AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 3- chapters 9 to 13 - Page 71

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Woohoo im first dear but too late to comment...😃
Sowwie 😆

it's okay ani.. i am more late to reply 😆😆

Im speechless after read this part bcz u wrote it so good👏

thank you so much dear 😳

And Thank u so much for the dedication dear 🤗

awww 😳😳
love you darling 🤗

Abt the update...
It was so cute part😊.
Beautifully penned 👍🏼👍🏼

thanks again 😳

loved the progress in asya relationship.❤️
Dilshad was adorable - such an understanding mom😳

yeah!!dilshad is just superb as a mom 😳

asya good night wala phone convo & zoya anticipation was beautiful ankie😳.. I loved it..❤️
i found it as cute when dil mom caught his smile😆 after night convo..

ha ha... dilshad is just too chalak 😉😆

At first zoya was so scared after seeing dilshad but that assurance from asad in car was cute - even dil mom noted it😆

yeah!!dilshad had her eyes on her 😆

loved dil when she invite asad friends to their home❤️ she loved to spend time with asad frnds😃 - cute..

she wanted to know zoya more...that's why😃

Dairy scene & her nervousness was lovely..
That warm welcome- tenderness & love towards them touched zoya😳

dilshad has already accepted her 😳

Asad mood change after he saw his father (rashid-bas****d) - well written..

thank you 😛
rashid 😡

Zoya little touch conveyed a feeling of strength & courage in him😳 aww😳 - lovely lines..

thanks again 🤗

Dil mom gladly amused then she smile inwardly & thanked allah was cute..😊
Happy asad finally understood that zoya slowly become his strength😳

how come he become her weekness??😕 Looking forward to read how the story is progressing & want to see role of dairy soon
i loved this part dear friend❤️
Ani😃







sorry for being so late to reply ani...
and thanks a lot for your lovely comments 😳🤗

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Hi dear ankie...😳
this part was awesome with asya cute nok-jhok & romance 👍🏼👍🏼

Hey Ani..😳
ha ha...they are always up to some fight 😆

when i started to read this part i was like allah miya wats wrong with them
What happen😕, Y they were fought😃, whose fault is that😊, why he liked to apologize😆 & when they will patch up😆

i hope the update answered all your questions 😆

Dairy scene was cute as always dear😳..

thank you 😳

Loved their adorable nok jhok😳 when they not received the calls & messages...
This is common in youngesters daily life dear. While im read this i reminded my olden & golden college days..

college days were really fun

Loved afreen & farhaan romance😆

ha ha 😆 they are a cute couple 😳

I found najma as a cute pee😳

pee?? 😲😲🤣

Nicely she handled our perfectionalist & zoya👏

najma was tired of their bickering 😆

Loved their fight in the canteen❤️
Then i must thank the remote🤣 🤣
Bcz remote played it cute role😆

ha ha...yeah!! 🤣 🤣

Firstly badameez dil 😆
Then my favrite ''SUBHANALLAH'' ☺️
Emotionally challence initiated her for a dance im in asya dreamland now
Finally they step into the new feeling😳
Asya swayed in the rhythm of music☺️
they twirled & swirled - aww
They kept anger for a moment & romanced😆 😆 moment😆
Hand in hand😳, steps matching steps😳, eyes fixed on eachother😳 shy smile - aww😳 - u describe it beautifully dear😃
Standing ovation to u👏

OMG Ani!!! tht truly means a lot to me.. 😳🤗


Yeah ''SOMETHING HAS CHANGED'' between them.. Can u describe this something detaily dear😉

wait for the future updates dear 😉😆

Each & every move of dance was prefect 👍🏼👍🏼 it was their first close proximity😳
asad is asad & zoya is zoya😆 - loved their cute fight in car- the was they defend each other-aww
so finally we got some asya romance..😳

yeah!! they finally danced together..this is what all the readers wanted since day 1 when they got to know that asad is a dancer 😉😆

Tell me when they both kiss eachother ankie...

kiss... 🤔🤔😆

im curious to know wat next..
Update soon dear..
Love yah..❤️
Ani😃

thanks again Ani... for always showering me with so much love 🤗

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I am back with the next chapter. Hope you all will like it. Please read the note below. 😛

This update is dedicated to my dear friend Sania (AAKKSG) 😳

Love you buddy.. But this is not what I was talking about the other day buddy... 😆😆

UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS

PART 13

Two days before the event

Asad was more lively and cheerful after the moment he had shared with Zoya. Holding her in his arms, and feeling her heartbeat so closely, evoked some undefined feelings in him. His mind was preoccupied with Zoya's thoughts in her absence and his eyes always searched for her when he felt her presence around him.

But whenever he thought about Zoya, he remembered the promise that he had made to her. He would talk to his mother, and that particular thought of facing his past once again always made him weak. But he knew that now it was time for him to surpass his courage over the fear that possessed him since years. He closed his eyes and thought about the trust that Zoya had in him. It immediately brought a smile on his face.

