The Poetic Drabble Collection#LATEST -'The Sinking Ship' page 14 :)

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: yumna.imad
Awesome poem saima di... 😳

Thank you

But it's a team effort written by both me and Einstein 😊

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome poem
& congratulations to Farz to become dazzler.

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow
Its just...
Just awesome...
Love u bthhh..
Loved dis drabble...

Hey farz Congo againnn

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Rebuild what is precious
Rebuild what is pure ❤️

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Einstein, Sis this was just so beautiful. Every word oozes the pain of falling apart. Am in love with it.

Hope to read more soon.

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aseela sha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Fantastic poem buddies

Its so touching

My heart also bleed by reading this

Sach mein i love it

Somewhere in my heart something broke😭

Some sad memories came alive

Thanks for pm

Keep writing

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

So cute drabble di😳
Beautifully written.
Lovely.. Keep writing👍🏼

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

i so loved it Saima D,..
TFPm,..

these lines were ❤️

You left me
That is true
I left you
That too, is true

and these were touching n moving

A drop of dew
A drop too few
A mighty might
A feeble fight
Lonely nights
Tears of plight
Trembling hearts
Shatter apart
Life's a moment
But it's now all white
Come one night
Came one knight

keep writing,.. and making people love yah,..😳