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Posted: 10 years ago
Vyan is really a nice person..i really dont want him to hv a heartbreak...
Geet is tking all this in friendly manner... i think some1 has to show her difference btwn frndship n liking... it is pretty much clear dat vyan likes her...  
Seeing maan with a girl dint affect geet(alteast she depicts so) bt seeing geet with other man will surely affect maan...
Till nw maan was pretty much successful in masking his hurt n emotions in front of her n others.. bt after dis i dont know what wil be his reaction...or is it too soon to expect any reaction from him...
Bt wat surprised me is geets words...
I mean agar geet ko past pata nai hota den wat she said was ok...bt here knowing whole history she said so...
Is she really immune to the fact  dat she is d reason for this change in maan or she is delibrately ignoring this fact...???
Geet is directly judgeing maan as if she never knew him in past without trying to figure out d reason...
I mean if a  i meet  a vry good frnd of mine n c dat he/she has  changed den i wil surely try to find d reason for the change...
I think gert really needs  sum kind of push...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 26 - lovely part indeed...
you make sure that we fell in vyan again & again...
he is a such a lovely man...taking care of geet, very tender in his behaviour with her...
so geet found sasha bimbo...lol
oops...maan & sasha boyfriend-girlfriend...maan ko koi aur nah mili kya...
he seemed mysterious...
has he seen her with vyan...
curious for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
want to know maan point of view also
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Posted: 10 years ago
I agree with Geet.
 
Romeo and Juliet and dying for love... ugh... so much tragedy!  I would rather live for love than die for it๐Ÿ˜†
 
I am going to surprise you and let you know that I agree with her idea of going out with Fawad.
 
What a dreamy date with a hunk of a guy๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ  An ideal date for me since I love mini golf and I love plays and of course Fawad.๐Ÿ˜†
 
To be honest, it is not even a date in terms of romantic gestures that we associate with the word.  Geet has always drawn a line at his behavior and Vyan knows not to step over the bounds she has created.  It is in the fact that she also brought so many people with her and also that she never readily agrees to anything he says that she has given a clear signal. 
 
There is a pattern in her behavior where she likes to be with everyone yet belongs only to herself.  So the date is more like, I am alone, you are alone, lets not be alone together. 
 
Sasha seems like a person that Maan can hide behind at this point.  I totally get it.  How else would you face an ex that you may not be completely over?  Bring some ammunition to keep yourself safe.  Too bad that she is so irritating.  I would have liked her to be not so screechy.  It would have made it more involved.
 
Loving the cruise so far.
 
Thanks for updating.
 
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ch 25
Poor Vyan wanted to spend time with Geet, but she was planning a get together with her friends.
Loved the return of the bonding between the four. 
 
Ch 26
Today was Vyan's day. He spent the day with Geet and also a date! Are you really planning to pair Vyan and Geet? What about Maan and Geet? Actually no matter who pairs with whom, I am going to be disappointed. If you pair Geet and Vyan I will feel bad for Maan, if you pair Maan and Geet I will feel bad for Vyan. I have kind of developed a soft corner for Vyan.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy Birthday, Shika! ๐Ÿค—


27. Prelude


I inhaled deeply with my eyes closed. The wind blew my open hair away from my face and ruffled the long skirt I was wearing. The sun was high in the sky and I was standing on the deck of the cruise, leaning against the railings. It was the third day of our trip and even though I had enjoyed the previous two days more than I could imagine, standing here at the deck against the railing in solitude and enjoying the view of the endless ocean in front of me was an unmatchable experience in its own.

It was past noon. Our group had dispersed after breakfast, pretty much like the previous day. Ayush and Anaya had taken all the children to the small play area, Raya and Raunaq were wandering somewhere, making the most of their holiday, Ranbir and Zara had headed to the casino for some games, having been relieved of Ameerah's responsibility for a while, Mrs. Khurana was socialising with a few women she had met at the restaurant yesterday, and I did not know where Maan as well as Vyan were.

I thought about Vyan. He was a person I could have a good time with anywhere, be it while working on a project or dining at a restaurant. He made things all the more enjoyable with his charisma. I smiled as I remembered the whole day I had spent with him, especially the ball. Not only did he act gentlemanly, but he also kept the situation light and happy.

Vyan's personality, his attitude towards me reminded me of the Maan I had known seven years back. Known and cared for. He was the kind who would go to any extent for the people he loved, who would not leave the side of his loved ones for a time longer than necessary. Where had that Maan gone? Was he still alive in the handsome and agile Maan, who I had not seen around his family during breakfast?

"Nice breeze out here, isn't it?" I turned my head to my right and saw him take a final step and lean against the railing, facing me.

"Think of the devil and the devil appears!" I murmured to myself. He looked unexplainably attractive in the khaki pants and the white button-down shirt he was wearing which fit his well-built torso.

"Yes it is." I tore my eyes away from him and looked back at the expanse of waters in front of me. I could feel his eyes on my face.

"How come you're alone? Where's that boyfriend of yours?" I whirled to him with wide eyes and a confused face.

"Who?" His eyebrows shot up at my expression.

"The one you were with at the club the other night, and the one you were dancing with at the ball last night." Although he kept his stance as well as face very callous, I saw his eyes were not clear. There was something I could not name. I was seeing things, I concluded as I gave myself a mental shake. There was nothing in his eyes.

"You mean Vyan. He must be somewhere. I'm not his spy to know where he is." I purposely left out correcting him about Vyan being my boyfriend. He puckered his lips. I could see that he was amused for some reason and before he could say anything, I turned the topic to him.

