MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 2, part 20,21,22 on page 84,94,114 - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago
what a twist!!
i loved it
his family is creep. i just wish they all die brutually
so it is confirmed that he is d father of geet's child
waiting for geet & maan convo
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you dev you did some thing good muski maan ki beti ...hope geet make maan light bec he is not culprit ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
oh that's how maan landed in that room
maan's family is too much😡
but good that he have best friends like veer, naina and adi!!!
what geet's want to talk with maan??????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice update
Awesome story
Please continue soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story muski maan ki beti nice twist...I hate maan family... maan k dost aache...waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 20
nice...
OMG poor Geet and Maan...
cont soon dear...
Edited by spvd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was really a twist
maan is muskis father
adi n veer told how he was drugged
by his own family to spoil his image
they have kept in dark that he doesnt know about that day
now maan is in guilt
after knowing truth what will geet do now..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago

part

maan sitting their on chair with closing eyes he don't want to saw anyone he just want to stay alone after some second geet took long breath and say in deep voice , I want to talk him alone please , all look to each other , adi nodded in yes and all went from their to give privacy to maaneet


they come out and nanina just hug adi and say , why always maan bro have to suffer why he don't get any happiness in his life why ...she just crying like small baby , veer feel pain to see all like this but he also helpless

But adi have soft smile in his face when veer notice that veer got some relif and ask him what was he thinking

adi - nanina , veet I have hope from geet

veer and nanina give confused look to adi , adi say if geet don't trust us than she will be react other way like he slap maan or other way but she hear us clamly and her face telling that she trust on us , and upon that she want to talk with maan and that give hope for me

big smile come on nanina and veer face and both just hug adi and say in union sachhi adi bhai , adi just nodded in yes , he know whenever his friend get emotional they called him bhai and he love that , adi just hug them back and say now stop this emotional drama and went to your work ok ...


hear in room there is all silence , geet want to talk with maan but serching for word and maan just lost in guilt , he think for himself that he also be women who want only women body , how he lost control when someone drug him like that ,no it is biggest crime for him and he feel so giulty for that it will be not excuse for his crime , he just took deep breath and say in painful voice

maan- I cant even ask sorry from you because I make sin not mistake and for sin there is only punishment ,from childhood I hurt from my closed relation


at that day my mother so much try to protect me and just shu me away from her when she herself in pool of blood and that knife in her struck , I just want to her relief from that pain so I pull that out and same time door get open and I found as murderer of my own mother 5 year boy called as murderer by his own father ...

But with dadi support icome from that past dark past with help of my fiend who are family in true meaning but you know I have little hope in my hear that one day my family accept me but today after hearing all them I lost my all hope and I pushed in deep dark valley from my own so called family for money , power , business ...

I feel dirt on my body on my hand who use ...like that I just I just and maan just stand form his chair and forcefully bang his hand on near wall geet frozen her place , it is too much for her maan just punching wall with his hand he just roaring like lion why me why my family play such dirty game like this why I am also like that who use women body just body I broke my hand I want to broke my hand

just than someone turn him around and slap him hard it is geet who don't know how to stop maan , blood just coming from maan hand , maan just bend his head geet took him to sofa and took first aid box from drower and start to clean his hand , but maan just pull back hand and say geet let it be , it is dirty blood geet behe jane do isse


geet first time say in authority you are sinner of mine and I decided punishment for you so now stop all that and lat me finish my work , she just treat his wound of his hand , tear are coming in her eyes , yes she is angry on maan , because she was not accepting him I list of that all man , but she also responded his touch that day , she more angry on their fate who playing with them like this and maan past , his family act , shaking her soul ,she know this man who stop his act when he feel milk on her chest , and just help her throughout without any intension , how he could be wrong he is not women easer , or else she never loose chance t make S** with total nude women in front of him...


but the thought that he is father of muskan and she confess that she first time response to person and he is same that brought some guilt or say awkwardness in her mind , but she don't want to loose this friend yes and she have to took step for that she just stand on her feet maan don't look to her just sit their with bending head


geet - yes you are sinner of mine so your punishment is ... maan hold his breath for some second and closed his eyes , but geeet next word and he just open his eyes with shock and look to geet


geet -yes maan singh khurana you heard right your punishment is you have to bear this friend Geet hand to full your life got it she just point out her finger to him


maan just gaping her like she is alian , he expecting slap ,phone called to police , geet telling truth to rano maa etc ,but she asking his friendship after all this


he don't know how to react tear start to flow from his eyes and he just pull her closed and hug her in sitting position he buried his head in geet waist , he crying like small child , he searching mother touch in geet , and geet get that , she feel so pain for him , that how much he suffer in his life , a business tycoon who have unlimited money , power but searching for true love ...


geet just caressed maan back and hair ...she want to sooth him ...and she say jitana rona chate ho ro lijiye maanji ye sab guilt ko bhar nikalke fake dijiye maanji I don't want any guilt in our friendship on that you act because of that drug but I also responded to to you na that than if you are guilty than I am also guilty like you maanji it is our destiny maanji our fate maan just sob loudly thank thanks , he just murmuring thanks

when he feel good he come out from hug and geet sit beside him

maan - thanks geet you don't mu me thanks and wo i want to ask can i

geet - yes maanji

maan- wo wo geet

geet get his thought she just took his hand in her hand and say , she is always your maanji that why that girl who don't comfortable with her own nani , glue you like this , maanji she always your baby your daughter , MUSKAN MAAN SINGH KHURANNA

broad smile come on maan face he smile with tear and again hug him , but this time both feel something wired and maan pull away himself from her red hue come on geet face she bend her head ...

Just than veer come with crying muskan who have veer hair in her hand

Maaneet just smile on his state and veer give angry glare to them , maan just took muskan in his hand and first hug her and than just start to kiss her all face , muski fist giggle with maan act but that maan stuble start irited her and she just slap maan on his cheek he just start to look her with winded eys and , geet and veer just burst in laugh along with adi naina ...poor maan his face is worth to watch

upon that his musky first look hear and there and start to clap her hand and start to laugh with all like she get it why all laugh on maan



maan make pout and geet mummer so cute she say in low voice but nanina and veer hear that , because they are near her , both give look each other

just than maan say in heavy voice miss muskan maan sing khurana , you slap your dada like this

nanina , veer , adi stun with maan word , and geet just nodded them and say maaanji is my friend and she is his daughter , it is her identity ...

precap

rano and dadi reaction

party or slap depend on this both lady reaction

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part di nxt update mujko party dekna hai slap nahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really really really very beautiful update
Muskans and maan part wad fabulous
Please continue some

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