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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Welcome in second thread of fate ...
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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 13

rano - accha chutaki you don't open door for me na than I am going , only geet baba and ma called her chutaki

just than all hear sound of door and geet just run to rano with muskan and start to cry loudly kaha gayi thi muje chodke , why you go away , why , she is in real mess , hair coming out from band , drench in water tears failing from eyes , rano just hug her and mummer sorry sorry kahi nahi jaaungi , khi nahi jaanungi ,rano just hug her and aying again and again sorry kahi nahi jaaungi ,poor muskan just watching hear and there and when she saw to maan she just try to went to him with her baby words pa pa uhh uhh , poor maan who just shock with geet state , he just froze in his place

at last maan just shook maan , and say maan muskan , then maan come in real world and saw to poor girl who crying because her pa pa ignore her , maan just run to geet and try to took muskan but geet just hold muskan titily and say no , but rano say geet dekhoo muskan want to go to him , so please give her to him beta , he is maan beta , geet once look to maan than muskan , who try to go maan geet again look to rano , rano nodded in yes and , geet give muskan to maan and say

Geet- dev ko haat mat lagane dena , muskan dirty ho jayagi

maan- just nodded and say yes i will

maan just took muski to him and baby just start to giggle loudly , she just forget that she is crying and try to hold maan nose , cheek and just bite to his cheek , all just giggle on muskan , and muskan just glare to all and just put her head on maan shoulder and start to say in baby language pa opa na na


she just want shoo all and all start giigel again this time Msk give angry glare to all and went to dadi room , after msk went out all break in laughter, rano just mummer pata nahi bada kon hai aur baby kon hai

all just went out from room , nanina , adi and veer sit outside of room , naina just put her head on adi shoulder and say adi bhai in morning maan bro is so happy , after our graduation day I saw him so happy

adi - yes dear I cant forget that day first time maan live that day with full of life ,I just want to him always happy yaar

veer just sitting their quietly , he just lesinoing them , last day his kand , stopping him , and nanina just avoid to look him , veer just lost in past , that day as usual no one come from maan house and maan is in very sad mood and veer cant see him like that , in night party he just add some alcohol in maan drink and after that

flashback

maan just feel something wrong with him the drinks test ,but he ignore and just drink that and veer plan start to work ,maan who in jeans and balack t shirt just went on dance floor and say loudly stop the music yaar

adi and veer start to giggle and naina give them angry glare , they put just there finger on their lips like school going children and nanina just nodded in no


just than they hear maan voice , after so many years , maan just start to dance on stage and all just hooded to his dance , some girl faint with maan voice and dance their dhak dhak dancing and singing

Yaaron Jee bhar ke jee le pal
Lagta hai aaj kal
Daur apna aayega


Friends,live this moment to heart's content
It feels that our era
Will begin in a few days


Yaaron Jo khud pe ho yakeen
Jo zindagi Haseen
Tujhe kal bulaayega


Friends,if you believe in yourself
Life will be beautiful
And tomorrow shall beckon you


just than maan pull veer and adi on stage and three just start to dance on song , they just dancing so perfectely and maan is on full swing , they just happy for him

Yaaron Jee bhar ke jee le pal
Lagta hai aaj kal
Daur apna aayega

Yaaron Jo khud pe ho yakeen
Jo zindagi Haseen
Tujhe kal bulaayega

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Jeene mein


There is a passion for living


Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Seene mein


There is a passion in our heart


Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Jeene mein

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Seene mein

Kahin jaise koi dhun baje
Raahon mein dekho hai manzar saje saare


It's as if a melody is playing somewhere
There are new views on the path


maan just grab one side adi and other side adi and come down from stage and start to dance around nanina , who giving angry glare to them but next second she also joined them , she just match her step with them

Hum Hi Hum Jahan mein
Har jagah
Sapne Sajaane ki Humko mili Wajah


Only we are in the whole world
We have found a reason to make dreams everywhere


Kahin jaise koi dhun baje
Raahon mein dekho hai manzar saje saare

Hum Hi Hum Jahan mein
Har jagah
Sapne Sajaane ki Humko mili Wajah

Yeh agar jo sach nahi
To sach Bhala hai kya


If this is not true,
Then what is?


