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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 190 - 192

Gham ki Raat

Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat

Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat

Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat

Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki

Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi

Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki

Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki

Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya

Uss behan se nazar mila na paya

Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya

Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya

Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki

Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi

Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili

Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki

Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi

Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi

Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi

Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

Translation:

The evening of delight became a gloomy night

Stunned in a moment, scattered are the emotions

No one knew nor anyone had been told

A marriage created tense situations

A fire arose in the hearts of dear ones

Their cherished young ones had committed a blunder

Everyone asked for the reason

Got no answer, the questions remained

The one for whom this step was taken

Couldn't meet eyes with that sister

For her to be happy ever, he hid his pain

He became the reason for her momentary sadness

The reason was not known nor the result

Only one wish that jiji gets married

A punishment she got for her good deeds

Every relation slipped away, she remained no one's

The long night has started to set

The incoming storm is now halting

In one stroke, the tables have turned

Not somebody's lover, now she's his wife

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Nice Durga👏

I can't even rhyme words and you write so beautiful poems..I loved the underlined a lot

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 190 - 192

Gham ki Raat

Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat

Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat

Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat

Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki

Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi

Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki

Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki

Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya

Uss behan se nazar mila na paya

Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya

Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya

Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki

Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi

Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili

Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki

Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi

Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi

Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi

Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

Translation:

The evening of delight became a gloomy night

Stunned in a moment, scattered are the emotions

No one knew nor anyone had been told

A marriage created tense situations

A fire arose in the hearts of dear ones

Their cherished young ones had committed a blunder

Everyone asked for the reason

Got no answer, the questions remained

The one for whom this step was taken

Couldn't meet eyes with that sister

For her to be happy ever, he hid his pain

He became the reason for her momentary sadness

The reason was not known nor the result

Only one wish that jiji gets married

A punishment she got for her good deeds

Every relation slipped away, she remained no one's

The long night has started to set

The incoming storm is now halting

In one stroke, the tables have turned

Not somebody's lover, now she's his wife

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Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi

Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

last two lines... gave me goosebumps. a whole turning of the universe in them. premika and patni... the two planets she within her, lover and husband the two worlds within him... right now at loggerheads with each other.

beautiful poem.

i wonder reading these lines, durga... do you think the role we play, of wife, husband, etc... these are really guided and nurtured by our dimag, while being premika, lover... that comes straight from the dil and the dil is its only guide?

uff, early morning and your poem sets up so much thinking... love that bit absolutely.

khsuhi's sadness, her helplessness... heart wrenching. i wish i could look into her mind and see where premika quickly gathered her feelings and kept them away so that some day she could return. and also, wasn't there even for an instant in the hearts of these two the lovers present as sindoor and magalsutra took them to the role of patni and pati.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: divsarunfan
superb di👏

Thanks Div. Love that emoticon. So cute. 😳

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Katelyn
Durga, I'm just catching up with all your poems! They are so beautifully written with intense and heart wrenching moments! I really enjoyed reading them! Your edits are lovely too! Thanks for sharing!!

Aww, thanks Kate. You like the edits? Thanks, I am still in the elementary level, though. There is so much I feel I could do with those caps.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: AKAD

Nice Durga👏

I can't even rhyme words and you write so beautiful poems..I loved the underlined a lot

Thank you so much Divya. Yes, those lines were the most painful ones.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: indi52

Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi

Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

last two lines... gave me goosebumps. a whole turning of the universe in them. premika and patni... the two planets she within her, lover and husband the two worlds within him... right now at loggerheads with each other.

beautiful poem.

i wonder reading these lines, durga... do you think the role we play, of wife, husband, etc... these are really guided and nurtured by our dimag, while being premika, lover... that comes straight from the dil and the dil is its only guide?

uff, early morning and your poem sets up so much thinking... love that bit absolutely.

khsuhi's sadness, her helplessness... heart wrenching. i wish i could look into her mind and see where premika quickly gathered her feelings and kept them away so that some day she could return. and also, wasn't there even for an instant in the hearts of these two the lovers present as sindoor and magalsutra took them to the role of patni and pati.

Thanks Indi. And thanks for those thoughts I've been having myself since morning after reading your comment.

Premika and patni, is there really a difference? Except that one has a legal stamp along with assignment of certain duties. Apart from that, the way a woman looks at her man doesn't change much. When it is between him and her, dil will always come into play, be it love, anger, jealousy, passion, possessiveness, etc. Each and every emotion is guided by the dil. Of course, in the setup of a family, dimaag too is brought in. But left to just these two, it is dil all the way.

