THE CHRISTMAS EVE...AY ONE SHOT

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hello all, am back with a one shot but dont worry this time its not saddy😉, harshu u better like this oneand guys its my first attempt of writing something romanitc and cute so i realy dont knw how it is i am stil walking on new waters in this genre so please bear with any flaws and yupp as always your comments are desperately awaited

Please Please DON"T just write reserved its realy disheartening😭 😭neways this is part of AY Fic-a-Thon,

requested by: nitz

concept: AY meeting in a frined's wedding and kind off patching up

Genre : cute(hope i did justice to it😉 )

.....THE CHRISTMAS EVE....

The surroundings was a perfect blend of green and white and the air had a waffle of Christmas Carols and Cookies. Everything had a holy touch and perhaps a cold windy December eve was the best time to seal the promise of love into a lifetime commitment. And ashi was here to witness the same

To her it all seemed so unbelievable it was as if just yesterday when she used to tease and torture her mate to the core running around with her through entire Maurya and now today she was standing right there clad in a maroon lehanga, she perhaps looked the most innocent bride ashi had ever scene. She was nervous and a bit shy but her joy was evident in her eyes and ashi just felt her heart melting at her friend's site. This lady here had done nothing but goodness all her life and now she certainly deserved the best that life could offer. She just went and hugged her tight, both thanking god for gifting them each other and just then their third gift walked in…

"ahaaa..hug hun? Wo bhi mere bina?" MP said in her always cheerful and on the move tone and she just went and swept both her best friends, her life sharers into a possessive hug. This moment really belonged to the three of them, from mare strangers they had walked a long way to become each others pillars of strength. After Maurya life had moved on and they all had taken their own miles towards their dreams but the road was never too far which brought them right back to each other.

MP had turned to be an active NGO worker and in a very short span of time she had now become the leading lady behind many charitable institutions and Vrinda e always wanted to be a doctor and so here she was, the sweetest doc ever who would cry with her patients agony.And as for ashi, after a tumultuous war of mind she finally landed up into crime reporting and she thoroughly enjoyed her job as it gave her the thrills for which she was always hungry. Only last week she had done a story on the prisoners of tihaar jail convicted under TADA and for her it was a nerve-wracking experience. It was so easy to label somebody as criminal but did anyone even realize that there is always an other side of the story too and ashi for the first time saw them as humans and not merely criminals. She wanted to do something for their rehabilitation and MP was ready to help her as she always had.

But today they both were here to walk their mate proudly into the journey of her new life. Yes today one of their's destiny and life was changing forever but they knew that if something would remain undeterred then it would be the feelings which bound them together and just to make sure that this moment was captivated forever in their hearts ashi gave vrinda her wedding gift."Here you go matee" she said to an overly excited vrinda she just snatched it form her hands and tore the wrapping ashi rolled her eyes "so unlike mate to tear a gift wrap but guess the years she has spend with me and mp ar e showing its effects now" she thought. But what lay inside the gift wrap just left vrinda speechless

It was a painting vrinda had made long ago in 11th standard, the three of them sitting on ashi's bed with all of them cuddling together and admiring their favourite pompy pumkin. Vrinda had teas she was shocked to see her painting turned into an embodied silver frame with the words The Three Devils imprinted on it

"you saved this?" she asked in a weak voice.

"mate kuch cheese hamesha hamare paas rahty hai" she said and hugged her "I love you mate"

"hey bhaggu" said Mp with a shaky voice loaded with emotions "don't u guys think we had enough of sentimental fooling now come on both of you, Mr Aman would any minute get a heart attack so its very important to take the doc right next to him right?",

and they all giggled and marched towards the beautiful evening to be remembered forever.

But before going ashi just glimpsed at herself in the mirror. She didn't know the reason why but today she was a bit over conscious and perky with her looks. She just wanted her to look perfect, but only for a certain pair of devouring eyes. She blushed deeply at the though of those dark black eyes and what massive effect they had on her whenever they secretly studied her.

