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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

Chapter 20: I loved these unexpected guests. 😉 Especially the one that arrived later and just the mention of his arrival made her heart to beat rapidly 😆

I loved how Mrs. Khurana was there for her to accompany her when she must have felt lonely after 2 weeks of being with a family unit. Her arrival was like a blessing in disguise for Geet who is still coming in terms with a lost family and building a new family in a place where she has come back after years.

She indeed was like a mother to Geet even in her actions and gestures ... bringing sweets, appreciating her house and the set up, and then making a cup of tea for her child at the end of the day, and later sharing a warm meal.

Hmm ... Next part seems interesting with the latest guest arrival 😆

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Aweesommmeee Chappteerr Mayyam 😃
Khakhi Pants and White shirt, I have seen Guru's pic in this and He's luking Supperrr Hawt 😳
Okay ! Apart from this Update was Good 😉
Happy Birthday Shika 🤗 [<:P]

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#893

New Romeo, New Juliet: firstly I liked the title. 👏 As always good one here.

Maan has come full prepared for this meeting I guess. His comment to her "Feel at home" 🤣 Must have stumped Geet's resolve of acting as casual as she wanted to pretend.

Hmm Maan has build his walls strong. But yet again there was a glimpse of the ripples in his stillness when she flirted back as a response about her attire. What somehow has me worried is that he's keeping such a tight leash on his emotions and his need to act casual and unaffected that whenever his walls may crack or crumble the outcome would be quite strong a force and shocking for both him as well as Geet.

On the other hand Geet though strongly deciding and self lecturing to behave unaffected and as indifferent she wants to be in front of him fails to do so. She pats herself on doing a good job? Really and yet Vyan served as a catalyst to distract from the aftereffects of Maan. 😆

I'm loving this.. 😃

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#894

I WISH THEY WERE JACK AND ROSE

DONT LIKE THE DISTANCE BETWEEN THEM

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#895

lovely update. geet still the same not accepting her feelings. she still thinks abt maan or else y would she compare vyaan with maan. love the flirty nature of maan with geet. cruise ended so wondering how these two will meet n the story will move forward.

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dreamy4ever

@dreamy4ever

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#896

Loved both the updates.maan kind of starting up with geet 😳.well he did notice geet with vyan 😛thinking he is her BF. cruise trip ended soo soon.waitg to see hw theses two gone meet again.
Sorry 4 not commentg for last update 😔.out of town for few weeks 😊

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan
Aweesommmeee Chappteerr Mayyam 😃
Khakhi Pants and White shirt, I have seen Guru's pic in this and He's luking Supperrr Hawt 😳
Okay ! Apart from this Update was Good 😉
Happy Birthday Shika 🤗 [<:P]

Sheen😃

Thanks for reminding me of the attire😉

Main toh bhul gayi thi..😆

Yes outfit wala pic tu ne dekha hai? Maine nahi dekha.. 😃

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#898

part 27
awesome dear...
haye Maan and Geet together...
hmmm...
he thinks Vyan is her BF...
and Geet asked about his GF Sasha...
well that scene was nice...
cont soon dear...

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#899

Who is he? : Yes exactly my question... 😆

Anyways I'm liking this mild transformation that are visible in Geet now. She was always one who indulged minimal with new people but never so stern. But then this time it was needed as then she wouldn't have been able to keep the professional boundaries between 2 colleagues. what I liked is that once she made her Point and Vyan also abides by it, she did ease up in the conversation.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#900

Jack and Rose: Nice Title. Vyan I feel wanted it to be a trip for them as the title suggested but I guess it's turned out to be a family and friends vacation. 😆 I'm somehow Liking this Vyan he's kind of cute, friendly, and bindaas banda. No Jack-Rose for him for now , I personally don't like Jack-Rose. I Know many of them were speaking of him being as Fawad Khan but somehow for now I can picture him as Vivan bhatena.

Loved Raya's excitement and Even Mrs. K's decision after all I wanted the whole junta to go now that you've planned a trip. I'm not a big cruise fan .. I like water but then can't endure days stuck on cruise. 😳 Anyways hoping for at least some ice thawing between MG... mainly for my Tortoise as I don't want the Volcano to erupt altogether and he should get some let out.

Okay This new client turned out to be a representative Mr' Smith 😆 But I still think this is a smoke screen and Geet is going to get another jor ka jhataka (Me being hopeful 😉)

ARK 🤔 I guess I know what it stands for.

Edited by Onir - 11 years ago