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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome idea sakti..thanks for the pm

arjun came back to the present as he heard the coffee mug being put back on the table. he sighed...

she on the other hand was looking at him with curiosity. something told her he was different...

but she couldn't be sure..she'd been cheated before...betrayal...she hated nothing more than this...and there was nothing that had ever hurt her more..

it had hurt so much that nothing was left inside her..that hollowness had succumbed to a burning rage which was insatiable till it tasted the wine of revenge...

she was thirsty...so thirsty that nothing could satisfy her parched soul.

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my continuation part ...😳

she came close to him and made a coughing sound which made him look up at her..she had doubtful eyes..the pain,the fear,the fierce eyes he had seen earlier were lost...she was doubtful whether to trust him..

he had kidnapped her last night and now he has almost kept her captive in his own house...she needed an answer for everything and he was still not ready with one..

he knew he couldnt force himself on her but he needed her to stay with him..he too had to take the revenge...he too had been betrayed..and the agony of losing his loved possesion still burnt his heart every moment now..

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

she came close to him and made a coughing sound which made him look up at her..she had doubtful eyes..the pain,the fear,the fierce eyes he had seen earlier were lost...she was doubtful whether to trust him..

he had kidnapped her last night and now he has almost kept her captive in his own house...she needed an answer for everything and he was still not ready with one..

he knew he couldnt force himself on her but he needed her to stay with him..he too had to take the revenge...he too had been betrayed..and the agony of losing his loved possesion still burnt his heart every moment now..

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My part:

She walked towards her savior, taking a small step at a time. Her eyes caught his, his eyes had some inexplicit emotions. She also had lost her loved one, but his agony was different. His eyes had pain, but there was something else too. She wanted to know about him. But before that she needed her answers.

After combining her left over courage she finally asked "Aap mujhe apne ghar Q laye? Hospital mai bhi to chor sakte the."

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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Sakthi

@greensakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

He turned to face her.

he could see her questioning eyes, but he had no answers to give her right now.

And he could not explain it to her, for i(Shree) was the one who told him to get her out of the hospital and as soon as possible.

I had no intention to hurt her ,but i came to know that the accident was not occurred accidentally, but was a determined one.

I didn't inform him that her mother was a witness in one of the cases the intuition involved, where she(the girl's mother) was working.

Now I 'm going to start digging the case further, once I filled him in.

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Superb
Continue soon thanks for pm

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