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26. Parred


The first activity of our second day on the cruise was exclusively ladies' time. On Mrs. Khurana's insistence, all the women headed to the spa for a nice relaxing treatment while the men were left free to do whatever they wished, and the fathers were ordered by Mrs. Khurana to look after their kids. It was not until a few hours when we headed out of the spa.

The plans for the rest of the day were different for everyone. Mrs. Khurana had found a new friend in an elderly lady she met during lunch and she was already chatting away with her before the group dispersed. Those who were left had individual plans. Ayush and Anaya were heading to the pools with their twins while Ranbir, Zara and Maan were talking among themselves about their plans with Sasha giving her opinion every few seconds. I knew Raya and Raunaq wanted to spend time together but they also did not want to leave me to myself, so when Vyan offered me to accompany him to the theatre to watch Romeo and Juliet, I quickly agreed and gave my R & R the perfect chance.

"You didn't seem to enjoy the play." Vyan voiced his thoughts when we came out of the theatre after the play ended.

"It was nice. I mean, I'm not such a big fan of Romeo and Juliet, but the play was a nice watch." I shrugged.

"Girls usually give examples of the love Romeo and Juliet had for each other, the way they died for each other and all that jazz." I could tell that he was intrigued by my interest, or the lack of it, in the legendary characters.

"I'm not the usual girl, you see." I joked and he chuckled.

"That I agree with!"

He saw the mini-golf course then and led me inside. He was fond of the game, I found out. I watched him play when he offered me to join him.

"I don't know how to." I told him when I walked up to him.

"Oh, it's easy. Hold this." He handed me the golf stick. "This way. No, from here." He corrected me by pulling my hand over to the correct point, and then left my hand.

"Okay, now look at how I do it and then try." He demonstrated and told me to try. I hit the ball with a lot more force than required. "No problem, try again." He encouraged me but I repeated the same mistake the second and the third times.

"Uh-huh!" He came closer and brought his arms around me to hold the stick over my hands. His body had completely engulfed mine as he showed me how to hit the ball just right. The position did make me feel a little odd, but he acted casually and then smoothly stepped away, asking me to try again. Giving my head a slight shake, I tried again and we spent some time playing the game, before we decided to quit.

We were walking casually around the mall, just observing everything around us.

"So, is there some special reason why you don't like Romeo and Juliet?" He spoke after a few silent seconds, picking the conversation we had left before entering the mini-golf course.

"Not really." He waited for me to continue. "I'm just not into this stuff. The idea of dying in love doesn't really appeal to me."

"So that means all the legends like this one are not on your preferred list." He was amused.

"And they are on yours. That is why you wanted to watch this play!" I was surprised by the slight reddening of his cheeks and it made me laugh that my assumption was spot-on.

"Hey, look!" Vyan stopped in front of a display board resting on an easel. "There's a ball in this restaurant tonight."

I read the open invitation to couples for the ball scheduled to be held tonight at the ballroom of one of the restaurants.

"How about we both go? We will dine at the buffet there. It's a date." His blue eyes were twinkling with excitement, and his face was alight with an eager smile.

"A date?" I thought for moment. I did not have any problem but the expectant face of Vyan made me want to be a little naughty, as he waited for my answer. I pretended to think for a longer time. "Actually..." I trailed off as if I was going to refuse and saw his smile dim a bit. It felt like he was holding his breath and it made me laugh. "I don't mind."

He released a breath and laughed slightly.

"Then a date it is!" He looked at his watch. "I'll pick you up from your room at 6, okay?"

It was only when I was back in my cabin that I realised I did not have anything to wear. I paced around the room nervously.

"I have to look good. What do I do? What do I do?" There was equal parts of anticipation and nervousness in me. I did not know what to expect from tonight, but I knew I had to dress up well. For this reason, I rushed to the shop I had noticed in the mall. It had formal dresses available, though the prices were higher than the usual.

I bought a royal blue sleeveless dress with a collared neck. It was almost calf-length and the simple dress with big silver buttons seemed like the best option to me. I did not have a lot of time since it was already four in the evening. Quickly purchasing matching accessories, I made my way to the cabin.

Just as I turned to into the passageway which led to the cabin I was staying in, I bumped into someone who was coming from the opposite direction.

"Ouch! You stupid-" A woman grumbled before turning to me.

"Sorry!" I hurriedly apologised as I saw it was Sasha.

In response, she looked at me from top to bottom and then brushed her hair back with a hand in a haughty manner. "Watch where you're going!"

The way she behaved amused me more than offending me. It was apparent in her body language that she believed herself to be a deity or something.

"Oh Maan!" She called above my shoulder in a sugary sweet voice, which was a stark contrast to the tone she had been using just moments ago. "I was just looking for you."

I turned a bit to see Maan standing a few steps behind me. His gaze met mine for a tiny moment before Sasha rushed towards him and started saying something. When Maan's eyes flickered back to me, I half smiled, shook my head and turned away to walk back to my cabin.

"Bimbo! Wonder where Maan got her from!" I mumbled.

Once back in my cabin, I pushed Sasha out of my mind and hurried to take a quick shower and wear the dress. While I was blow-drying my hair, my phone rang and I put it to speakerphone.

"Where are you, Di? I haven't seen you after lunch."

"I'm in my room. I've been to the theatre with Vyan and then we were just roaming around." I pulled my hair up and examined how it looked. Dissatisfied, I let it fall again. "What have you been up to?"

"Raunaq and I went to the bowling alley, and then he bought me lots of stuff, and then we spent some time on the deck." She was excited as she shared her day's adventures. "And now we're going to the cinema to watch a film. Raunaq wanted me to ask if you want to join us."

