ZAYA FF- YE BARKAT NAHI HAI!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI GUYS, I AM BACK EVEN THOUGH I JUST STARTED IN INDIA FORUM, WITH A NEW FF, ABOUT ZAIN AND ALIYA! IT STARTS FROM WHERE ZAIN AND ALIYA STOPPED THE WEDDING AND TEH RECENT BUZZ GOING AROUND IS THAT THIS BARKAT THAT ZAYA FOUND IS NOT THE REAL ONE BUT A FAKE ONE THAT MEER KHAN WAS USING!
ANYWAY...TOO MUCH DETAIL, READ AND ENJOY THE UPDATE AND PM ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE!... THERE YOU GO!!!!


Aliya finally found Barkat, with the help of her husband she could succeed in her mission, while doing the entire hide and seek game Zain and Aliya both got re-married. They both vowed that they were not going to leave each other. That their relation turned from a negative point to a positive one... but will there relation stay the same after Barkat enters Zain's life or will it change?

To know more, one has to read this new ff! (Enjoy!!!)

Chapter 1:

The imam asking each pair/couple whether they accept their marriage, and each couple said YES, now the last couple, Barkat and Nasir Khan, the imam asked the groom first:

Imam: Nasir Khan do you accept Barkat Khan as your wife?

Nasir Khan: I accept!

Everyone congratulated Nasir Khan; he was laughing showing all his yellow, broken teeth, now the imam asked the bride:

Imam: Barkat Khan, do you accept Nasir Khan as you husband?

Barkat was silent, not knowing what to say, yes or no. She obviously didn't want to disobey her father, Meer Khan, but at the same time she didn't want to marry a 70 years old man.

From behind the barrier:

Zain and Aliya had just done their 2nd nikat; waiting for their family behind the barrier, they heard the imam say Barkat.

They both started to run as if they were running for their life.

Zain: Stop this wedding!

Imam: What is going on?

Nasir Khan: What's this Meer Khan?

Meer Khan: Nothing I will see!

With this, Meer Khan got up and went straight up to Usman and his family.

Meer: Salam Usman sahib, welcome to my daughters wedding!

Usman: Stop this drama! Barkat isn't your daughter, you snatched her away form us and now we are taking her back, Barkat bacchii don't say the Qubool!

Zain: Barkat, please don't say it, for your brother's sake!

While all the talking and pleading was going on, Aliya got a chance to go through the back door and reach Barkat but the danger seemed to grow even higher.

Zain: Barkat try to remember all those days that Fahad bhai, you and me used to hide under table because we didn't want to have the cough syrup... TRY!!!

Barkat started to have flashback, her with 2 other boys playing hide and seek with Usman, but it was blurry, but she could remember that scene that Zain had said.

Barkat: Zain Bhai... is that you?

Zain: No it's not me; it's an elephant.

Barkat started to laugh remembering all the good days that she spent with her family; suddenly a hand touched her shoulders.

Barkat: Who are you?

Aliya: I am Aliya, your second older brother's wife.

Barkat: So you are Fahad Bhai's second wife?

Aliya: No, I am Zain's wife.

By then the whole family managed to get inside the wedding hall, all the photographer were gone and the imam was gone as well, only Meer Khan and the Abdullah family was there.

Zain: Dad I think we should go now, don't know what problem night come next!

Usman: Yes beta lets go!

The whole family started to move towards the door, but stopped when Aliya screamed out; they turned around and saw Meer Khan holding a knife on Aliya's throat, ready to kill her!

Meer Khan: Now, where are you going to go without your lovely daughter in law Usman sahib?

Everyone was shocked except Surraya, she didn't care whether Aliya died or not, all she wanted was her daughter and now she got her!

Precap: Zain proceeding towards Meer Khan but Meer Khan asking him to back out otherwise he will kill Aliya, but Zain says "are you going to kill you own blood niece?" Which shocks Meer Khan!



THAT'S THE END OF CHAP 1, PLZ COMMENT AND PM ME!

THANKS!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg
It was jyst amazing
Loved it
Really pls continue soon
It was lovely
But is this barkat ake or not!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys, there you are with chapter 2 but i will not write anymore of i don't comments, no matter if they negative because they will help me improve and positive they will make me more eager to write so comment guys please! thanks and enjoy!

Chapter 2:

As everyone headed towards the door, Aliya screamed out; everyone looked back except Surraya who was busy chatting with her daughter. Zain was shocked, looking at Aliya giving her life for his little sister.

Zain: So much acting; why giving your life for someone who is already saved? Anyway I think I can use my brain for a while and then put it back to rest later one.

Zain was thinking hard but nothing came inside his brain but then an idea kicked his brain as if a rock fell on him.

All that time the Abdullah's tried everything they could to stop Meer Khan from taking another step but couldn't.

Usman: Meer Khan... leave Aliya, I am warning you...

Meer Khan: Warning me!!! That to you!!! OMG! Remember 18 years ago, you warned me but did I heal? NO!!!

Aliya: Meer Khan leave me please!

Aliya couldn't take the pain anymore! His hand was too big for her to remove it easily; she couldn't believe that her chachu was trying to kill her.

Zain couldn't see Aliya risking her life anymore, he started to walk forward, even though Meer had warned him many times!

Zain: The first time we met each other, you warned me, but did I heal? No! So why should I now?

Meer Khan: Zain! I SWEAR TO GOD, if you take one more step, I will KILL Aliya.

Zain was hell shocked! He didn't what to do but he couldn't afford to loose Aliya, she gave him everything in life, from freedom to care that no one else showed him.

