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Keerthana_KSian thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept dear..loved 1st chpt... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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how are you feeling jhil 😛 dont stress much ok...

your concept was so nice and anticipating.. i am waiting to see who gives in first to the others wish... loving your style of writing dear.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jhil d update s hilarious...
The conversation bw Paridi nd Aarthi s amazing on how a newly married wife ll do lol...
Yash tries his possible ways to impress his better half coming half naked nd his efforts paid him 2...Aarthi jus gets lost in his dreamland causing his attire to burn...Its fantastic...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keertana_KSian

Nice concept dear..loved 1st chpt... 😊


THANK YOU..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: maha9

how are you feeling jhil 😛 dont stress much ok...

your concept was so nice and anticipating.. i am waiting to see who gives in first to the others wish... loving your style of writing dear.. do continue soon..


i am fine now maha di.. thank you so much for the concern
and thanx for appriciating my work. will update soon, hope you'll like nexts also.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nirmalac99

Jhil d update s hilarious...
The conversation bw Paridi nd Aarthi s amazing on how a newly married wife ll do lol...
Yash tries his possible ways to impress his better half coming half naked nd his efforts paid him 2...Aarthi jus gets lost in his dreamland causing his attire to burn...Its fantastic...


thank you so much nirmala di for liking it.😊
yeah poor aarti, what she can do ?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you so much my every friends for this much supports and lovely comments. it was really over my expectations.. i really enjoyed while reading all the comments. so here the next part , hope you all will enjoy.




SOMEONE SAVE ME


PART II

Yash's phone beep.. its third time now, msg from aarti. This time picture of 2 roses..


Aman: yash, I think you should break your promise now, always husband should take first step and I am saying with my personal experience friend so go ahead.. here looking like aarti is restless.


Yash: no way, I'll prove you wrong, and whats all this? Candles, love shape balloons and rose? she didn't say me anything directly..


Aman: come on yash. What else you expect from an indian wife??


Yash smiled, he know she is restless, but he is also yash scindhiya. Anyhow he wont break his promise, she have to come to him


Now its 4th time and 5th time again his ph. beeped. Once he thought to switch off the phone permanently till he is in office, but how can he do that? After all he also is waiting for all these beeps again and again and enjoying. When he opened next msg, going to keep back the phone but when he saw that properly become surprised couldn't understand at first but then bright smile covered his face which didn't go unnoticed by his friend. Before aman could ask anything yash got up from chair, "will see you tomorrow aman, have to leave now, and please don't ask why.. bye"


Yash left his cabin and before starting the car once again checked the msg.. "am I in hurry? What about the policy of TADPANA?", he asked himself, but its enough.. he become more happy thinking how aarti will be waiting for him.. for assure himself again he checked those. That was a picture of well decorated room and bed like which his room decorated 7 days ago at his weeding night, but that's different thing that didn't use for what that was decorated. This msg only brought a evil smile thinking of his dear wifey's condition but next text msg changed yash's condition where written, "waiting for you, come soon please, cant wait more..." what can be meaning of it? He forgot what he decided. She said almost directly and when she sent such msgs then atleast he should give one chance.. "itna bhi kya TADPANA yash!!!"


He reached to home with so much excitement and hope how aarti is waiting. But after entering in his room get everything empty.. where those candles, roses and all those? And mostly where the sender of those msgs?? With mixed feeling he stepped towards balcony, but one voice stopped him ,"Aap aa gaye!!?"


Aarti was there in her usual look and as ususal yash felt to go an hug her but his promise wala mind said, "control yash.." but her those 3 words which just spoken by her gave him a thrilling feeling, a touch of hidden romance, for which he was waiting till now. He heard again aarti to say, "jaldi se fresh ho jaiye, get fresh soon and get ready also..", she smiled with a blushing smile..


That smile caught yash's breath once, he took 2 steps forward to her and couldn't stop to ask, "why? What the need to get fresh and ready soon? Anything special?"


Aarti lowered her head with that smile, "yeah, definitely special. You forget? Everyone is waiting for us"


Yash's dreamy mind take a break from dream and again his another part of mind said, " take a brak yash, slowly, don't run"... "everyone means?" he asked in surprise, as he expected aarti waiting for him and here what need of everyone's wait for him. What he'll do with everyone? His work his here only.. so whats meaning of everyone waiting??


"in party. I said na my friend's party.. your attire also read, see this time I did my work perfectly" she showed him his dress lying on couch with her innocent look and smiling inside.. that is smile of victory, after all she won the challenge of distract her husband from work and its clearly shown on his face.


Aarti couldn't hide the smile to see yash's face, "what happened? Anything wrong??"


Yash tried hard to not to show his confussion so he back with his akdoo avtar, "whats all those msgs? What the meaning?"


"which msgs?", she blinked her eyes for showing her innocence, "Oh those? I found some of those in internate so thought to share with you and you said na, your attention don't break in any situation so I tried after knowing its impossible. Kausis karne me harz hi kya hai? Hai na?"


Yash was stunned totally. He didn't even imagine, this thing going on her mind, even he forgot about morning after getting her msgs. He still couldn't control to ask, "and whats that, waiting for you asnd all that??"


Aarti now take 2 steps forwards to him, "not all that, waiting for you, please come soon, cant wait.. I was waiting for you na for going party, and I cant wait to go there, that's why.. why? You thought something else meaning of that?" she asked in a naughty tone..


Yash cant loose so easily, he took two steps backward knowing how his wife was 'ullu banayoing' him, he totally become SHIKAR of the game of aarti, "something else? Why I am going to think something else? I have many work to do unlike you who have many time to think all those useless things.."

Yash didn't give up easily, he want another answer also so he again take steps forwards to aarti but this time not only two but few more which cant let stay gap there, "so you were waiting for me only for going to party? Nothing else??"


Now yash's eyes make aarti weak to continue the game but still she managed to say, "what else? Nothing..." she couldn't complete,

"really? Then why all those pictures only, you couldn't find any other thing? What you wanted me to believe?,

She wasn't in position to answer. She was waiting for this closeness from long time and when it come then she become this much weak to even reply back to yash.. yash's words entering in her ear but vanished in mid way before reaching to brain.

"Why don't you accept mrs scindhiya?", this question may be powerful to reach to aarti's brain atleast she thought so coz she replied with "what?"

"that you want me..."



i know this is a small one but i could keep this much only in this part, hope you likes.. get ready for next part coz thats deffinitely coming with aarti's ans and many more..😉. hoping next update on tuesday.. pls let me know your views so that can give more good part in next.

Edited by jhillyarya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Enjoyable update...
Now I'm wondering tadpa kaun raha hai aur tadap kaun raha hai???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
beautiful update..waiting for next update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Enjoyable update...

Now I'm wondering tadpa kaun raha hai aur tadap kaun raha hai???


yup,, both expert in tadpana..😉
thank you for the comment..

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