My hands which were running through my hair paused for a moment.

"No, uhh... I already have plans."

"Ooh! With whom?" I could almost see her wriggling her eyebrows through the phone.

"I'm going to the ball with Vyan. I was just getting ready for that."

"Oh my! Vyan, huh?" She was trying to tease. "Do you want some help dressing up?"

"No. I'm almost done."

"Take a picture and send it to me. I want to see how you look!" I rolled my eyes. Chhoti would always be the same!

I did as directed as soon as she cut the call, and instantly received a compliment as well as some advice on what kind of makeup would do.

I had just completed my look with my hair tied into a French roll and a smokey makeup when Vyan knocked on the door. With a last look at myself and with confidence that I looked presentable, if not pretty, I opened the door to see him in formals too. He looked handsome in the metallic grey vest and pants with a white shirt. It brought out his blue eyes.

"You look lovely!" He complimented me as we walked to the restaurant. I smiled a little, my cheeks darkening of their own accord.

"So do you!" I praised him back and he mock-bowed, making me giggle.

The evening with Vyan was not an uncomfortable affair at all. He was a friend, and more than that, an amazing person, and that was what shined throughout the evening. He was at his chivalrous best; holding the door open and leading me inside, pulling out the chair for me, offering to get me a drink. He made me laugh with random incidents he narrated in such a jocular manner.

"You dance pretty well." We were waltzing around the dance floor.

"Why, thank you!" He said sweetly and then continued with an air of haughtiness. "High school dance champion here."

"Really?" I raised my eyebrows. "That's impressive! But tell me, did you really not find a good sport to master in instead of dance? You chose dance, seriously?"

He knew I was just pulling his leg so he played along. "Of course. I was plotting to impress the gorgeous Geet Handa with my dancing skills someday!" He winked at me and I laughed even as he twirled me around.

Dancing was fun and friendly with Vyan. He kept a casual string of conversations throughout, not letting any awkwardness settle between us even when he had his hand lightly placed on my waist and mine was on his shoulder. I really liked the fact that he seemed to know, and take care of, the limits I was comfortable with.

While I was on the dance floor with Vyan, someone caught my eye. It was Maan, leading the woman, Sasha, to the dance floor at the other corner. I took in the way his arm was holding her from the waist and the way he danced with her. She was his girlfriend, I was sure of that now. Not just a friend he had introduced her as. It made me want to laugh at how much a Don Juan he had turned into, going around with a different woman every week.

A chuckle did escape my lips and Vyan asked why I was laughing.

"Sometimes, things are funny in the way they change."


Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo



🤗

Kittu, I think I should start saving the quotations you leave here on the thread. They're so good I can make a collection of them. 😃

I think the three of these quotations pretty much sum up the chapter's main theme.

Thanks for sharing them! 🤗


🤗 Its my pleasure darling.. to share these quotes. .. and even you can relate to it.. 😳

saving those quotes?/ 😛

u did make me speechless mayyo.. i was unable to form words to express.. more than that..

i was thinking about the turmoil those two individuals are going through ... it kinda makes me feel good ..bad. and then sad..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kick me if u want to.
today i m going to bash Geet. i know i won't be reasonable.

Wat geet is doing with Vyaan i think she almost did same to Maan. isn't it. first being too friendly, going out all these things and then - i m not interested in ur feelings for me. i m so frustrated. it seems she never understood maan. I m just not liking it.

sorry Mayyo.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo



Sach mein chaahti ho Maan sudhar jaaye? 😉

I'm glad you liked it, Sheen! And agar oont ghalat karwat pe baith gaya toh? 😆


Kia karoon chahti nhi hun but sudharna tou parega na 😳
It depends ghalat karwat konsi hogi 😉 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Chapter.. Fawad Khan aka Vyan was Cute today 😉
Geet aur Maan tou satak gaye hain 😆
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Superb update. It was nice to see that even though they went on vacation as a group, everyone had time to do their own thing. It was nice that Geet gave Vyan a chance by spending time with him and then going to the ball and I really liked that he didn't take advantage of her but instead maintained a respectful distance. Looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
atleast reading the updates... read few updates at one go...
awesome... !!!!

hmmm sometimes it seems geet really have moved on...
vyan i hope is not hurt later... i know geet is not giving any signs.. but still i feel he have started to have feelings for geet...

anyways awesome update... by any chance do we see maan geet dancing together in the ball???😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
I am loving t flow
Liking how u showing t fair chance u giving to vyan
Simply awesome & not at all out of place
Liking how very subtly he is trying to wo her
Even geets casual comfort ness is cool
But should not make g se mistake that she did with maan
Leading vyan knowing his feeling

That will be really sad
Not at all right

But as far as the straight fwdness is maintained it is cool

Lekin ek Baat Samjhe nahi aathi
It's obvious leading na to any guy
Getting anxious ready for a so called date
Etc etc
It will eventually lead to feelings na
Wonder how a girl can go out with any guy be it maan then & now vyan
& not lead them

So kya they can't be Frds with anyone without this talwar of Guys eventually getting hurt
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Posted: 11 years ago
iss baar na laal chehra for geet😡poor vyan kitna impress karne ka try karraha hai aur geet without thinking anything just making his hopes high poor guy kitna well behave karraha hai
maan ka dil thod kar ab uspar tarah kha rahi hai sasha ke saath usko dekh kar
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 26
awesome...
hmm this trip looks like Vyan and Geet are spending time so much together...
and Maan hes no where to be seen with Geet alone...
this Sasha is so haughty...
seriously Maan and his now new tastes...
cont soon dear...

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