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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52



thanks so much, horizon.

aw you liked the edits? possessed is right i think... sometimes this whole thing just foinishes me off... which is why wedding must be spaced out... i am thinking if watchingh is doing thsi to us, what acting this phase out must have done to the actors, also the creatives... who all work practically seven days a week, 12 hours or more...

i am glad you are finallly ready for this. i keep running away... even though it is impossible to forget "shadi karni hogi... mujhse... chhay mahine ke liye..." the low voice like a forest fire blowing through the night, her eyes aflame with emotions of a nature she perhaps had no idea she even had as she tried to make some sense of this chaos. a knowledge of the end of worlds in both their eyes. how could a scene that was just shown in bits and parts be so powerful that it gets lodged in you like this, maybe they intercut it with so much of other things just to help the viewer deal with the impact somehow. little doses... baby steps we took into hell and, no idea how this was ever ever going to get to a better place.

layers here that are too deep to fathom at times. intense pain yet a terrible thrill and a scaredness, elemental eternity. astonishing days. i am hoping to watch and think 190 today. i know it is not possible to ever understand this "forced wedding" in all its splendour, but i think i would like to write a bit about it.


That underlined.. So true.. .. There is so much poignancy in those 2 min just like how Khushi most automatically shuts her eyes even in all that hurt when he thrusts that sindoor in her maang..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episodes 187 - 188
Raksha Di ki
Beparda hui aisi gehri chaal
Bichaya hai usne makdi ka jaal
Lubhata raha sabko baaton se
Kathputli si lagi Di, uske haaton mein
Itni izzat nawazi, usey raas na aayi
Bepanah mohabbat, uske kaam na aayi
Pehen rakha tha usne achhai ka naqab
Hairaan hua sunkar uska ghatiya hisaab
Khush khabar Di ki bani uska dhaal
Khamosh raha main, wo baazi jeeta filhaal
Chaane laga ghane badalon ka saaya
Bura waqt phir se dohraata nazar aaya
Di ke Khushi ko na bikharne doonga
Di tak koi dukh na pahunchne doonga
Karoonga main kuch bhi, unki raksha ke liye
Di ko diya vachan, na tootne doonga
Translation:
A grave ploy got unveiled
A spider's web he laid
With his words everyone he enticed
In his hands Di seemed like a puppet
So much respect given, it never bothered him
Infinite love, never mattered to him
He had worn a mask of goodness
Got perplexed listening to his awful account
Di's good news became his shield
I remained silent, for now he won the round
The shadow of dark clouds began looming around
Felt the bad time was repeating again
I will not let Di's happiness disintegrate
I will not let any sorrow reach Di
I will do anything to protect her
The promise I gave to Di, I will not let it break


stupendous Durga.
how you depicted Arnav's inner feelings and determination to protect his di is marvelous. Never saw such kind of loving and caring brother before in my life.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Katelyn

Wow, excellent job, Durga! 👏❤️⭐️ 👍🏼 This is so intense and emotional. I feel for this man who felt betrayed by these two people. I really love the last stanza! How does one come out of the abyss of shock and pain? 😭

Thanks Kate. That was really a huge shock for the man who had decided to come out of his wall and accept the happiness life was offering, but was soon forced to go back into his shell. I'm happy you loved it. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara


stupendous Durga.
how you depicted Arnav's inner feelings and determination to protect his di is marvelous. Never saw such kind of loving and caring brother before in my life.

