One shot- On the Seashore - Page 3

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Hi..😊...dekho main peecha karte karte yahaan bhi aa gyi 😊

But seriosly ur stories r just awesome.

My first comment on indiaforum that too on ur story...kabhi socha tha itni achi stories likhogi that people will make accounts to be able to comment on ur stories. 😉

Anyways i have already commented on this story on ur site .Hope u recognize me.(we had a little discussion as well on ur story there)

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

😆 Okay I will not call you a young woman in case Nisha di is watching but you are definitely in trouble! Using your beautiful stories to break our bechare hearts... tujhe sharam nah aayi??

The way his heart and mind are holding on to a fading voice and yet he still finds himself pulled towards Geet. And that it ends on a note that doesn't indicate a miraculous happy ending just makes the story all the more heart breaking.

I demand more of these short one shots (from all of you btw!). I miss having my heart broken and put back together by your words.