But tiny thing... that conversation of those 2 older women with Paro... It was uncalled for.. yesterday I honestly did not care as it was used to precipitate Rudra leaving her behind in the room so her Fairy god mother can work her magic on Paro n get her in to the red dress.. So creative licence was more than granted...
But today.. except for unnecessary glorifying of Paro.. there was no use of that scene.. honestly...u don't need to glorify her.. you have created a delightful creature whose every reaction to her major saab and the people she loves reflects just how wonderful she is..We already love her for the simple darling she is.. u don't have to paint two older women so illogically nasty, who are from a different social class to just put her down and show her explaining the difference b/w manki gareeb and amir to us..
she is precious and we already know it..
Somehow the ending bit of that scene kind made up for it.. cz it was kind of subtle.. so that was okish..
But RR CVs your story, the nuances of the characters are so subtle.. and delicate.. that is indeed ur forte.. keep at it. these on ur face stuff are not needed. you guys are a whole level above that!! Because u were the same guys who wrote the beautiful past 2 episode where the husband held his new wife carefully and guided her in his world and made something many other soaps have given bad memories to us to be something beautiful instead..
And this scene kinda stuck out like a sore thumb in the middle of all that warmth u have created... that had won our hearts..
So if u are reading this.. well don't take it as cribbing.. just a little constructive criticism so that you will know how I feel.. because u have spoiled me with beautiful storytelling and just want u to keep at that superlative level always!!