Yaaron

Apne hisaab se
Dil ki kitab pe kuchh to naya likho


Write something according to you
On the book of heart


Yaaron Anjaam ki fikar
Na karti yeh umar
Phir bhala kyun daro


Friends,this age does not
Care for the result
Then why should we be afraid?


Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Jeene mein

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Seene mein

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Jeene mein

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Seene mein

Hai Junoon Hai Junoon


just than one girl start to come near maan but nanina just pull her away from maan and start to dance with maan , who is under spell of drinks , veer just laugh on nanina and swift moment he just took her in his hand , nanina gigeel loudly , and veer slowely put her down , both body just touch each other sensually and that make blush nanina , she just bend her head and went to maan side for dance , her heart just thudding loudly oh god , just than maan grab to girls and start to dance with them and nanina mouth open with O shape and , veer and adi just laugh in her state pooor girl

Hai Junoon Hai Junoon

Kabhi jo milenge raaste
Pal mein hi chamkegi hansi purani
To Kaho Kya kahoge Phir Humein
Kaise chhupaoge nami yeh palkon ki


When our paths shall cross,
There will be this old smile on your face
Then what shall you say?
How will you hide the tears in your eyes?


Kabhi jo milenge raaste
Pal mein hi chamkegi hansi purani
To Kaho Kya kahoge Phir Humein
Kaise chhupaoge nami yeh palkon ki

Yeh bata hai kya hua
Hua hai kyon Bataa


Tell,what has happened,
Why it has happened?


Yaaron

Yaaron Jee bhar ke jee le pal
Lagta hai aaj kal
Daur apna aayega

Yaaron Jo khud pe ho yakeen
Jo zindagi Haseen
Tujhe kal bulaayega

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Jeene mein

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Seene mein

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Jeene mein

Hai Junoon
Hai Junoon sa Seene mein

Hai Junoon

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

part 14

adi voice brought veer back in present , with nanina and pinky voice , nanina just discussing with her geet case poor boy just put his hand on his cheek after looking pinky , adi just watching pinky without blinking his eyes


nannina just want to bang her head , what a friend she have , she don't want to another stunt from pinky so she just took pinky to geet room

nanina introduce pinky to rano and geet , geet just cant say a word to pinky , pinky try to communication with her but no use , more than 10 days went like that dr pinky just using all ways to open up geet but she cant open in front of anybody , even she don't say about her past to her ma also , one day when rano ma went to took bath , geet just took muskan to her hand and went to bathroom and start to give her bath , but she just using so much force and that hurting baby and she just crying in loud voice ,


nanina and pinky in nanina cabin , and veer and adi went to some work , it is more than 10 minite , just than maan enter in geet room and heard muski cry he just run to bathroom door , in few second so many thought come in his mind

he just froze in bathroom door , because of geet foce , muski body turn red , poor soul just crying but geet just mummer , dirt nkal jaayga , beta dirt nikal jaayega , next moment , maan just clutch his teeth with anget , it is hight now , in her upset mind she hurting muskan , he just pull muskan from geet hand and yell in his top of voice , doc , sister


geet froze with sudden pull and his angry voice , she start to image dev in him and that make her panic , she just shaking like dry leafe , just than rano and dr nanina come their with nurse , maan eyes just turn red with anger , which shake nanina and rano also , maan just give muskan to nannina and say look to her body , I will talk to you all after some time , now just go from her and check musky properly and I say properly


rano , maan beta wo geet


maan just put his palm in front of rano and say in angry tone , not today ma , just live me alone


all just went from there , maan just closed the door of room and start to walk to geet who is in panic state , she just imagine dev and just saying in high voice , stop there , I will not going to any man , please , I don't want to go , muskan ko dirty mat bano please , please , maan just grab geet and just slap her sharply , geet froze in her place and saw to his face , she look that is not dev , it is maan ...tear come in geet eyes ,

Maan - what are you doing with muskan


geet - wo wo giving her bath


maan - till she have injury


geet - wo meri beti hai


maan - beti my foot , if you care for your child than try to come out from your past , try to punish that monster , but no you just lost in your agony , your pain , your hurt , than where is muskan and rano ma geet tell me

maan- every women just crying that they give pain to us , abuse us , but what you do against them nothing just cryibg on your luck , you women are big enemy of yourself , you know fight karne se pehale hi you lost the battle , I hate this crying and all ...