Her image was a flawless white, her gown just fitting her slender curves and revealing every bit of them. It had a beautiful neck which went backless leaving it laden with her long luscious red locks. He would be seeing her with long hairs for the first time and she shivered at the thought of his lingering fingers brazing through them. For a second there she actually felt his touch on hers.

"urggg anvesha wat the hell are you up to girl ? you are still drooling over a man who vanished four years ago without even saying a goodbye?"

Yes after school he had just disappeared from her and her life, leaving her behind as if she had meant nothing at all. She had reasoned so much that he had full right to do so as they never had committed anything to each other. Infact with them there were never any words, they always knew they belonged together. But perhaps she did a mistake by keeping her feelings to herself and taking him for granted that come what may he was hers forever. It wasn't so easy after all. Maybe he had waited long enough for her and finally decided that she wasn't the only girl for him and he wouldn't obviously keep on standing there for her when he had the entire female league wooing him

She had been shocked and shattered but her pride never allowed her to exhibit her pain, so for her friends Yuvraj Dev was just another friend of hers. Only her heart knew that he was just the one man whose arms made her feel protected and cherished. In the past four years there had been several men in her life but just one word had vanished four years ago and that was Love who if bhaggu wished would come back to her tonight.

She knew she was being a fool expecting him to still be the same old psycho of hers. Four years was definitely a long time and she literally had no clue as to what he has been up to since then. Maybe the Yuvi who would walk in today would be a total stranger to whom she might not be able to relate, maybe he would walk in with a ravishing beauty with two kids in his hands….her blood boiled at this thought though,

"2? ya right 2 is too small a number considering how active he is in……"

She rolled her eyes and just crossed her fingers tighter preying that the man who walks in is the same one who swept her off her feet and made her fall hard over his deadly looks and even deadlier heart

The evening processed and as each minute went by ashi grew more and more nervous and a bit scared. Her heart would again suffer huge pain if he didn't come today. She had pinned all her hopes of seeing him tonight, but there was no sight of him as yet. To keep her sanity she got busy in the activities of the wedding and was searching desperately for a wacked out place to hide Aman's shoes and suddenly she knew where exactly to hide them

She slipped out unnoticed towards the fields but she was taken aback with the piercing cold. The central heating in the wedding hall had made her forget that it was a December evening and they were at Shimla where it had snowed just last night.

But the view was a treat to the eye and you could just see white snow dominating the whole landscape and the Christmas decors dancing over it making it a heart stopping site. She felt over joyed and happy in the scented air and she walked joyously towards the huge Christmas tree where she planned to hide the shoes, no one would be as daring as she to come out in the cold and hunt for the shoes she winked mischievously.

But she was unaware of the man who was standing right across the Christmas tree. He had been standing there from the past two hours and now the cold was not even biting his skin as he had forgotten everything but the girl he saw through the window panel two hours ago. He had prepared himself very well for the moment when he would see her but it had all gone futile. He was definitely not prepared for the shock her mystic beauty would give him. He felt as if he was seeing her for the first time ever and was falling in love all over again. He had always hated "the love at first site" concept, it was way too pathetically heavy to digest, but with her he had never had any problems of indigestion, he knew she was capable of making him do "The Impossible".

He was drowning in her huge eyes and her long curls and he longed to hold them and wined his fingers with its thickness. All he wanted to do was to sweep her off her feet and devour her with hungry kisses, but he knew that would have to wait as there were certain things which needed to be said. Though he was pretty sure that even today not much of saying would be needed.

He found himself yearn with desire and love as she approached towards him with a smile that could turn a man into a killer who would do anything to keep it right there on her face

She sat down underneath the huge Christmas tree and he couldn't help but thank Santa for giving him the best Christmas gift ever. Today Santa had given him his life back.

He bend down and said "are you searching for something maam?"

Ashi was shocked as if she wee hearing some wanton ghost's voice. She pinched herself hard to make sure she wasn't dreaming and she had actually heard the voice which never ever left her ears and she apprehensively turned to look at him scared to death as to what would she find.

