Originally posted by: loveabletwinz
Nabi!!! Hayeee! Kya kahe?? You know the one down side to watching an episode/movie/play is that you can't really always tell what the characters are feeling all the time. But you give us such a distinct, clear look at Chotu's feelings and the whirlwind of emotions he is going through. You describe Chotu's emotional state so well that you make us feel so bad for him, bichara he is so broken from the loss of his friends.
The sun streaked the sky with rays of light and I couldn't help but wonder hoe my life had changed since... well the day I joined the police force. - Awww this is a beautiful image you create!
Shree seems like such a chulbula character and you make me want to find out about him. Seee, this is how good you are... you manage to carry through a sense of strong friendship between these people and it is beautiful to read about. we loved everything you wrote about each character. Even though we have never watched this show, I feel like we already know these people because of how you have described them. I can't even imagine losing friends who are so close and are like family...I can't imagine being anything but broken, but having the strength to move on from there requires a lot of courage. Sooo glad that Chotu will move on, slowly, but surely...and his friends will always be by his side.
I feel so bad now I read your comments sooo late!
Really sorry yaar! Omg sweethearts that is such an overwhelming comment you wrote! Mujhe khushi ke as son agayeee! After all we are senti fur balls! heheh...I am glad you could relate to this character sooo well. I mean I know you have never seen the show but if my writing made you wanna know more about them then I don't know what to say! I mean i hope you know that I am an amateur at this. 😆 But seriouslY i FEEL honored!
The sun streaked the sky with rays of light and I couldn't help but wonder hoe my life had changed since... well the day I joined the police force. - Awww this is a beautiful image you create!
I am so glad you liked that line. I had a hard time putting the imagery there. Heheh guess This Language and lit classes did pay off 😉
Yeah Shree is my personal favorite as well! He has this micheviousness to him yet he is sooo mature sometimes that I am left open mouthed 😆 But he never leaves a chance to tease his amigos literally no kidding! And he is a great friend to have. The chulbala techy sen! Hehehe! He is perfec in his work and he knows ek relationship ko kaise nibhana hai. It's really cute! he is like the chocolate boy of this show! hehe I personally love his glasses. That makes two of us as chasmish hehe!
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You have no idea how happy you made me feel about this Piece! seriously I am sooo happy!
i am doing the lungi dance right now!
Love you guys! 🤗❤️
Do read the new OS i POSTED!
hehe!
it's called Romeo and Juliet!
hope you like it
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