Blast from the Past Thread #17, pg 72, epi 188 - Page 86

Originally posted by: DurgaS

 

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Episode 190 - 192 

Gham ki Raat   

Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat

Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat

Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat

Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki

Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi

Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki

Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki

 

Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya

Uss behan se nazar mila na paya

Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya

Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya

 

Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki

Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi

Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili

Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki

 

Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi

Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi

Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi

Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

 

 

Translation:

 

The evening of delight became a gloomy night

Stunned in a moment, scattered are the emotions

No one knew nor anyone had been told 

A marriage created tense situations 

 

A fire arose in the hearts of dear ones 

Their cherished young ones had committed a blunder

Everyone asked for the reason

Got no answer, the questions remained 

 

The one for whom this step was taken 

Couldn't meet eyes with that sister  

For her to be happy ever, he hid his pain

He became the reason for her momentary sadness 

 

The reason was not known nor the result 

Only one wish that  jiji gets married

A punishment she got for her good deeds

Every relation slipped away, she remained no one's 

 

The long night has started to set

The incoming storm is now halting

In one stroke, the tables have turned

Not somebody's lover, now she's his wife 

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Originally posted by: DurgaS

 

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit. 

Episode 190 - 192 

Gham ki Raat   

Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat

Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat

Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat

Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki

Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi

Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki

Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki

 

Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya

Uss behan se nazar mila na paya

Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya

Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya

 

Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki

Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi

Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili

Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki

 

Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi

Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi

Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi

Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

 

 

Translation:

 

The evening of delight became a gloomy night

Stunned in a moment, scattered are the emotions

No one knew nor anyone had been told 

A marriage created tense situations 

 

A fire arose in the hearts of dear ones 

Their cherished young ones had committed a blunder

Everyone asked for the reason

Got no answer, the questions remained 

 

The one for whom this step was taken 

Couldn't meet eyes with that sister  

For her to be happy ever, he hid his pain

He became the reason for her momentary sadness 

 

The reason was not known nor the result 

Only one wish that  jiji gets married

A punishment she got for her good deeds

Every relation slipped away, she remained no one's 

 

The long night has started to set

The incoming storm is now halting

In one stroke, the tables have turned

Not somebody's lover, now she's his wife 

DurgaS's Index

Originally posted by: divsarunfan

superb di👏

Originally posted by: Katelyn

Durga, I'm just catching up with all your poems!  They are so beautifully written with intense and heart wrenching moments!  I really enjoyed reading them!  Your edits are lovely too!  Thanks for sharing!!

Originally posted by: AKAD

Nice Durga👏

I can't even rhyme words and you write so beautiful poems..I loved the underlined a lot

Originally posted by: indi52

Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi

Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

last two lines... gave me goosebumps. a whole turning of the universe in them. premika and patni... the two planets she within her, lover and husband the two worlds within him... right now at loggerheads with each other.

beautiful poem.

i wonder reading these lines, durga... do you think the role we play, of wife, husband, etc... these are really guided and nurtured by our dimag, while being premika, lover... that comes straight from the dil and the dil is its only guide?

uff, early morning and your poem sets up so much thinking... love that bit absolutely.

khsuhi's sadness, her helplessness... heart wrenching. i wish i could look into her mind and see where premika quickly gathered her feelings and kept them away so that some day she could return. and also, wasn't there even for an instant in the hearts of these two the lovers present as sindoor and magalsutra took them to the role of patni and pati.