Her eyes hogged him as if they would never get enough of him. He was wearing a black suit with a white shirt and she swore to bhaggu that this was the best man he had carved with his hair falling over his face just the way she adored them. She hesitated to look him in the eye, inhibited that she might not find her love there. But her heart said confidently not to worry. One look in his eye and she knew her heart was right. He was still hers and would always be. She blushed and released her fingers which were crossed since a long time. Just then the Christmas bell jingled above her and she knew that her wish had been fulfilled.

She could feel the moist tears ready to burst for her overwhelmed emotions but she controlled them and greeted him as best as sanity would allow.

"Yuvi?" She said, "You? Where were you, how are you and what have you been up to? Your old grand pa's look suggests that by now you have some five hundred girl frinds and an equally huge number of kids." She said an gave him the wink for which he had been craving

He couldn't help but laugh hard "So the wacko continues to be the queen of PJs', does she?" He asked very very seriously and she couldn't help but think "Duh huh not only the queen of PJs' but the queen of a certain weirdo's heart as well which truly belongs only and only to me".

They talked and talked as they had four years of catching up to be done. Her heart did a summersault when she learnt that he had been busy finishing his graduation from the biggest MusicAcademy in the world at The CambridgeUniversity. He had sat for its entrance exams during their twelfth standard only and had bagged a scholarship as well due to his brilliant performance.

But he had kept it all a secret. not only to make sure he runs away from his father without any tussle but also because he needed to be away from her, without any promises that would hold either of them back. Yes he knew he loved her and would always do and same was the case with her. But he wanted to live life without her and see how huge an empty void he felt in her absence. He had realized it long back that he was nothing without her, but before seeking her he wanted her to be proud of him which he knew she would only be if he truly followed his heart, and so he did exactly that, and from her expressions it was clear that she really was proud of him.

Ashi could never have respected him more than she did at this moment her heart swelled with joy that his dream was almost near fulfilment and she wished she was a part of him when it all happened.

But none of them voiced their inner feelings. They knew that still the time wasn't right and they had to do a lot of things before finally resting in each others arms.

After an hour of talking Ashi finally said "I guess we should go in everybody would be happy to see you psycho"

"Yaa but you know what looking at the wedding and all I was just pitying the man who would be your groom wacko" he said wickedly

She had to control hard to not to kick him she turned to him with the sweetest smile she could manufacture,

"Really? Umm in that case Yuvi I should warn you", she said coming real close to him and hissing the next words right in his ears "that self pity is very very very fatal for the mind and the body".

With that she left him walking away in a manner which she knew would be stopping his breath. Just before she reached the hall entrance she turned and smiled at him winking and promising him for a dream of a lifetime

He was grinning perhaps the most real grin ever, he shouted, "Two Years, Anvesha, Two Years and you would be mine". He came towards her and before entering the hall stopped just to touch her dimples.

She blushed deeply and as the church bells signalled the arrival of Christmas she said "We Will See Psycho" and they both exchanged one last wink which sealed their love into a lifetime commitment.

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww.... choooo chweeet smrits 😳 .... great one shot... ok, now im ordering u to write an ay one shot about at getting stuck in a room & d two start fiting as to whose fault it is 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwww its lovely smriti ji 👏...esp the start of the 3 devils was mindblowing...too good

As for the AY story...well what better day than the day of Christmas for the 2 of them to commit to each other for a lifetime😳

"Really? Umm in that case Yuvi I should warn you", she said coming real close to him and hissing the next words right in his ears "that self pity is very very very fatal for the mind and the body".