Zain: So you want to kill her? Then go on kill her!

Everyone stopped talking, everyone looked at Zain. Aliya was crying looking at Zain with pleading eyes, she wanted to set her herself free from the monster who was holding her right now!

Aliya: Zain...

Zain: What! I said the right thing right??? Now if your chachu wants to kill his own blood related niece then I can't help it, maybe I will miss you but cant get you another life!

Aliya was shocked! She couldn't believe the person that she trusted the most, the person that she considered her friend 1 hour ago was asking for her die.

Now she really wanted to die, she want anyone to live thinking that she was a burden on them.

Meer Khan: Aliya... my niece???

Zain: Yes, she is Ghulam Haider's daughter, the oldest one. Now it's your choice if you want to kill her or not! I will not interfere.

Meer Khan was shocked, he started to back out but Aliya was sad, angry, confused and disgusted. She didn't want to live anymore. She wanted to die, so grabbed the knife that Meer Khan was holding and pointed it towards her left hands vein.

Zain couldn't believe what he was seeing, he thought he just saved her from Meer Khan and now she wants to die.

Zain: Aliya...what the hell are you doing??

Aliya: Zain you wanted to see me dead right??? I was such a fool, I believed the person who wanted to see me dead, I thought that maybe I will make friendship with you, that maybe one day we will be together but no I was wrong! YOU WANT ME DEAD!

Zain was taken aback, he didn't believe her, and he just wanted her in his arms now, right next to him. He started to walk toward her.

Zain: Aliya...

Aliya: Zain I swear if you take one more step toward me, I will kill myself and you will be the reason for my death.

Usman, Fahad, Surraya, Barkat and Zain were shocked but Surraya was angry, she felt like going and killing Aliya herself!

Surraya: Aliya, how dare you threaten my son? Who are you? And why did you enter my son's life in the first place?

Usman: Surraya begum, stop this non-sense, you should remember that it is because of Aliya that we got Barkat after so many years.

Surraya: But...

Zain: No buts mom! It is the truth!

Zain couldn't help but cry! He didn't know that if he said that Aliya would take it in the wrong sense. He wanted to hit his brain for being so stupid.

Aliya didn't want to stay there anymore, she didn't want to die either so she just run away, away from Zain, from his fake friendship, she just wanted pure freedom, and calmness.

Zain saw her running away; he didn't know what to do, so he just run behind her as well.

Zain: Aliya...stop...stop, you misunderstood me!

In the road:

Aliya had been running for about 10minutes now, she couldn't take it anymore, she was too tired because of crying and getting upset. On the other side of the road Zain was searching for Aliya like a mad man. He finally saw her, walking slowly, she looked so ill and tired. He run across the road. Suddenly a car came behind Aliya, she didn't realise but felt as if someone just pushed her past the car and fell on top of her.

Zain: Pagal ho? What were you thinking? HUH? Of committing suicide?

Aliya: I asked you to stop following me, I am no one to you!

Zain: Really??? You are no one to me! Then why were you smiling when we were getting married the 2nd time? Why were you ready to give you life to save Barkat? Why did you take care of me when I had my accident?

Aliya: I did all that out of humanity! Now leave me! You wanted to see me dead right!

Zain: Yes I did want to see you dead on our wedding night but now I want to see you smiling!

Aliya: Zain you are really rubbish at lying! What were the things that you...

Zain didn't let her finish her sentence, he pulled her closer to him, she hit his hard chest and looked up with sadness and confusedness in her eyes.

Zain: I said all that so that Meer Khan leaves you, he warned me that if I take another step toward you then he would kill you! I just wanted him to know that the person he was about to kill is his niece!

Aliya was shocked, but not angry anymore, she just wanted to hear him concerned. She wanted to crush her head against his chest.

Zain: Aliya, believe me, I didn't want to hurt you; I just wanted to see you like a free bird flying in the open sky!

Aliya: Zain...

Before she could even start her sentence, she fainted in Zain's arms. He was happy that finally she understood him, without taking him in the wrong sense.

He picked her up and proceeded toward his car, where he placed her carefully and put the sit belt on without waking her up.

She looked so angelic and peaceful when she was sleeping. He just wished that she accepts his friendship soon, so that he can share everything with her, his love, happiness, sadness and angriness.

Precap: Zain and Aliya sleeping but not in opposite direction, for the first time Aliya was sleeping with her head on Zain's shoulder and her arm across Zain's chest and Zain slept hugging his wife proudly!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow, I loved both of the chapters!
Suraiya is never going to thank Aliya and be nice to her ever i guess 😆
ZaYa's scene in chapter two was sweet
But what happened to Mir Khan?
Continue soon please, and do pm me when you update the next part😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awhhh omg epic two chapters like amazing :) just loved it how Aliyah risked her life and zains fantastic brains hahaha but when Aliyah thought zain meant what he said to get her free was sooo emotional like she cares sooo. Uh of what he wants and when even zain stopped suraiya for bad mouthing Aliyah u felt happy :) loved the way I could imagine zain saving Aliyah and falling ontop of her aswell as consoling her and then licking her up since she's unconscious deffo think optometry should continue please do pm me whenever you write anything on zaya as I'll love to read it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely ff. Please do continue and pm me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just read both of your Chapters.They really were beautiful,special 2nd one.It was really heart touching.And the precapp.OMG.It seemed so cute.
Please continue soon n PM me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls continue !!!!! I love both the chapters !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Contnue loved both chapters do PM me

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