Thanks Sohara. Yes, he is the best brother one can have. Inspite of that Anjali couldn't avoid the betrayal in her life.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Episode 188
Jhooth
Bankar baarish ki thandi phuhaar
Mere dil pe jab dastak de gayi
Ansuna kiya tha dil ki pukaar
Par harpal tum kareeb aati gayi
Tumse door rehne ki karta raha koshish
Magar badhta hi raha tumhare liye kashish
Nazar na hata saka, bhanwar mein jaise kho gaya
Tumhari muskaan ne rachayi thi saazish
Aankhon ne aisa jadoo kiya
Aansuon ki baadh mein dil beh gaya
Haar chuka tha dil ki zid par
Tumse kehne ko bhi raazi ho gaya
Dil cheerta hua dekha ek nazara
Phir laut aaya waqt ka wo ishaara
Jhootha hai dil aur dil ki baatein
Kisi apne ne dhokha diya dobara
Masoomsi wo muskaan jhooth thi
Aankhon ki kahi saari baatein jhooth thi
Jhoothi thi fikar jo tumne jataayi
Behlaane wali saari adaayein jhooth thi
Fareb ya dhokha, kya doon isko naam?
Iss dagabaazi ka tumhe kya doon inaam?
Socha bhi na hoga tumne kabhi
Tumhare jhooth ko aisa doonga anjaam
Translation:
Turning into a cool sprinkle of rain
When you knocked on my heart
I let the call of the heart unheard
But you kept coming closer
I tried to remain far away from you
But kept increasing, the attraction towards you
Couldn't take off my eyes, got lost like in a twister
Your smile had devised a conspiracy
The eyes created such a magic
My heart got carried away in the flood of tears
I lost at the tenacity of my heart
I even acceded to tell you
Saw a sight that tore away my heart
The sign of a time returned
The heart is a lie and so are its words
Once again someone dear betrayed
That innocent smile was a lie
The words that your eyes spoke were all lies
The worry that you displayed was a lie
The soothing flairs were all lies
Deceit or betrayal, what should I name it?
What reward should I give for this treachery?
Never would you have thought
The conclusion I would give for your lies
Edited by DurgaS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
@durga ago their fantastic poem 👏👏
It was so emotional.
Poor Arnav. 😭 He has to cover a long way to know his real love, trust on it and have faith and believe in it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful and apt. Last stanza powerful and very precisely speaks of his mental state.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tumhari muskaan ne rachayi thi saazish
Masoomsi wo muskaan jhooth thi
Aankhon ki kahi saari baatein jhooth thi
Jhoothi thi fikar jo tumne jataayi
Behlaane wali saari adaayein jhooth thi

jhooth was sach much too too good, durga... yes, to him, that is what she was... jhooti... liar. his very life seemed to feel like a lie at that moment...

beautiful... thanks.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really touching hearts here those words.Arnav is really vulnerable here and his state is like a fish out of water but remember an ocean can have millions things in it and still be looking calm and that calmness is a message of storm.He will be holding a storm to bring it on from now and onward.

Lovely Durga👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 188
Jhooth
Bankar baarish ki thandi phuhaar
Mere dil pe jab dastak de gayi
Ansuna kiya tha dil ki pukaar
Par harpal tum kareeb aati gayi
Tumse door rehne ki karta raha koshish
Magar badhta hi raha tumhare liye kashish
Nazar na hata saka, bhanwar mein jaise kho gaya
Tumhari muskaan ne rachayi thi saazish
Aankhon ne aisa jadoo kiya
Aansuon ki baadh mein dil beh gaya
Haar chuka tha dil ki zid par
Tumse kehne ko bhi raazi ho gaya
Dil cheerta hua dekha ek nazara
Phir laut aaya waqt ka wo ishaara
Jhootha hai dil aur dil ki baatein
Kisi apne ne dhokha diya dobara
Masoomsi wo muskaan jhooth thi
Aankhon ki kahi saari baatein jhooth thi
Jhoothi thi fikar jo tumne jataayi
Behlaane wali saari adaayein jhooth thi
Fareb ya dhokha, kya doon isko naam?
Iss dagabaazi ka tumhe kya doon inaam?
Socha bhi na hoga tumne kabhi
Tumhare jhooth ko aisa doonga anjaam
Translation:
Turning into a cool sprinkle of rain
When you knocked on my heart
I let the call of the heart unheard
But you kept coming closer
I tried to remain far away from you
But kept increasing, the attraction towards you
Couldn't take off my eyes, got lost like in a twister
Your smile had devised a conspiracy
The eyes created such a magic
My heart got carried away in the flood of tears
I lost at the tenacity of my heart
I even acceded to tell you
Saw a sight that tore away my heart
The sign of a time returned
The heart is a lie and so are its words
Once again someone dear betrayed
That innocent smile was a lie
The words that your eyes spoke were all lies
The worry that you displayed was a lie
The soothing flairs were all lies
Deceit or betrayal, what should I name it?
What reward should I give for this treachery?
Never would you have thought
The conclusion I would give for your lies



Love the edit!❤️ The poem wrung my soul, how beautifully you have sifted through the layers and rush of emotions Durgey! Simply brilliant.!⭐️👏


This is for you from me:


Tumhari kavita rula gayi
Bikhri sari yaadein
Yaad aa gayi
Katta tha dil jis din
Uss patthar ka
Gunj uss shishey ki
Dil se takra gayein

Lahuluhan hua
Tapakta hua aasoon
Atak gayein sansein
Chit hua bekabu
Tumne sachh ka jaal bichhaya
Jhooth bechara faans gaya
Hayye mujhe dass gaya




Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

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