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Posted: 11 years ago
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soon dear, updating...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SOMEONE SAVE ME


FINAL PART..




Lazy eyes don't want to open, they need more rest but sunrays not servant of anyone so it did its work at time.. when dream also not leaving chance to be more beautiful, then who want to come back from dream and when open eyes then also favorite person beside then who want to loose the grief behind and go for daily chores?? and the main thing is when they discover new feelings and many more things about each other, then what need to think about other things like daily routine?

The wish come to yash's mouth, "so what my wife's wish now? Want someone to save you or ...??"

She stroked his cheek, "who said that? But I have a question, how was your typical wife?"

"I didn't know will get this much profit for using that word only?, wow, I have to use that more, so I am ready to get your that roop again of previous night again.."


Aarti looked at him with surprise, just yesterday she thought different about him, and today totally in romantic mood.. oh aarti, you missed this whole 7 days. "she bring her lips to his ear, "BESHARAM", she bit there and before yash could react aarti ran to washroom and yash missed the chance to give reply of aarti's action.



After few minutes there was a knock on door of washroom, it was aarti, "yash, can you please give me the towel, I forget to take..."


Yash remember how in hurry she rushed from him and now she asking for towel.. great what a beautifull opportunity come to take revenge, he have to use this perfectly.. when he was handed over the towel from the corner of the door felt a sudden pull and within a second he was inside of the door in front of aarti. Once again he was surprised, he was thinking to do that but he didn't do anything, its his wife, who did that..


Aarti read the surprise in his face, she placed her hands around his neck, "what my dear husband thinking?"

"I am thinking, this should be my action, you read my mind or this activity comes from you?"

"why, only husbands can ask towel to wives and pull them inside? Is that your birth right?


Yash had to laugh for aarti's this question, what should be answer of this question?, "no dear, you also have equal right, now may I know the reason why I am here? I mean, the reason of asking towel and pulling me here?"

"you don't know?, I have to explain?" aarti showed fake anger, "is that only my wish?"

Yash pulled her closer, "then get ready for another saving game," yash whispered in her ear... after this, it was not possible to save anyone from other and no one allowed to do that also..


At late afternoon they had to get up from each other's loving embrace as their stomach calling, that need food after this much activity.. only noodles was in the lunch for them. Only that aarti can made, truly yash allowed to make that only,as that take less time to made, promising her dinner can come from outside at night but now he wont leave her for a moment also.. now little distance also not bearable.

"by the way, I didn't know this akdoo can be this much romantic also.." aarti said placing her head on his chest

"and, I didn't know who was acting typical till yesterday can be this much demanding and dangerous"

"aarti pushed him away, "don't you dare yash to utter the TYPPICAL word again, I am not typical, if you'll say again then will see worst of me.."

"well, I saw the result of saying that yesterday and today also, then why not?," yash said with mischievous smile..

"but you'll see the opposite now, I swear, "may be aarti is getting temper now, so yash didn't want to spoil the mood also," is that so? Then ok.. your wish accepted."

Aarti: "but, excuse me, why you were running away from me till yesterday?"

"and who said so?"

"I am saying, proof is last 7 days.."

"you are also not so less madam, same to you.."

And the argument reached the climax with another thing, aim was who was saying truth and who was running away



Next morning yash wake up with some different feeling and soon he understand aarti is withy temperature. And that was this much high that she couldn't even open her eyes even and blubbering his name only.. he become very much worried, he tried her to open eyes but no result..

All yash could do made her wear her wearing and call the doctor.. he felt his eyes become wet, a fear covered his mind, this may be simple fever still he couldn't stop being tensed.. from doctor's word it was clear that this condition for cold. Yash didn't late do to understand that this is result of rain, they were in rain long time and next day also long time under shower.. he was scolding herself for giving her company in her childish work..


3 days yash didn't go to office, only took care of aarti but tried to save himself from her demanding eyes, hardly he looked at her directly, he knew she need rest, so its better to control himself..


And these 3 days again was a punishment for aarti..firstly she was so weak and over that yash was avoiding her, not like before but still.. and another thing is she loving him more for care towards her, it made her want him more and more

After 2 dsays, yash was working on his table, aarti was staring at him and yash could feel the gaze, he again smiled for her restlessness,


"someone save me..." aarti said loudly so that yash cant avoid the word anyhow..

Yash looked at her surprisingly, these words usually for him when they are close or for teasing each other but why now? They are in enough distance now then why she said like this? "what? From whom?" yash asked

"from this.." aarti pointed at him..

Yash looked around to assure there no other one expect them, so this is for him, "from me? What I did??"

Aarti shook her head in no, "not you.. from this,, DOORI (distance), she showed the gap between them and pouted..

Yash wanted to show his serious face but couldn't save himself from the smile., "and who will save you??"

"yash please, don't play more.." aarti become irritated

"someone save me too from this doori", yash opened his arms and aarti didn't waste a moment to ran there and the THE SAVING GAME start again...😉😳




finally it comes to end.. dont know how was it. sorry for the late but please give your views.. thank you so much for be with me in it also.. will update BE WITH ME also tomorrow i hope.. thank you once again..

Edited by jhillyarya - 11 years ago
KratikaSengarKS thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
OMG 👏 Speechless Jhil

Hats Off To You 🤢👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Very nice ending thanks for sharing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Someone Save Me from this OS. 🤢
This is the first OS I read after I came back after more than a month and read it in one go. 😳

OMG I'm ☺️ After reading this.
I had heard and read that first love always create rifts between current lovers. But who knew that first love (Rain) will bring two longing souls together and unite them forever in a sacred and unbreakable bond?

Loved it Jhil and thanks so much for such a beautiful and dreamy OS 🤗
Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
very nice 😃
Edited by AMIT_TheFanOfGC - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey, it's superb. Their someone save me game was awesome. Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Typical" baba ki jai ho...
d word typical nd some one save me, can these words b so romantic,its jus Jhil can answer it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its a delight reading your work jhil
light hearted cute funny sweet n lovely dear
its a beautiful reide n thorighly enjoyed the saving me between typical and akdoo
awesome one loved it to the core👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KratikaSengarKS

OMG 👏 Speechless Jhil

Hats Off To You 🤢👏


thank you so much swera dear..😉

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