MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 2, part 20,21,22 on page 84,94,114 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan make geet understand muski needs her
maaneet become freinds 😛
maan promised always going to support her
i love maan so much 😛 thank u for lovely ud👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome & very emotional update loved the way maan handle beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago

part

maan just caressed her back with lots of thinking , he have fear that she don't mistook his touch after some time she come out from his hug and mummer sorry but imm maan stop her and say till now we are stranger to each other , so lets give name to this relation , all say I am amazing friend , can you become my friend , and I promise , iwill support you in your every step geet just trust me once Tear just folling from geet eyes, after 2 and half year, a man act with her in decent maaner, no lust, no touch etc, etc

maan geet shadi kasie hui thi

geet just lost in flashback and say in sad voice she so happy with her parent in her village , she have uncle whose aim only geet parent property , but geet and her parent don't know about it they just blindly trust him , Brije handa , geet uncle who brought rista for geet of dev

Mohinder just trust his brother and withing 10to 15 day geet get married with that Dev, who is just monster in name of human but till our marriage he behaving true gentleman , he say he don't have family he is orpan , and ma babbuji just give their love to him like son , but he just crush that love in no time

sometime I thinks is that possible this are two person , but know destiny laughing on us that how blindly we trust him and get fool of our life and tha damage is above our imagination after saying bye to ma ababji I come with him with so many dream , hope , trust foe our marriage life , but it brake in two hour after we reach hear

geet voice shake foe moment , ijust sitting in room and waiting to him , so many thoughts , shyness , fear etc playing in my mind , his name brought blush on my face ...but it brake with sound of door , when I try to look from my veil , land sleep form my feet , he standing near door with two other man taking money from them , I just froze in my place , don't know how to react , who will be in their SR brought another man in bride room

Toota Toota Ek Parinda Aise Toota

Ke Phir Jud Naa Paaya

Loota Loota Kisne Usko Aise Loota

Ke Phir Ud Naa Paaya

Broken Broken one pigeon was broken such that

It couldn't fix himself

Robbed Robbed who robbed him such that

He couldn't fly again

Toota Toota Ek Parinda Aise Toota

Ke Phir Jud Naa Paaya

Loota Loota Kisne Usko Aise Loota

Ke Phir Ud Naa Paaya

Girta Hua Woh Asma Se

Aakar Gira Zameen Par

Khwabon Mein Phir Bhi Badal Hi The

Falling from the sky

It came and fell on the land or earth or ground

In his dreams still he saw the clouds and dreamed of flying again

Woh Kehta Raha Magar

But he kept saying that

Ke Allah Ke Bande Hasde Allah Ke Bande

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Jo Bhi Ho Kal Phir Aayega


You are a child of God so Keep smiling

Gods Child, Smile! Whatever may happen today, there is always a tommorow

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Allah Ke Bande

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Jo Bhi Ho Kal Phir Aayega

Gods Child, Smile! Gods Child, Smile!

Gods Child, Smile! Whatever may happen today, there is always a tommorow

he look to me for second and give me cold and look , icant forget now also , it shake my body soul also , you know he never touch me for S** , he just went from there and my 6 sense alert me and I just run to door to open it , iam so crying ,scramming in loud voice , bacaho ,bacho , help me help me but no one there , that both just laugh loudly and say yaar is baar to dev ko kya maal mila , hai I just closed my eyes ,, I just want to died on that moment , I know if I live now I will live in hell ...and that happen to me

when that man try to touch me I just slap him hard and next moment door open with full speed , t get another hope that he come for save me but nest moment he just slap me hard and just tied me to be with his friend after what happen I tell you earlier ( last part ) that day I so much hate my self that I am women , women just body to satisfy lust , a s** machine , there touch , ifeel so dirty , my tied mouth even don't give me chance to sceam for my pain , my agony , when that man first time entered in me , I just just died that moment maanji I just died , uske baad to wo touch bhi feel hona band ho gaya , and kab behosh ho gayi and kab hosh main aa gayi pata hi nahi chala

next afternoon I think so they go away from me and he come there to watch me , he just took my hair in his hand and say , that marriage and all just fake , and it is reality you become S*** now enjoy and ha don't even think to suside or run away because , your brije uncle all ready to kill your parent , my one call and they just finish , it just make me numb like stone no life , his word like hammer for me , ijust dead that day

and be ready for tonight and took this pill

I just follow him like Robert , my parent life , this three word

you know maanji , all say it is most beautiful time of human life when they become one in all manner ,new touch , new hope , new bounding , but for me its biggest nightmare for me , and I cant come out from that till now , every night I live that nightmare , with don't know how many touch , how many man , just hate myself , just hate myself

maan eyes turning teary again and again this girl pain is unbearable he just thinking its so hard to heard than how it is difficult for her who face it all in her age of 19/20 oh god

Kho Ke Aapne Par Hi To Usne Tha Ud Naa Sikha

Kho Ke Aapne Par Hi To

Kho Ke Aapne Par Hi To Usne Tha Ud Naa Sikha

Gham Ko Aapne Saath Mein Lele Dard Bhi Tere Kaam Aayega

Only after losing his wings he learned how to fly

Only after losing his wings

Only after losing his wings he learned how to fly

Keep sorrow with yourself, one day this sorrow will ease your pain

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Allah Ke Bande

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Jo Bhi Ho Kal Phir Aayega

Gods Child, Smile! Gods Child, Smile

Gods Child, Smile! Whatever may happen today, there is always a tommorow

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Allah Ke Bande

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Jo Bhi Ho Kal Phir Aayega

Gods Child, Smile! Gods Child, Smile!

