their unspoken words could been noticed in their gestures, and the promise was the best part

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BeautyFooL

@BeautyFooL

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: sunny303
Namy!!! I loved this story bud:)))

Our Ravan Kumar is a hottie...you capture Raman and Ishita perfectly.

Looking forward to what you come up with next. Please PM me next time as well.

Sunny, I am so pleased seeing your comment here 🤗... How have you been buddy?? Really miss talking to you ❤️...Thanks a ton for reading and commenting.. Glad you enjoyed reading it..

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