He headed towards his parent's room and knocked at the door after waiting for a minute. He knew that Rashid was out of town, hence talking to his mother would be easier in his absence in the house. He steadied himself and entered the room when he heard Dilshad's voice which asked him to come in.

"Asad, what happened beta? You didn't sleep yet?"

"No Ammi, I am not feeling sleepy. So thought of talking to you if you are not feeling sleepy yet", he said, not looking into his mother's eyes.

Dilshad was sitting on the bed and working on her laptop. She closed it and patted the place beside her in a gesture for Asad to sit. Asad took short steps and sat there, reluctantly.

"So, my son is here to talk with me! that's a change!", she said, dramatically.

Asad laughed at his mother's efforts to lighten the atmosphere around them. He knew that Dilshad already knew that he was there to talk about something serious, as in the past few years, he had never really come to her room for just a casual talk.

Asad gave a gracious smile to her and sighed heavily before he finally looked into her eyes.

"Ammi, I wanted to ask you something."

"Sure beta, you can always ask me anything, anytime. You don't need to have my permission", she said in the kindest way.

"Woh... actually ...Ammi... I... wanted to... actually Ammi...I..." Asad fumbled with his words.

Dilshad noticed his difficulty to frame his words. She kept one hand over his and made him face her with the other.

"What happened Asad?", she said in a bit worried tone now.

Asad, who was tottering with his words, gathered courage and asked her what he wanted to for years.

"Ammi, do you remember someone named Shireen?"

"Shireen...?" He heard his mother repeat the name. She was perturbed by his sudden query, but came at ease within a few seconds. Asad tried to follow every reaction of his mother but was able to perceive none.

"Shireen??...", she thought again. "No Asad, I can't remember anybody with that name. But why are you asking?"

Asad was now again in a mess. The situation became more difficult for him now.

"She worked in our company Ammi. She was your secretary.", he said, hoping that his mother would remember at least something about that woman. Dilshad thought for another minute and finally said, "No Asad, I really can't remember her. As far as my secretary is concerned, it's now Wahida who has been working for me since many years. Shireen... Iwill have to check my records for that."

"No Ammi, there's no need for that. You don't have to check the old records.", he said frantically.

"What has happened to you? Why are you suddenly asking about my secretary whom I can't even recall?"

"Nothing...nothing at all Ammi... just like that..."

"Okay... If you are saying so...", she said, still unconvinced with his answer.

"Here I thought my son has come to speak about something, rather someone important with me... But no!! my bad luck it is..", she said, trying to tease him when she saw him getting up from the bed.

Asad, who was already confused with his mother's reaction and inability to recognize her once upon a time secretary was left completely baffled now. He gave Dilshad a perplexed look and sat down again and asked, "What are you talking about Ammi?"

Dilshad tried to ease her fake frown at the response of her dull-witted son.

"I am talking about the person who has suddenly changed my son so much!" Asad still tried to register what Dilshad said. He was slightly irritated too as he was not in a mood to crack riddles after the unsuccessful conversation with his mother.

"Whom are you talking about Ammi?", annoyance clear in his voice.

"I. am. talking . about . Zoya!", she said, pausing after each word and stressing more on the name.

Zoya's name immediately brought a smile on his lips which he hurriedly removed before getting caught by Dilshad. But it was late. He was caught. Her mother had already seen him grinning like a fool only at the name of her.

"What do you think about her Asad?"

"Woh...actually Ammi..."

Dilshad was not exactly shocked at the behavior of her ignorant son. She knew that he would take time. She did not nudge him further but only said what she felt.

"She is a nice girl Asad."

Asad was till now avoiding looking into Dilshad's eyes, but her sudden remark made him look into her. Her eyes were full of motherly care and it distinctly explained that his masked emotions were caught by her skillful eyes. Asad smiled a little and moved away from the room leaving the door shut.

The day of the event

Zoya woke up early in the morning than usual as she had to reach much before time. She quickly sent Asad a text message and asked him not to wait for her as she would be going earlier. She was excited as well as nervous. She was happy to get an opportunity to arrange an event in her supervision and at the same time, she was afraid of the consequences that would be if the event didn't work out well.

She let out a deep sigh, prayed to Allah, took blessings from her parents and left for the venue. She managed to take out some time and wrote in her diary before going out.

Dear Diary,

It is a big day for me. Please help me to get through everything. Will fill in you with all the details once I am back. Bye for now!

Flower bouquets for the chief guests - checked

List of the performances- checked

Anchor- checked

Gift for the fresher's - checked

Songs - checked

Getting participants ready - checked

Every participant reached - checked...not checked!!

Zoya reached the venue early and was mentally checking out everything in the morning again. She suddenly realized that she didn't have any idea about the condition in the boys' green room! She had no idea if everyone there reached or not. She quickly got hold of her fellow class mate and asked him to check the scenario in the boy's room. He went and came back after ten minutes only to inform her that everyone had reached and even got ready, except one. She was shocked to learn the name. It was Asad.