"Where's your girlfriend, by the way? You two didn't seem to leave each other's side for long."

Without replying, he did something unexpected. With one smooth movement, he trapped me against the railing with his body towering over me. I gasped at the sudden closeness and instinctively leaned back against the railing even as both his hands clutched mine in them over the railing. I could hear my heart hammering loudly at the intense gaze fixed on my face.

"Do I smell something burning?" His breath fanned my face as he spoke. It took me a minute more to comprehend what he had said and as I did, I quickly regained control of myself and acted cool.

"Jealous and me? Huh!" I rolled my eyes. "I'm just worried about my safety, you see."

He cocked an eyebrow in question.

"You see, if she sees you here with me, I'm sure she's going to want to burn holes in me with those cat-eyes of hers." I pretended to shudder, which elicited a throaty laugh from him.

"Don't worry, I'll take care of that." I could see a glint of mischief in his eyes. "By the way, don't you think we're doing it the wrong way?"

"What?" I asked in confusion.

"The Jack and Rose thing, you know. Rose is supposed to be facing the ocean and not staring at Jack."

I blinked as it dawned on me what he was referring to. We were indeed on the deck of a sailing cruise, standing against the railing but there was the difference that he had pointed out. Flustered for a moment, I quickly thought of a comeback.

"Nope, we're not doing it the wrong way because we aren't doing it at all. I am no Rose and you certainly aren't Jack either." I looked him up and down, which amused him, making him chuckle as he pulled back and leaned against the railing beside me.

"You're right." I saw his eyes wander around the deck before coming back to me. "So since you don't want to be burned down if my girlfriend sees me here, I better go find myself some fun activity." With a salute of two fingers and a half-smirk on his lips, he pushed himself off the railing and walked towards the far end of the deck. My eyes followed his leisurely gait as he joined the group of people dancing at the corner, and immediately grabbed the attention of a few girls.

As he danced with the girls buzzing around him, he turned to me. The smirk was still there, only more pronounced. I stared at him in disbelief until he winked at me. Shaking my head at him, I pushed myself off the railing and headed to the opposite end, where I had just seen Raya and Raunaq sitting down.

The rest of the third day was mostly spent around Raya and Anaya, with their husbands and Vyan occasionally joining us before disappearing for some guy time. It felt wonderful to see Anaya's twins warming up to me as they played around us.

The fourth and the last day was dedicated to scouring the mall of the cruise. We had all come to shop together, even Maan and his girlfriend. Once inside the mall, the group dispersed yet my constant companions were Vyan and my R & R. A couple of times, I ran into Maan and couldn't help but smile in response to the mischievous one he passed me. The thought that Maan and I could get along without any bitterness between us was making me feel even happier than I was.

Vyan did not like to shop, I discovered and I could not stop laughing at the faces he made whenever we entered a new shop. I told him many a times to go find himself an occupation but he persisted and stayed with us, citing the excuse of it being the last day of our holiday.

"Why don't you buy some gifts for your family, then?" I suggested when he refused to go away once again. "Might as well utilise your time fruitfully if you so want to stay!"

"Good idea." He grimaced and I laughed. "But the problem is, I suck at shopping! I can't pick anything for them."

"I'll help you." I volunteered. "You just tell me a little bit about every member of your family and I'll help you choose something for them."

He was relieved with the suggestion and we went around shops to pick gifts for his family.

At the end of the fourth day, when the cruise docked back to the port, we were all smiling and refreshed. I thanked Vyan, for he was the one who had initiated the idea of such a vacation. Even as we all parted and went our own ways, I could not stop smiling because I felt so happy. It had been a vacation I would never forget, and it reenergised me to dive back into work once the week ended.


**If you wish to understand Geet a little bit more, I recommend you to give this oneshot a read.
Thanks for this, Shika! ๐Ÿค—


Edited by mayyo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
 
The Jack and Rose moment๐Ÿ˜†  not quite the scene; but think about it.  Aissa Jack hoga toh Rose would be looking at him, right๐Ÿ˜†  The position in the movie with the arms outstretched looking out to the future together is not where they are at present in their relationship.  This position is more them.  Both looking at each other, trying to figure each other out, facing each other.  With each other but not quite together.
 
 
Intriguing back and forth between the two.  Maan trying to provoke her but she gave back with equal fervor.  I am so glad for Vyan being around.  His quiet ways and acceptance of her is her need of the moment. 
 
She is an introspective mouse but fiery when it comes to defining her borders.  In a way she seems more headstrong than Maan to me.  Mostly because we don't know Maan yet.  When you reveal that, a smidge at a time, it will be more fun to analyze and appreciate them.
 
Thanks for updating.  Shika ke bahane hum sab ka fayda ho gaya๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for t pm

Read it first thing in t morning
Just amazing

Umm so we have jack & rose here


While she was amazed at t ease at which they got along
I was wondering why she didn't want to clarify t vyan BF bit ๐Ÿ˜†
Also kept me thinking why she is not able to read his eyes or understand wat he feels
Yah I know he is smarter in hiding his emotions
Hmm in control types
Though it's a easy give away as he seem to clearly keeping a check on her



Still their hearts r supposed to be wired rt ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Let's see wat effect those kaki pants & cotton shirt on her
Edited by muskanp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
YAY!! For once I'm awake to read, just when you posted it.๐Ÿ˜ƒ