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Wish to have a nice day cuties,

Suddenly I got this idea to write a new, wonderful story in a new , wonderful way.(No idea if someone already started )

Okay, This is the idea, Here you can improvise your story telling by improvising this story as your own.

The one line of our story is one day'. You can move this story to thriller genre (style),homily or even jovial as you wish, while continuing.

Flashbacks are allowed , though our story is the events of a day!

You can include as many characters as you want, the only point is CONTINUATION.

First let me tell you the rules, Simple rules actually,

• Your story will be in ten lines maximum, you may update two posts at a time if your story is more than ten lines. (Stop short at the end of your Twenty lines for others to move the story)
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• Two lines are the minimum limit for a post.
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• Comments are NOT allowed ; Commenting is clicking the LIKE' button here.
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• If you see no further updating the next day you can update your own story further.
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• Please check for updates before you post.(This will give you a chance to check whether your story is the continuation of the last part)
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• Store this PM to improvise the stories further.(I'll be ready to PM the link, if you ask , at no time)
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• Pictures are allowed.🤗

Guys , If you like this idea click the LIKE' button of this post and start writing. 👍🏼

(Dear God! plz ,plz do make them like!)

Guys PM your improvised story (the ten lines/twenty) to your friends, for them to improvise.🥳

In that PM plz give the title 'No Comments Please' for them to know our idea and the simple rules.

I hope you enjoy writing here! 😛

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Ita short Shakti not fair 😆😆

this is my continuation

Arjun woke up with a start and felt the irritation in his eyes.

He stretched his neck to see the alarm.

He realized it was still three in the morning.

He surveyed the room to know what made him to wake up at this hour.

The room was quiet and still except for a week cry, heard from the far side of the room.

**

He turned to his side and saw her crouched on the floor,

her hands covering her face and she was sobbing.

he got up from the bed, and sat beside her on the floor,

she didn't notice him until he placed his palm on her shoulder,

she flinched at his touch and moved away.

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Ita short Shakti not fair 😆😆

But good 😃

*great idea. hope this fits*

HOPE THIS WILL GO WITH UR STORY:

Arjun woke up with a start and felt the
irritation in his eyes. He stretched his neck to see the alarm. He realized it was still three in the
morning. He surveyed the room to know what
made him to wake up at this hour. The room was quiet and still except for
a week cry, heard from the far side of
the room. ** He turned to his side and saw her
crouched on the floor, her hands covering her face and she
was sobbing. he got up from the bed, and sat beside
her on the floor, she didn't notice him until he placed his
palm on her shoulder, she flinched at his touch and moved
away. *** He took his hand away and sighed.
"daro math. you are safe here" "please mujhe jaane do... meine kuch
nahi kiya" "par bahar tumhare jaan ko khatra hai.
so we will have to hide for a while" she silently cried again. he could gather
that she had not slept or eaten
anything from yesterday evening. He
needed to keep her alive. "tum yahi
ruko. mein abhi aya"

He came back with two cups of coffee n sandwiches..

He sees that the girl was in same position he left her..

He keeps their breakfast on side table n goes near her n bends upto her level n pick her up holding her shoulder n make her sit on couch..

He says, 'kuch khalo.. Kal se tumne kuch nahi khaya.. Aise hi rahi toh kamzor par jaogi aur bimar ho jaogi.. Rone se koi prob solve nahi hogi.. Avi kuch khalo phir thodi der aaram karo.. Phir kya karna hai aage sochenge..'

He anyhow convinces her n make her have little food n ask her to sleep n put blanket on her after making sure she is asleep..

He takes his breakfast n cleans the mess n watching tv but lost in her thoughts n yesterday's event..

it had hurt so much that nothing was left inside her..that hollowness had succumbed to a burning rage which was insatiable till it tasted the wine of revenge...

Originally posted by: greensakthi

A girl of ten rushed out of the shop and ran toward the street.

She came out clumsily ignoring the shouts behind.

She thrust herself forward to the hospital where her mother ,her only support was admitted.

'How could it be possible? God knew that she needed her mother ,then why?..'

She reached the hospital at last only to know that there were no survivors of the accident..

Her world stumbled and she fell to the floor, fainted.

When she opened her eyes again, she saw an officer standing at the window of the room,looking outside,seemed in deep thought.

She saw the same agony in those eyes,which matched hers..

Losing a soul you loved most , always hurts..