IshRa SS- 'Tera Hone Laga Hoon' Final Part(s) updated Pg 8 - Page 9

Originally posted by: lourel24

superb.I was hooked till the end."Ohh I see.. Kash aap ki school mai bhi basketball compulsory hota."I loved this one a lot.I cud easily visualize this scene n it was perfect.

Really happy it got you hooked fr a while nd you could visualise the scene.. I felt great aftr reading your sweet words.. Thanks for your appreciation..

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

LOVELY SS :)

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: vidya29

Hey Nami😊,
Awesome update!
I am going to re-read the whole thing and then post a nice little review in a while.
Thanks for the PM,😊
take care.

Thank you.. Hope you enjoyed re-reading it 😊

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Very nice follow ups. I loved both the parts. Part 2 for its humour and part 3 for a very sweet conclusion...

Some parts I really liked:

jealousy vs acidity 😊

doordarshan family 😆

the way Raman describes her family (especially appa and his dreams)😆


KAash aapki school mein bhi basket ball compulsory hota 🤣

Thanks really!! Glad I was able to create some entertaining moments.. You're a great writer nd coming it from you means a lot.. The funny parts you mentioned, I really enjoyed writing it.. Thanks for noticing nd quoting it 😃...

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

namyyy...my goodness loved loved this SS of urs...the last two updates were fab..it DID made me teary eyed at some places..u r a wonderful writer dear...plz plz write MORE on IshRa..!!

thnx a lot for this heart-touchin OS..🤗🤗🤗🤗

Aww Nikki, you're always so good & encouraging with your lovely words.. Really touched by your appreciation.. Thanks a ton for your support dear .. 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

mast namitha di 🤗 👏

Thanks Ketu🤗

Originally posted by: chathu

loveeed it

touch wood is awesome ,, wish u had written more chaps (Greedy)

Thanks dear.. Your comment means a lot..

Originally posted by: disha93

Superb update!!!
Very beautifully written!!!!

Thank you!!
Glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: jojo1986

Loved it 👏Great ending

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: uamaz

Many thanks for PM ⭐️
Beatifully written and very true to both characters, had the cvs seen some sense and done a similar storyline. Many thanks for this version 😆

Glad you liked it.. Many thanks for such a wonderful comment.. My pleasure i was able to entertain you😃
Thanks a ton..

Originally posted by: shalu79

It was blissful👏👏👏

After reading spoiler my mood was depressed 😔. But ur OS was like "zakhmope malaam"

The end wala scene was terrific. the emotions were very right n d way u expressed it superb

And in the beginning what onelibners u ve used true RKB style 👏👏👏

I could imagine Karan Patel saying those lines😆😆😆

Kaash humare CVS yeh padte aur hume aisa koi scene dete

loved it

A big thank u n 🤗to u

OMG Shalu, you're such a sweetheart❤️.. Glad i was able to improvise your mood.. Actually I never read Spoilers.. Sometimes, spoilers take away "'Ohh" moment.. I like to get surprised by twist & turn of d real epi..
Glad you were able to visulize RKb with those one liners.. This one is one of the best compliment i received so far..😳..
Thank you so much for being so nice & supportive🤗

Namy I read both the parts together and this was such a treat!!😛
I am truly honored!!
My favorite scene has to be the flight one, 😆 reminded me of his Dara Singh ki potti comment, hell if one tight slap from her can leave prints on his cheek, this grip must have left some impressions too
Glad you liked 'the flight scene'.. 😳
Underline- It reminds me of Surf excel ad's tag line.. "Agar kuchh achha karne se daag lagte hai, toh daag acche hai".. read 'Daag' as 'fingers mark' here..😳😆

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Loved the updates 😃 ... and no they weren't too long.

Quite amusing where he ask her if she would prefer to be carried by him or the driver 😆 ... and her insecurity was really well portrayed.

That's a relief to know you didn't find it long😳.. To be honest, I really know both the update have turned out exceptionally long.. I must thank you all for not complaining about the length😳

Glad you enjoyed reading it.. Your comment means a lot..

Originally posted by: yashasvi_88

Loved the updates😊

Thank You!!

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Awesome updates Namy Di!Thanks for pm & sending the buddy request!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

You're most welcome😊 and many thanks..

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

wow I did not felt its a long ss i was totally lost when i was reading, awesome work

Thanks dear.. Glad to know you didn't find it long.. and it kept you entertained..

Originally posted by: -Ursh-

Reserved! Will read and edit after Wednesday I misss youuu

Urshh dear, no hurry & no worry.. Take your own sweet time.. Its you who has inspired me to write more on IshRa.. Thanks for your encouragement.. Will patiently wait for your comment.. 😳
I miss you more😛❤️

Originally posted by: ._Pari_.

Love the update, Namy. Thanks for the PM. 😊

thank you..😊

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

superb

Thanks..

Originally posted by: niki795

part 1

awesome loved it

Hello, thank you..

Originally posted by: Pinam3

Superb dear... 👏

Thankss😃

Originally posted by: florine_20

Why did u end it do soon. The concept was really good and the updates were fabulous. Very well written. The end was too good. Their unspoken words could been noticed in their gestures, and the promise was the best part

Aww Florine, that's really sweet of you to say that.. I am not good at keeping up with regular updates, hence i finished it.. Sorry if i disappoint you..
Thanks a ton for your wonderful, heartfelt comment.. Glad you noticed the tiny details in the last part.. That was my most fav part.. I am touched.. 😃

Lovely Updates Namy!

I had just typed out this really long reply but it somehow got deleted :(

Anyway, back to your updates! Was such a treat to read them! And no they were not long at all.

I could so imagine RKB getting that "sudden" attack of acidity on seeing his wife talk to some random man. Hota hai Raman. Actually such incidents concerning one's lovely wife often leads to acidity only! 🤣
And then the western attire scenes! I was grinning crazy! The 1st thing that came to mind was "never underestimate the power of any woman Mr.Bhalla, especially if she is your wife!" :P Kya possessiveness hai abhi se!
And the basketball match was a superb scene! I really want to see it on the show! The mother in Ishu could only see the faults of the other children while daddy Bhalla knew his angel of a daughter only too well! And their banter "aapke bhi school mein basketball compulsory hona chahiye tha" Hahahahaha! Epic that was!
Doordarshan family was too good too!
Coming to Shagun, i feel bad for her & her choices sometimes! But i never cease to thank her for leaving Raman. Warna humare IshRa kaise milte?! :D
Loved IshRa's face off! After all, jahan gussa wahi'n pyaar!
And the conclusion was really sweet. After all what better way to make up than to apologize, forgive, forget & hug it out!

And once again, the length is never issue! We are laalchi Ishra fans, the more IshRa you give us, the more we want! ;) Hope you write again soon! :)