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SOMEONE SAVE ME



FIRST LOOK


AARTI:

Someone save me please, from this AKDOO husband. How can someone be this much AKDOO? Yeah, ok he is so handsome but so what who gave him right to ignore such a beautiful wife? I agree I am not miss universe, but who behave with his newly married wife like this? God, p[lease someone save me

YASH:

Someone save me please, from this typical girl. How can be someone this much typical? I can understand whats in her mind but god gave her voice cant she say what she want,. Is it neseccery that always man have go ahead? No way I wont give up.

So this is the story of this newly wed. aarti who fall in love with her husband in one look and dying to be in his arms but cant say anything directly and yash don't want to let himself catch in easily, for him why husbands always should take first step only? So he take the policy of "TADPANA" to his wife. Lets see who will win and who will save whom



will update soon, give your views please



part 1 waiting for you below...

PART 2

PART 3

FINAL PART

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Posted: 11 years ago
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SOMEONE SAVE ME
PART 1



Conversation in phone:::


"I am fed up.. how can be someone this much heartless? Paridhi, its so irritating, 7 days up of our marriage, 7 days we are together in one room and I don't think he even looked at me properly..", a irritating aarti said to her friend

Pari: oh, come on aarti, you are not that type of girl who give up so easily. Whats wrong? I think you know very well what to do with your AKDOO.. I mean how to attract and all that.


Aarti: oh stop it pari, what you think I didn't do anything? I am trying from last 7 days, indirectly gave many hints don't know why he don't understand, or don't want to understand willingly.. don't know which moment I agreed for this arranged marriage.. oh god. Someone save me please and more than that give him some brain.


Pari: don't say aarti that you want to get rid from him just now..


Arti's eyes wide open to listen her friend, "are you mad? Who said that? Actually I am sorry, my mind not working and don't know what I am saying.. I cant even think to get rid from him till my last breath", suddenly aarti forget why she upset and love inside her wake up to say her how much she is in love with her husband from the first day she saw him..


Pari: that's my girl, now think how to make crazy your PATIDEV for you. You can do that dear. Don't waste time here use that somewhere else.. bye.


END OF CONVERSATION..


FEW HOURS EARLIER..


Aarti was doing her work. Ironing yash's clothes for office. She is really so busy but her attention break from her work when heard sound of opening door of washroom. A pair of legs come out. Definitely aarti know who is that but still couldn't help to look up to the owner.


And she freeze there for some moment. First time she is seeing her husband like this. His bare upper body. For the protection only towel wrapped around waist. The muscular, well built chest, water dripping from his hair. How to stay normal aarti don't know when such a view infront of her. She didn't imagine this thing before. and when totally unexpected thing happen like this she forget in her work, In that standing position she enter in her dream world. To touch and to be in those strong arms and its little difficult to describe what else.


Yash could feel the eyes of his wife on him and how she totally lost. He just smiled himself to see the effect of him on his darling wife which he didn't confess to her yet. Once he thought to go ahead and continue which aarti's eyes started coz for him also difficult to control when he clearly understanding the unspoken invitation.. but stop himself, "don't let yourself catch in easily yash, thoda aur tadpayo, that she'll come to you herself", yash convinced himself


One burning smell bring both of them in reality and they found the source of burning smell is yash's shirt under iron. When aarti enjoying her day dream to see her husband then iron did its work, and now that is not in position to wear. Yash took that and asked, "whats this?"


Aarti was really embarrassed, couldn't find what to say, "its your shirt", she replied


"I know its my shirt, but whats this?", he showed the hole in the shirt.


"I am sorry", aarti made a innocent face by thinking may be it'll melt yash and may be something more she can get.. but for her bad luck, there no change in yash's expression. So her temper increased and started to blame yash, "if you will disturb me then how can you expect my works will be perfect?"


As expected his answer, "what? Me? When I disturbed you?"

Aarti: who said you to come out like this half naked? Don't you know, now one girl also here in this room?


Yash: excuse me! This is my room also. I can come here however I want. And its your fault that you couldn't control yourself and spoiled your work. If I was in your place then I wont let it happen. Nothing can break my attention from my work..


Yash left stunned aarti there and went to his wardrobe to choose another attire. Aarti looked at him, clutched her fist in anger and marched towards him, tapped his shoulder, not tapped actually hit almost "now what", yash turned and asked..


Aarti: are you saint?

Yash: what?

Aarti: are you saint? Sannyasi??

Yash: what nonsense...

"whatever", aarti marched again and this time destiny out of room..

Yash: couldn't she said what was in her mind? Oh, someone save me from typical behavior of her..

Don't know this is luck or bad luck in this situation but aarti didn't give attention yash's first line but she heard the line of "typical"



At present::

Aarti: mr. yash scindhiya, now I'll see how you'll grief your attention in work in any kind of situation,...


I know may be you'll be dissapointed coz its length not so big, but sorry i cant revail more.. well, dont forget to hit like and comment.. will try to give next part soon.

will be waiting for your comments..❤️

Edited by jhillyarya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Jhil! Nice concept dear... and I'm in..
Waiting for the update..

Congratz on your new story dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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better u can update soon 😳 and save us from this eagerness 😉 😳 ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

Wow Jhil! Nice concept dear... and I'm in..

Waiting for the update..

Congratz on your new story dear...

thank u di.. I knew u'l be in dffntly. It may be 2 part story bt dnt knw about nxt as i gv details alws bt ths time will try to end in 2 part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinnas

better u can update soon 😳 and save us from this eagerness 😉 😳 ..

lol, dffntly i'l try to save u frm eagrnss 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful story.. waiting for ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one...please continue...but take care too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Nice one...please continue...but take care too...</font>

lol, dnt worry i wnt gv updaye widout tkng rest.. Thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh jhil 🤗 hope u r doing well now
very nice interesting prologue 😉
update soon otherwise someone has to save u from me ...😉 just kidding
take care😃 update when u r free😃

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