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waiting for update

Di when will u update this ss of urs??? Di plz take some time out of ur busy day n update it soon

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Omg!!! Opps... Radhika...Alina...Rasika...I am still working on it... I have written up to 12 pages but still few more to go... and I am very much stuck up with work today... I will try to post it tomorrow or Max by Thursday ... Pakka promise... I am trying my best... My problem is I am reading comments on my other story and my mind diverting constantly in to other story... But I will try my best... Love U all for update request... 😃

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
awesome...
nice one...
Jalal is so impressed and impacted by Jodha's beauty and bravery...
Jalal forced himself on whom?
Moti or Jodha?
and this Ruquiya and Maham grrr...
Jalal though he told her off but got close with her...
grrr...
wow hes once again impressed seeing her love and closeness for Rahim...
and she told him too what misunderstanding...
and Ruqaiya didnt bother to look after Rahim...
cont soon...

I am so excited always to see your comment... Jalal full on gone case... Yes...Radha is super character in this story... Thanks

Originally posted by: JalalLovesJodha

amazing chapter. I have no words left. you have revel one secret and with another clue shocked us. Moti is that so. I doubt, you are trying to confuse us but I am sure it's Jodha. Jalal has done something wrong to Jodha. Why Jodha stayed three extra days. Mainavati mentioned she was coming alone from Aashram through Jungle. I am sure something might have happens and she went back to ashram. I am loving this suspense and love to revel it. I do read a lot suspense novel. you are constantly giving us clue and diverting our mind. Why Mainavati suddenly agreed for this mission. did Jodha told her something? Why Jodha is singing sad song. Why her eyes has sorrow in it? Why she got fear seeing Jalal. I thing Jodha is very brave girl. For Moti will not impact her that intense . It is her something went wrong with her. Can't wait for suspense. You have no idea i am enjoying this story like anything. Best about your story in suspence you giving us so much hint with diverting our mind at the same time. Marvelous, you deserve clap for this story.

What is this? Ruqaiya and Jalal? I have read that so passionate but I want this passionate love for Radha not for Ruq. Any way you have written it beautiful. You successfully shown his attitude towards women. as you mention mechanical is correct word. and I am so happy the way he behave with ruq. He does look like Shenshah in this story. he not weak from any angle.

best part he care about Rahim and act like responsible father. well done. Love entire part and kiss to Radha. He is very much decent with her. Song beautiful. Radha cleared Misunderstanding beautifully. They are in same hojra. vow entire night Jalal looked at her.

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY FIRST ! IT IS A REQUEST. I AM BIGGEST FAN OF THIS STORY. I USUALLY DON'T LEAVE THIS BIG COMMENT BUT THIS STORY IS SO DIFFERENT. WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER. THANK YOU FOR EMAIL.

Vow I am so touched by your comment... I am speechless.. I are very close... I can tell U read all the suspense novels... lol... Sorry for this short response... but I do love to read your comment.. sometime I read your two to three time.. please comment... and soon you will find suspense...

Originally posted by: alapi

luvly superb awesome story di😃i jst luved the new concept a lot😛nd i really luved rulal part...watevr be the reasons atleast u wrote dem 2gether...pta ni kyu show itna degrade kr rkha h ruqu baby k character coz i really lyk Lavina nd the cutie pie ruqu in the badal-kajri trak😳bt ja forced himslf on moti bai😲plz reveal the back story soon...i jst wish ki wo galti se hua ho...nd jo kya usse beizzat krne ayi ya phir marne😲btseriously AWESOME STORY DI👏👏PLZ update soon...

Thank U so much... U loved this new concept... U loved Ruqlal... Omg... thank u so much... I agree in show ruq ka character kafi gira diya hai... Soon Everyone will know the secret... love u...

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Bhavini that was a mind blowing update! Gosh you write so amazing yar!
Everybody including hamida in DEK got to know that jalal was awestruck on seeing radha and then their expressions were so nicely penned..how she changed her reaction from anger to innocence and how he forgot her defensive behaviour and got lost in her doe-like eyes. Then jalal's restlessness was cutely written..then one of the amazing part came when flashback came! Ooh its Moti!! Oho so sad :( Bt i can't believe jalal will do this to her :/
Anyways..Jodha is fully trained man...amer's brave kunwari :)
Then comes the purple part of the update XD I should Thank Heavens that i am 16 plus...Loll no but i really liked that you are very clear with what you wanna show to your viewers as its in your concept and also important for the readers to understand jalal's situation and the way he has been affected by radha. So its understood that it got diverted on ruqaiyya. Needless to say you explained it superbly! His mind aand heart both were only thinking about radha!
I also loved that part where jalal was shown a good person...that he genuinely told ruks that she is wrong and radha is right. And about rahim too.
Radha and rahim bonding is so adorable!! Loved the song and the description.
My favourite part comes :D Whole Jalal Rahim Jodha scene was really nicely done! Jalal's tenderness shocked jodha..soo nyc and that kiss oh god..unexpected...and rahim hahaha hum jung ched denge XD Absolutely Loved It!
Meena bazaar clash! Update soon wanna read :D
P.s sorry for being late again :/

Vow I am so touched by your comment... Thank god U didn't scream about ruqlal... I am so happy U love this story... U one of my fav writer... and compliments from U ... feels great... thanks...

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

beautifully written - please tell me that jalal had nothing to do with moti's rape

lol...Suspense story me kese suspense bata du😆

Originally posted by: rima4ever

sorry i am a bit late for the review
but here it goes

they see each other for the 1st time
both cannot remove their eyes from each other
radha is very angry to see his face
i felt she may kill him with hey eyes
like in the old days the sages and hermits used to do
burn and kill any one who disrespected them
in modern age may be she could shoot him with her eyes
ankhiyon se goli maare types
she was spitting fire with her eyes

poor jalal was really confused
he did not know why was he hated by her
he could feel the extent of her hatred for him
he has many doubts and questions in his mind

Ankhiyon se goli mare😆 Yap I feel some time Jalal is poor baby😃 Jo usk khema banana vali hai😃