Loved the ease with which Ashi confesses her love for him n kinda flirts with me....thats the best part abt this gal 😳😳....found that to be the best part of the one shot....keep it up smriti n write more dear 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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goshhh goshh gosshhhh......Simi👏👏.....again you've left me speechless with this one man.... I mean, have you taken the swear, or pledge of making me speechless you crackpot !!!!this is the CUTEST fic ever I've read it was just superb...I loved it man !!! the concept, as usual, your way of expression, hey bhagguuu, didn't you think bout the side business that I suggested mam????arey baat maan baba...you'll earn more than an MBA graduate , when I read the TITLE, I thought it'll be sum grand party or sumthing like that, but wao....it came out to be such a rocking one man...indeed very very very very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cute one, and sumthing really different from your other one shots yarrr, the atmosphere you created rite from the very first para, hey bhaggu, a perfect CHRISTMAS EVE, that too in SHIMLA, ohhhhhh la la laaaaaaaa.... you covered a friendship as well as the most rocking love story thast our AY love story in this one mega one shot gurl!!!! the AASHI, MATE and MP meet, the frame with that rocking THREE DEVILS pic by matey, her wedding, Aashi's description , who wont loose his heart for such a dynamic beauty, and your phrases and expression of words added to its beauty even more man !!!!👏

Her image was a flawless white, her gown just fitting her slender curves and revealing every bit of them. It had a beautiful neck which went backless leaving it laden with her long luscious red locks. He would be seeing her with long hairs for the first time and she shivered at the thought of his lingering fingers brazing through them. For a second there she actually felt his touch on hers.

hey bhagguuuu....This is a total new scene that you've created yarrrrr😃👏it was outstanding, imagining AASHI in such a fantastic outfit..hey bhaggguuuuu!!!!!!!!!!😳😳

in her life but just one word had vanished four years ago and that was Love who if bhaggu wished would come back to her tonight.

awwwwwwwww awwwwwwww awwwwwwww....😭 humari AASHI 😭 but yarr common..Wacko ka Psyco hai nah!!!!!😳 this was a real touchy line, but meant a lot yarrrr....👏👏

She knew she was being a fool expecting him to still be the same old psycho of hers. Four years was definitely a long time and she literally had no clue as to what he has been up to since then. Maybe the Yuvi who would walk in today would be a total stranger to whom she might not be able to relate, maybe he would walk in with a ravishing beauty with two kids in his hands….her blood boiled at this thought though,

"2? ya right 2 is too small a number considering how active he is in……"😳

Aashi being a fool, but really gr8 that for YUVI😳, Four years..hey bhagguuu...but shucks..YUVI coming along with kids!!! 😆🤣🤪 obviously yarr..AASHI ka blood boil nahi..volcanic lava ki tarah erupt ho jayega baba!!!!🤣

Aashi Yuvi is the best and the most unique love story ever, I am really really proud of you Simi, that you always present it in beautiful manner, honestly, I cannot even think of writing ne such one shot man...tujhey hi sabkuch jhelna padega matey!!!😆😆

"Two Years, Anvesha, Two Years and you would be mine". "We Will See Psycho"

this was the strongest line I found in the shot yarrr...you can say off the pavillain, gosh Smriti Singhvi, now I really want ki aap aapney shubh hatho sey CUTE shots likhen 😆😃😊 I'm sure you are gonna rock with this !!!!👏👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww..........sooooooooo sweeeeeeeet ........sooooooo cuteeeeee..... 😳

this is tooooo toooooooo tooooooooo good .......
i truely loved each n every word of it ..... 👏 👏 👏

this was veryyyyyyyy good stuff....... 👏 👏

u r an awesome writer yaar........ 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow wht a shot man!its tooo sweet yaar 👏 am loving it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i told u earlier i luved it..it has d right amount of cuteness 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwww thaank you all of you shoooooo shooo much love you all for the aweshme replies wld comment to each one of you later abhi am in a bit of hurry 😉but am so glaad you all liked it coz i hav written a cute fic for the first time and was damm nervous,was feeling i hav realy made it into a khichadi 🤪

thaanx for all the encouragement and all my frinds here you al better like it else you all can think of your last thee wishes 😉 specially a particular devilzzz 🤪

and shriyaaa nd divzyyyy wen are you both planning to dereserve your post 😭 😭 😭 told you all dnt vanish after reserving its really really sad 😭

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