you are such selfish that forget that your 4 month baby need you , all people are around you are fool , who want to come out you from past , pain dr nanina , pinky , rano ma , adi veer , me we all are mad that we will spend all time around you or you want only pity from us , don't you want to save your self respect , your dignity



just than geet start to laugh loudly , maan scare for second

geet


Self-respect, dignity for S*** what a joke


wo to ushi din kho gayi thji jab my own husband put me in front of other man , a drunkan man , on my SR night mr Maan , that drunk man , just touch me hear hear , hear she start to touch her body , maan closed his eyes , he cant see


geet what happen sir , you even cant see than think what happen to me that night , a girl age 20 , who have so many dream in her eyes , who trashed like lifeless doll , what happen to myself that day imagine , when me expecting that my husband , worship me with her love passion to me ... just crushed to lust of other man , Sir


what you think I don't try to fight back , i try my best Sir and for that I got this , she just pull her gown from her legs , maan just froze in his place , there are so mark of burn and bitten in her leg ,inside near her feminist part i try my best to fight back sir , but no one near me who support me , save me no one ,


when he first tied me on bed and just put burning cigarette on my leg i cant yell also because he just tied my mouth with cloth , sir and that is not only punishment but igot next punishment to satisfied his friend for hole night , I just crying , begging but they just hurting me . they never stop for whole night , muje to pata bhi nahi chala when I lost my consonance sir pata hi nahi chala kab main behosh ho gayi pata hi nahi chala

geet closed her eyes , she feel so much wick she shake for second , maan just run to her and took her in his hand ask softly are you ok ...


geet just went away from him and say i don't want pity sir but i am helpless , i am helpless

Precap

Geet past

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
smthing is cooking in ur mind..
mine also
res 😛

part 13..
this ws nice
quite light hearted..
geet opened the room...
n maan-muski soo cute...
n cant believe..maan all talli n dancing 😆
their friendship is smthing i adore soo mch...
the dance part ws lovely..
awsm... 😊
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
mujhe laga hi tha ki aaj 2 update aane wala hai..
love u ...
n meee first...
🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
u made me cry...
[:'(]
bechari geet...
all she said abt her ws soo painfull...
n wht ws her fault...
tht shes a gal...
or she dreamt of a happy life wid her husband...
wht a monster he is...
soo mch happened wid her in such a small age...
cant imagine...
bt i hv a dbt.. how did dev trap thm for marriage..
i mean shadi karne se pehle thy mst hav done background chk of the boy...
any way dev ko chhodo...
geet ws soo lost in her agnoy could not c tht shes hurting her baby...
n maan slapped her in anger..
aur lecture b diya...bt wht geet said abt all tht happenned to her...ye sunn k maan ka muh b band ho gaya...
bht lecture dete hai na men...apne haq ki ladai lado...abb kya bologe maan...
bt geet...abb tum akeli nahi ho...
harr aurat me maa durga hoti hai...apne ander uss shakti ko jagao...
aur uss dusht ka sanhaar karo..
sorry too much hindi...jst got carried away in emotionz..
kehni ki zarurat nahi lovely part as usual.. 😊
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
omg poor geet i want to kill dev😡😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
its really pathetic...but geet should not give up...she should fight fr herself for muski...its tough but not impossible...she should atleast try...
Edited by love2_soma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Poor geet so much happened with her
Awesome update
Next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome update mahi...
aww feel really sad for geets condition...
muski waiting for papa so cute...
wow muskaan and maan are really the best papa and daughter...
muski punishing papa for ignoring her...but wat a cute and sweet punishment...
aww all cant stop their laugh seeing possive daughter and father...
flashback was just mindblowing...
really love the four bond...just they are pillars of support to each other...
maan singinng and dancing so lovely...
song selection really great mahi...
aww geet hurting her muski inorder to get her out of dev memory...
maan seeing geet hurting muski god what has gone in him cant imagine...
maan slapped geet inordet to get her out of shock...
Geet telling her past hurt to maan is really painful..
cant even think wat a 20 year girl has undergo in the name of marriage and husband...
just hate the monster dev more and more...
hope geet shares her all pain to maan and get out of that tourcher soon...
and we all know that whatever may be but maan will be their for her and muski...
hope geet recovers soon and punish that monster...
thank u for such wonderful updates mahi..
love u...

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