Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4 - Page 85

Originally posted by: muskanp

I liked vyan's so wat next 😆
He defo not getting me time with geet with all her toli with her

I still don't see any reason to dislike vyan
He is just trying his chance with geet
Why not I say
Common that's t whole fun bit right




T four Frds together again was really beautiful
U re read t chapters from t other ff to get t feel
Oh it felt so beautiful

👏

Originally posted by: prerna1

great part dear

Just read your story

liked it very much

continue soon and add me in your pm list...

Originally posted by: mauaa

good update..👏

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Awe .. lovely !!!

Nothing as wonderful as reliving for old days memories.

It is cherished for a life time !!!

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

I am back Ji😃
Welcome back Ji! 😃

Caught up with all the chapters.. and man as I was reading through the chapters.. there was a point I was singing its a love story baby just say yesss!!!!... then I was wheeling with excitement at the thought of the enactment of Jack and Rose... My heart was breezing with ' my heart will go on'

The song is an all time favourite of mine and I was planning to use it in the story but I'm not sure yet. 😃

...Sooo excited with how the story will make a turn on this cruise.. but I am equally surprised that the whole herd turned up hahaa!! .. Vyan ki brewing romantic thoughts got stashed to family drama instead😃😆

Uh-huh! Never take anyone for granted! I'm sure Vyan is smart enough to find a way to let his thoughts brew. 😆

You know I got to admit when you said that Wired Hearts will be from Geet's pov, I felt hesitant to read on with a pinch.. Since I was in the comfort zone of reading from Maan's perspective in its prequel.. and honestly, the delicacy of emotions with which Maan had portrayed his pov I thought would lack here.. but I am so glad now!

Frankly, IOYSM was much easier to write with Maan's POV. That is the only reason why it started and ended from his eyes. I don't know how Geet's POV ended up there but this story is from her POV because Maan is in a zone where I cannot quite write his mind at the moment.

Since Maan is no more the same Maan from outer side..its Geet's turn to peel away each layer of his character with her thoughts, emotions and notions... and now I am quite comfortable with reading Geet's pov since she is practical enough to acknowledge her mistakes and move on (for now!) or rather rectify sooner or later😉

Yes, that is another reason of Maan's POV being hidden. It will be a mutely for Geet to solve this time around...

Aaah❤️The bliss of Friendship.. the days of carefree madness... to reminiscent those moments with those very beloved people is true bliss... and I am happy to witness this on the very first day of the trip..

char din main kya kya hone waala hai Ji... can't wait for this epic titanic rollercoaster😃

I won't quite call it a roller coaster. Of course, it will set some things in motion but it will be too soon to say how effective this trip will be.

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Oh oh!! Bhool hi gayi!!

Aapne bohot zyaada taareed ki, of my small touching comment.. I tried my way of showing you how much I have loved your work and tried to acknowledge your efforts.. I am filled with great happiness that u felt so loved with my comment.. thank you for appreciating my small gesture..

And and .. you liked my sketch of Laal Ishq... thank you.. deeply humbled,It was a token of gratitude towards Avi and her work.. it came so naturally that I felt no efforts were required to portray my thoughts😳

Originally posted by: Susegad

Sasha and Vyan were completely sidelined.😆...kyunki...

Jahan Chaar Yaar Mil Jaayen Wahin Raat Ho Gulzar

Mehfil Rangeen Jame Dhoom Mache Daur Chale

Mast Mast Nazar Dekhe Naye Chamatkar

Jahan Chaar Yaar...

Don't underestimate them just yet. It was only the first day of the trip, after all.
By the way, I like those words! Kiske hain?

Ah memories. Misty colored memories of yesteryear's.😳

Forgetting all the games, the undercurrents, the pride, they came together.

Only with Ayush and Anaya as buffer, could these two approach some kind of normalcy.

Yes, it was greatly due to Anaya and Ayush that this happened. But don't worry, there will come a time when they won't need a buffer. 😃

And why is she sneaking glances at our SBV ke dole shole?😲

Guys who are friend zoned do not draw your eyes. AHA Geet !!😉

Aankhon pe kiska control hota hai! 😆

But why am I feeling like this whole interlude is like the calm before the storm.

Well, I won't say a lot for now. A storm will come but it isn't so soon in the story so you don't have to worry just yet.

I just can't imagine

Waiting to see how and where this progresses from here.😃

Where this progresses, you'll know but where I'll hide, you won't know. 😆

Originally posted by: paponecon

maan or vyan, th main hero in this story?lv their moments

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

This chapter didn't ease my heart or anxiety like it did for many, it infact had multiplied it. The same happened to me the other day when he so easily flirted with her in her home.

His peculiar character was so... different.

I know where he's coming from and that's why it makes me edgy.

A person whose feelings have been that deep, if and when retaliates, and shows that they are unaffected from there on, and if their persona is so closed with indifference, it is a sign of coldness.

And I am not sure where this coldness is taking him?

Won't our heart flutter even if we meet just a classmate of ours after that long? That one moment when he was disarmed and surprised when he first saw her, that is the precise moment I was more comfortable with him, than I am with him today.

Even today when all of them recount their good old days, why do I feel that he singles her out and ignores her entirely?

Oh God, why am I sounding like a love sick puppy?

Mari, what the hell are you doing to me?

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

First of all, 🤗
This chapter didn't ease my heart or anxiety like it did for many, it infact had multiplied it. The same happened to me the other day when he so easily flirted with her in her home.

His peculiar character was so... different.

While the rest chose to enjoy what the superficial facades show, you chose to look beyond that. Just the thing I would expect you to do! 😃

I know where he's coming from and that's why it makes me edgy.

A person whose feelings have been that deep, if and when retaliates, and shows that they are unaffected from there on, and if their persona is so closed with indifference, it is a sign of coldness.

Yes. Coldness is what floats beneath the surface of a mask of indifference. And nobody can begrudge that person of harbouring these feelings after what he had had to go through.

And I am not sure where this coldness is taking him?

Suppressed emotions never take one towards betterment.

Won't our heart flutter even if we meet just a classmate of ours after that long? That one moment when he was disarmed and surprised when he first saw her, that is the precise moment I was more comfortable with him, than I am with him today.

Honesty, writing Maan's scenes through Geet's eyes are turning out to be as difficult for me as his thought processes would be. Whenever I think of what would be in his mind at a precise moment, too many conflicting emotions take over making it hard for me to write down how his face would look to Geet...

Even today when all of them recount their good old days, why do I feel that he singles her out and ignores her entirely?

Well, she has felt no such thing yet, and seeing everything through her eyes, I can't reveal a lot about him. There is definitely a tight leash he has put on himself, which, when it breaks, will not be a pleasant thing for any of them.

Oh God, why am I sounding like a love sick puppy?

😆

Mari, what the hell are you doing to me?

Black magic! 😆

Thanks, Shika! Thank you so much for being there for me! 🤗