The lovers in Arnav and Khushi never left. They are right behind that veil of hate and misery, trying to seek an explanation to the pathos that they are made to face. I am pondering on the I hate you scene, trying to find words for the emotions that they are going through at that moment. A strong tug of war on between the heart and mind, which is making A and K more and more miserable.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

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Episode 196

Nafrat

Arnav:

Mere dil ko jagaakar mujhko daga diya

Ek dhokebaaz se milkar, sabko dhoka diya

Maasoomiyat ka parda chehre se hat gaya

Nafrat hai mujhe tumse, tumpe kyun aitbaar kiya?

Ye zaroorat thi ke rok loon sailaab zindagi ka

Jaanta na tha ke iska aisa asar hoga

Chaahkar bhi rok na paaoon tumhari aankhon ka toofan

Nafrat hai ke tumhare kaaran, main phir bana shaitan

Khushi:

Aasmaan pe bithakar humko gira diya

Sapne haseen dikhakar kohre mein dhakeldiya

Sab chodkar chaldiye, reh gaye hum akele

Nafrat hai humey ke aapne chot diye itne gehre

Hazaaron sawaal they, jawaab na de paaye

Na Di se, na Jiji se, dil ka haal suna paaye

Kyun maan aapka rakha, kyun na kisise keh paaye?

Nafrat hai humey aapse, ke majboor itne ho gaye

Translation:

Arnav:

You awoke my heart and deceited me

Along with a cheat, you cheated everyone

The veil of innocence removed from the face

I hate you, why did I trust you?

It was necessary to stop the incoming torrent of life

Didn't know that it would have this effect

However I may wish, can't stop the storm in your eyes

I hate you for because of you, I became a beast again

Khushi:

You took me to the skies and dropped me from there

Made me see lovely dreams and pushed me into a haze

Everyone went away, I am left alone

I hate you for you gave me such deep wounds

A thousand questions, but couldn't reply any

Neither with Di nor Jiji could I open up my heart

Why did I heed your honour, why couldn't I tell anyone?

I hate you for I became so helpless

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 196

Nafrat

Arnav:

Mere dil ko jagaakar mujhko daga diya

Ek dhokebaaz se milkar, sabko dhoka diya

Maasoomiyat ka parda chehre se hat gaya

Nafrat hai mujhe tumse, tumpe kyun aitbaar kiya?

Ye zaroorat thi ke rok loon sailaab zindagi ka

Jaanta na tha ke iska aisa asar hoga

Chaahkar bhi rok na paaoon tumhari aankhon ka toofan

Nafrat hai ke tumhare kaaran, main phir bana shaitan

Khushi:

Aasmaan pe bithakar humko gira diya

Sapne haseen dikhakar kohre mein dhakeldiya

Sab chodkar chaldiye, reh gaye hum akele

Nafrat hai humey ke aapne chot diye itne gehre

Hazaaron sawaal they, jawaab na de paaye

Na Di se, na Jiji se, dil ka haal suna paaye

Kyun maan aapka rakha, kyun na kisise keh paaye?

Nafrat hai humey aapse, ke majboor itne ho gaye

Translation:

Arnav:

You awoke my heart and deceited me

Along with a cheat, you cheated everyone

The veil of innocence removed from the face

I hate you, why did I trust you?

It was necessary to stop the incoming torrent of life

Didn't know that it would have this effect

However I may wish, can't stop the storm in your eyes

I hate you for because of you, I became a beast again

Khushi:

You took me to the skies and dropped me from there

Made me see lovely dreams and pushed me into a haze

Everyone went away, I am left alone

I hate you for you gave me such deep wounds

A thousand questions, but couldn't reply any

Neither with Di nor Jiji could I open up my heart

Why did I heed your honour, why couldn't I tell anyone?

I hate you for I became so helpless

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nafrat hai mujhe tumse

nafrat hai humey aapse...

something curiously grand in those words, almost regal their bearing.

i feel their mess within, their pain... their voices rising in agonising emotion and settling on the word that might bring an end to this terrible feeling. nafrat. like of you said it some part of you will feel better. thanks for this moving poem.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 196

Nafrat

Arnav:

Mere dil ko jagaakar mujhko daga diya

Ek dhokebaaz se milkar, sabko dhoka diya

Maasoomiyat ka parda chehre se hat gaya

Nafrat hai mujhe tumse, tumpe kyun aitbaar kiya?