Gods Child, Smile! Whatever may happen today, there is always a

tomorrow

he just went near thermos put some tea in cup and give to geet and say in low voice , geet please first took this , than we will talk further , sh also nodded in yes ,because it is not easy for her to tell because she feel it again all over

when she try to took that cup her hand just shaking like anything , maan just put cup aside bring geet near sofa , make her sit there and just again hug her , he don't care about her reaction , he know she need this hug and yes , geet just hug him tightly , and loudly sob in his arm and scram loudly I will not forgive ,this so called Babaji , I always trust him , but he give me life like this and I never ever forgive me , he make me such helpless that ifeel so bad so unlucky that iam women ...maaanji

Aa Aa Aaa

Tukde Tuke Ho Gaya Tha Har Sapna Jab Woh Toota

Tukde Tuke Ho Gaya Tha Aa Aaa Aa

Tukde Tuke Ho Gaya Tha Har Sapna Jab Woh Toota

Bhikre Tukdon Mein Allah Ki Marzi Ka Manzar Paayega

Shattered into pieces

When he broke, every dream of his shattered into pieces

It's the will of God that his dreams got broke into pieces so he accepted it

When he broke, every dream of his shattered into pieces

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Allah Ke Bande

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Jo Bhi Ho Kal Phir Aayega

Gods Child, Smile! Gods Child, Smile!

Gods Child, Smile! Whatever may happen today, there is always a

tomorrow

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Allah Ke Bande

Allah Ke Bande Hasde Jo Bhi Ho Kal Phir Aayega

Gods Child, Smile! Gods Child, Smile!

Gods Child, Smile! Whatever may happen today, there is always a

tomorrow

when geet crying voice come outside room , all get tense , rano want to open door , but geet voice and calling maanji make stop her by dr pinky , pinky say to rano aunty your beti must be open with him , just give them chance , rano with teary eyes nodded in yes , adi just come near her and hug her , rano cried in his arm like small child

inside , maan just cup her face and say don't cry like this geet , and why should you feel unlucky to be women , if you sont have motherhood than how muskan will be part of your life tell me , muskan name brought sweet smile on her face , maan just blow with her smile first time she smile with heart and this smile reaching to her eyes

maan get her restless and ask , you want to stop hear , we will continued afterward , no hurry but you have to promise that you don't hurt yourself or muskan please , geet muskan is most imp part of my life and when you give her bath like that I could not stop myself and I just slap you , sorry for that geet , and geet just put her palm on maan mouth and nodded in no ... both just watching to each other eyes like searching something

just than maan mobile beep and both come real world ,both parted from each other

geet now took brake , called me when you want to talk and please look first muskan , she must be scare ok

geet nodded in yes

after so many days geet openly talk to someone and she feel so light after that like some weight from her heart go away

precap

teaser wala




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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional update.

Geet telling Maan abt her dreadful past. Maan so much pained to hear wat she had to go through.

Making her comfortable by his hug n telling live for Muskaan.

Pls end their sad parts.

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
its such a emotional part ek taraf geet ke parents jinhone kisi pe itna trust kiya ki cross check bhi nahi kiya ki sach main ladka acha hai ya nahi but ye realiy hai aisa hota bahut logo ke sath par har kisis ki life main maan nahi aayega usse us andhere se nikalne ye bhi sach hai aur geet bhag bhi sakti thi par agar usse uske parents ke jaan le li jayegi aisa bol diya ho to vo kaise bhagti n dev jaise darinde aj bhi hai jinhe ladikyaan sirf ek khilona lagti hai i always prey to god ki aisa kisi ke sath mat karo bhagwan so haapy also ki geet ne maan se bahut sari baate boli n here comes maan a possessive dada haan jab geet ke under ka dard thoda kam hua hai to vo tumahri muski ko kuch nahi karegi vaise muski uski bhi to jaan hai maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part di very emotional just lovd maan handlng geet wit so much care nd geet openng up wit maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Painful update
Poor geet what all thing happened with her
Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet...
poor soul...
maan b rone laga aftr hearing her painful past...
bt its good shes opening up...
n the thing bothering me (abt how they got fooled by dev)
u cleared it...
now i want happy wala part..
forgot ki teaser me kyaa tha...
gonna chk again...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet past is painful'
her uncle only betry her and her parents fr money
m literly crying reading it
cont soon
th xn f rpm
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Posted: 11 years ago
in our society we did not like s** women hum unhai najani kaise kasey naam say called kartey hai par koi yeh nahi k us k pechey kitni takleef kitna dard kitni karwaht kitni majbori hogi kiya lachari ho gi us ladki ki
i just cant belive k money k liya log aur relative ur own so cold brother did this
never trust blindly to any one even ur shadow

so pain ful story of geet may be her father know about dev that y his bro killed him

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