It's Pay Back Time..!!(ZaYa FF) chap1 updated..!!!

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TheShySoul12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello people..!!! finally after so many days i'm finally going to pen down some thing on ZaYa..well people who know me from other forums would definitely know how good i'm at writing fics..but what to do i'm an sadistic person who loves parashano -fy other people... So Please Be Patient while you reading this fic... this one is going to be an action thriller..(if every thing shapes up well..😆😆)..right from child hood i always love action ..so you can expect lots of action sequence in this fic..!!

Authors Note:

This Story does not have any sort of connection with the show's story line.. i'm gonna use only the characters of the show .. the rest all will totally be Just my imagination ..as the story is going to be imaginary one it may really lacks logic at times.So Don't try to find logic in this..you may end up getting hell confused..just keep enjoying the flow of the story ...!!

The names,places,people,things,themes,sequences,situations and everything used in the story are purely friction ..resemblance to any kind of reel or real things is just purely coincidence..and yes the continuation of my story will totally depends on the number of comments i get ..well i'm not going give any sort of character sketch for the story as i think if i do so all secrets of the story would be out ..so i gonna start this with an prologue.. I never do proof-readings.So pls kindly ignore the Typos.. the prologue is in the next post ..😳😳

Hope you guys will have an great time reading my fic..Happi reading ..!!

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CH 1: THE NIGHTMARE

Edited by ...Renu... - 11 years ago

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TheShySoul12

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PROLOGUE :

"You shall pay for your Deeds"

She try-ed to shut her eyes more tightly due to the fearful affect that the nightmare was making on her ..her forehead was filled with droplets of sweat..her eyebrow were playing in and out indicating that she was scared..she made her grip tighter on her blanket more tight..that was it she was not able to take the fear caused by the night mare.."No"she crying out..which scared the hell out of her hubby who was sleeping beside her..

"Dear you alright??" he asked her with the great concentration .." I think i'm"she said wipe up the sweat droplet which are now spread-ed all over her face..

"The same nightmare again?"he said give her an glass of water..she nooded her head in yes and took an sip from the glass

"It had been 5 years dear,why don't you just forget everything? "he asked her looking straight into her eyes

" I want to forget it too ..but this nightmare had been haunt me since the incident ... i don't understand why this People just don't let me live happily after their death too "she said in a little angry tone

" I think it high time we should talk to an psychiatrist about this ...and this time i'm not going listen to you ...hope he cloud help you out..taking all this shit from your mind "he said placing his hand on her cheek

"Hmm Okay ..i'm gonna do it for you .."she said smiling at him.

"Okay now go back to sleep..i don't want my wife to look ugly with all those dark circle around her eye.." he said point her eyes

"aww that so sweet of you "she said pulling his cheeks

"Good night"he said planting an kiss on her temple

"good night"she said with a sweet smile playing on her lips..

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Okies i'm done with the prologue ...ya ya i know this one was really weird ..till i update the next part keep guessing about whom and between whom was this convo going on..!!!

And I know It must have been too horrible for all of you to read My Crap .I'll continue this only If I get a good response.So Do tell me your views.so how that?? acha tha ya bura tha ya worst? ..let me know if u want me to write it further or not...please do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed
Love'
Renu

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mridula

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Posted: 11 years ago

intersting concept action and thriller love story i love it.between that husband and wife is ZaYa right.waiting for first part.
sry my like button isn't working.

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vinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh god Renu..this one is definitely too damn interesting!

a hundred things in my head right now!

is the duo ZaYa?

or is it aliya or someone else and the nightmare has Zain?

or is it some other couple altogether and the nightmare has gotto do with ZaYa?

oh hell!

too many thing !

special mention to the first few lines...u nailed it..

the rest was also well written but these lines-i really liked the way explained her fear.. very realistic!

will be waiting for ur updates..

will u follow any pattern or randomly post when ur done with a chapter?

either way..pls do PM me when u update...

Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago

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TheShySoul12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
intersting concept action and thriller love story i love it.between that husband and wife is ZaYa right.waiting for first part.
sry my like button isn't working.

Thank you dear...😳😊

well i don't know ..*shrugging shoulder*..you must wait till the next chap is up to know it ..!!

and its okay ..😃😃

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TheShySoul12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinu127
Oh god Renu..this one is definitely too damn interesting!
a hundred things in my head right now!
is the duo ZaYa?
or is it aliya or someone else and the nightmare has Zain?
or is it some other couple altogether and the nightmare has gotto do with ZaYa?
oh hell!
too many thing !
special mention to the first few lines...u nailed it..
the rest was also well written but these lines-i really liked the way explained her fear.. very realistic!
will be waiting for ur updates..
will u follow any pattern or randomly post when ur done with a chapter?
either way..pls do PM me when u update...

Thank you dear..!!!

i can't revel anything right now vinu .. all i can say is wait till the next chap..😆😆

Phew..so i passed in penning down it well ..*sign*

@Blod :i didn't get what you want to say ..😕😕

and yes will surely pm you if possible add me that could make my work easier..!!

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vinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Renu...

Thank you dear..!!!
i can't revel anything right now vinu .. all i can say is wait till the next chap..😆😆
Phew..so i passed in penning down it well ..*sign*
@Blod :i didn't get what you want to say ..😕😕
and yes will surely pm you if possible add me that could make my work easier..!!

@red..i don't want u to reveal also... let my brain do some work😆😆😆i will keep predicting but don't reply to any prediction...otherwise i'll stop reading😛

@blue... some writers update on particular days of a week..(like mondays or tuesdays...like that)

so i asked if u will do that or update whenever u finish typing an update...

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TheShySoul12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinu127

@red..i don't want u to reveal also... let my brain do some work😆😆😆i will keep predicting but don't reply to any prediction...otherwise i'll stop reading😛
Mei batavungi bhi nahi..😛😛

@blue... some writers update on particular days of a week..(like mondays or tuesdays...like that)
so i asked if u will do that or update whenever u finish typing an update...
Oh okay..i update on random date.. i just update it when my mood is up and i feel like updating or else if some one is behind me with an dand shouting to update...!!!😆😆

i'm in RED...😃😃

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Divya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Coool liked the start...wonder what nightmare r they talking about...I believe the duo ain't zaya bcoz that would be too obvious..waiting for the next part...do pm me...