Ye zaroorat thi ke rok loon sailaab zindagi ka

Jaanta na tha ke iska aisa asar hoga

Chaahkar bhi rok na paaoon tumhari aankhon ka toofan

Nafrat hai ke tumhare kaaran, main phir bana shaitan

Khushi:

Aasmaan pe bithakar humko gira diya

Sapne haseen dikhakar kohre mein dhakeldiya

Sab chodkar chaldiye, reh gaye hum akele

Nafrat hai humey ke aapne chot diye itne gehre

Hazaaron sawaal they, jawaab na de paaye

Na Di se, na Jiji se, dil ka haal suna paaye

Kyun maan aapka rakha, kyun na kisise keh paaye?

Nafrat hai humey aapse, ke majboor itne ho gaye

Translation:

Arnav:

You awoke my heart and deceited me

Along with a cheat, you cheated everyone

The veil of innocence removed from the face

I hate you, why did I trust you?

It was necessary to stop the incoming torrent of life

Didn't know that it would have this effect

However I may wish, can't stop the storm in your eyes

I hate you for because of you, I became a beast again

Khushi:

You took me to the skies and dropped me from there

Made me see lovely dreams and pushed me into a haze

Everyone went away, I am left alone

I hate you for you gave me such deep wounds

A thousand questions, but couldn't reply any

Neither with Di nor Jiji could I open up my heart

Why did I heed your honour, why couldn't I tell anyone?

I hate you for I became so helpless

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Thanks Durgey for spewing all that beautiful hate!💔 My heart goes out to them when one says

Nafrat hai ke tumhare kaaran, main phir bana shaitan

and the other

Nafrat hai humey aapse, ke majboor itne ho gaye

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 196

Nafrat

Arnav:

Mere dil ko jagaakar mujhko daga diya

Ek dhokebaaz se milkar, sabko dhoka diya

Maasoomiyat ka parda chehre se hat gaya

Nafrat hai mujhe tumse, tumpe kyun aitbaar kiya?

Ye zaroorat thi ke rok loon sailaab zindagi ka

Jaanta na tha ke iska aisa asar hoga

Chaahkar bhi rok na paaoon tumhari aankhon ka toofan

Nafrat hai ke tumhare kaaran, main phir bana shaitan

Khushi:

Aasmaan pe bithakar humko gira diya

Sapne haseen dikhakar kohre mein dhakeldiya

Sab chodkar chaldiye, reh gaye hum akele

Nafrat hai humey ke aapne chot diye itne gehre

Hazaaron sawaal they, jawaab na de paaye

Na Di se, na Jiji se, dil ka haal suna paaye

Kyun maan aapka rakha, kyun na kisise keh paaye?

Nafrat hai humey aapse, ke majboor itne ho gaye

Translation:

Arnav:

You awoke my heart and deceited me

Along with a cheat, you cheated everyone

The veil of innocence removed from the face

I hate you, why did I trust you?

It was necessary to stop the incoming torrent of life

Didn't know that it would have this effect

However I may wish, can't stop the storm in your eyes

I hate you for because of you, I became a beast again

Khushi:

You took me to the skies and dropped me from there

Made me see lovely dreams and pushed me into a haze

Everyone went away, I am left alone

I hate you for you gave me such deep wounds

A thousand questions, but couldn't reply any

Neither with Di nor Jiji could I open up my heart

Why did I heed your honour, why couldn't I tell anyone?

I hate you for I became so helpless

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"Nafrat hai ke tumhare kaaran, main phir bana shaitan" ..

Aasmaan pe bithakar humko gira diya

Lovely poem Durga.. How hurtful when they said the words I hate you.. I really liked these 2 lines.. He never was shaitaan but always that gaping hole in his heart.. a shadow living in the past.. but she came in and brought color, sound, laughter into his life. He knew his ma wouldn't be happy with who he was and that gave him a shaitan like feeling. Hadn't he told Khushi just that? And then when he finally becames softer, alive he is almost forced back to being ruthless. And to make a girl feel most precious. Increase those dhakne and then suddenly force her to marry him. The girl had looked so beautiful in those days.. You know the night of their marriage when Khushi came into the room and walked upto him and cried I felt she hadn't really grasped that he did it out of hatred. Part of her may have hoped it is some veiled laad governor way of loving her. And then all this hatred.. nafrat.. uff.. 💔