She did not call him even once since the morning but she had informed him not to wait for her. She called up Asad only to find his phone switched off. She called up Farhaan to know if Asad had come with them. She got worried when he replied her in negative. She ran back to the girls' room and enquired Aafreen about the same, even though knowing what her answer would be.

The event began with the opening speech of the Director of their Institute and also small speeches by each of the Management members. The flower bouquets were distributed and now it was time for the performances to begin.

She checked the time. She had been calling him since an hour, but still got the phone switched off. Najma and Asad's solo were supposed to be the opening performances, just as it was planned. She quickly went to the anchor and cancelled Asad's performance and informed Najma about the same. She did not want to worry her or Aafreen now, so she kept about the news about Asad's delay in coming upto herself. She could not deny that she was worried, but she had to make the necessary changes in the schedule. If needed, she would also have to cancel the group act that was planned.

She kept calling in Asad's number but all her effort went in vain.

Najma's performance was as usual liked by all. She did marvelously well in her classical act.

Zoya broke the news about Asad's non arrival to Najma and Aafreen and also informed them about the possibility of their act getting cancelled. Just as expected, they all got worried about Asad. Aafreen called in Asad's landline number which was received by Wajid. He informed her that Asad was already out very early in the morning today.

Zoya was in a dilemma. She could neither leave the venue nor stay there doing nothing other than waiting. She could neither reach Asad nor control her restlessness. Her worry for him brought all irrational thoughts in her mind!!

Zoya sat with Aafreen and Najma in one corner of the green room. She was fidgeting with her phone and was waiting for a call from Asad. Her phone rang but it was Farhaan's name flashing on the screen. She took the call and ran out of the hall like a blow of wind only to launch herself in Asad's arms.

Farhaan, who was waiting outside with a little hope of Asad's return, had called up Zoya when he saw Asad entering through the gate.

Zoya hugged him as tightly as she could. For a moment it felt like she had almost lost him forever and now it felt like her life depended on the hug. All her worry was slowly getting replaced by her anger. She wanted to shout at him, wanted to question him about his whereabouts, but words refused to come out when he saw his disordered look. His red swollen eyes were all saying a different story.

"What happened Asad? Where were you? Why did you keep your phone switched off? Why didn't you inform us anything? Do you have any idea how worried we were? What happened? Why aren't you saying anything now?", she enquired of him only to receive nothing from him.

"I m sorry for being so late. When is the next performance?", he said while pushing Zoya away from him. That was when she realized that Asad had never reciprocated the hug. She wanted to yell at his ignorance, but stopped herself from creating a scene there. He looked so tired and disturbed, thought Zoya.

Zoya informed the anchor about Asad's arrival. Asad got dressed in his costume and gave a beautiful performance with Najma and Aafreen. It went better than it was planned. The event was successful and Zoya was praised by all. But Zoya did not want any praises; she only demanded answers from Asad which he was reluctant to give.

Zoya waited for him outside, determined to talk to him. She saw him nearing towards his car, alone.

"Will you not wait for me today?", asked Zoya from behind.

Asad didn't turn back. He answered still keeping his focus on opening the door of his car.

"I suppose you can go home with Aafreen and Farhaan today."

"What is wrong with you Mr. Khan? Do you have any idea what you did today?"

"Why are you quiet now? Say something damn it!! ", yelled Zoya losing her patience. Aafreen, Farhaan and Najma who were already there decided not to poke into this matter. They took a leave leaving Zoya to deal with Asad.

"I was so worried Asad! You shouldn't have done this!", shouted Zoya while turning him around forcefully and holding him by his shirt's collar. Asad could no longer control the emotional turmoil that he was going through. He held Zoya by her waist and pulled her towards himself and almost crushed her in his arms. Zoya hugged him back and let out the tears that she was holding back for so long. Asad too did not stop himself. He was vulnerable at the moment and he needed her by his side.

They pulled apart from each other after what seemed like eternity. He found solace being in her arms and she found herself secured being in his. They found an indefinable comfort being wrapped in each other's arms which soothed his pain and her anger.

A/N: Finally I am done with this chapter. 😃

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Originally posted by: BeYourself

i have written a very little portion...will try to update today, hopefully 😛

ohhh wow... Jaldi jaldi jaldi...

Kya kiya mere asad k saat i m sure.. Tumne kuch kiya hoga 😕 hmm it's abt rashid na 😡 it was awesome ankie... Loved it 👏 aaww dillu... She so sweet.. Bina kahe pata chaljaata hai asad k Mann k baat... Loved their small scene.. But how come she ddnt even remember abt shireen ? She was her secretary r8 ? R not 🤢 aaww asad.. He has zoyas fever 😆 hpy to know the event went well.. Nd the performances also.. Sachhi yaar.. The feelng... Losing sumone who means everything to u is unbearable... But y dd he ignored her 1st.. But thn he is back in her arms.. Where he found solace nd peace 👏 😳 so beautifully written... Eager to knw wht is bothering him nw.. If turns out it's rashid... I promise.. i m going to kill him... Tum karne tak intezaar bhi nai karoongi... Loved their hug.. Continue soon dear... Thnks for the pm 😛