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Hello people. I am back with the update, after long time. Sorry for that. Hope you have not forgotten this track. Lol.
Recap:
Dr : no rey. It's a wrong way. Kriya believes in you. She trusts you a lot that's why she shares everything with you and agree to do anything for you. If you break her trust in you, her condition may worsen. She will never become normal mentally again. She will go back to her silent mode forever.
Rey gets worried to listen the consequences of his plan. Definitely he doesn't want all that to happen in any circumstances.
Rey : tho ab muje kya karna chahie Dr?
Dr : tell her the truth.
Rey : what? Rey gets shocked.
Dr : yes. We don't have any option. If she gets to know the truth you lied to her just to make her join yoga sessions then she will ever let you to help me in any way in the treatment again. She will start doing everything opposite of what we want. which is the last thing we want in this stage.. So.. tell her the truth.
Part 23:
All were looking at rey's worried face so rey didn't have any choice other than to reveal them about his plan and what did Dr suggest moments back. All are worried now listening to rey.
Kriya's condition is not different, who is sitting on a fire escape stairs. Well it's her secret hideout place. Whenever she feels she needs some time alone, kriya goes there. No one knows about it till date. Right now kriya is not worried about joining the yoga classes with rey but she is highly confused as to why is she doing all this for rey? Vicky and swayam, rey's childhood buddies, before they say anything, why did she agree herself to join yoga with rey? For rey? But why?
Kriya started doing the same thing what she usually does when she gets confused about something. She took a paper and wrote the question which is killing her mind right now that's "why did kriya agree to join rey for yoga?". Then she started writing points thinking seriously.
1. Rey is a nice person. He has helped kriya to spit her dark past in front of her friends.
2. rey has revealed to everyone about pari which in turn helped kriya to understand vicky's emotions towards her in more better way.
3. Rey is a very strong will powered person for which kriya adores him.
Kriya started thinking about the next point then she realizes what she wrote just now.
Kriya : "kriya adores rey" ? Kaise? Kab? Universe ji (looking up) what am I doing? Or trying to do? Do I really adore him? (After thinking for couple of mins) yeah. I do. But is it not wrong? Hey bhagwaan. She turns the page and on new page she writes her newly developed and fresh confusion " is 'kriya adoring rey' wrong?"
She thinks a lot then starts writing the points
1. Yes. Because rey is kriya'z brother, Vicky's best friend.
2. Yes because rey treats/considers kriya as his best friend Vicky's sister/close friend.
3. No. Because rey has many positive qualities which makes people to adore him.
Now kriya smiles at the last sentence.
Kriya : yes. Perfect answer to my question. If someone is full of positiveness, then anybody will get attracted to that person. Simple. Yes... oh no. "Get attracted"? Am I getting attracted to rey? No.. cant be. Because (she looks at the 1st and 2nd points on the paper and gulps) does he really treat me special because Vicky considers me as his sister, like pari? Is it why rey takes care of me all the time since the day he has joined college? Am I only Vicky's sister to him?
Kriya gets more and more confused as time passes so finally frustrated kriya decides
Kriya : universe ji kahan phasa diya muje aapne? No. Enough is enough now. Rey ko jo sochna hai sochne do, for me he will be my best friend like my group. And regarding me joining yoga with rey, huh I am just following my sallu's principal "dosti ki hai, nibhani tho padegi"(from mpk movie). Yeah right. Dont think too much kriya.
With that determined resolution, kriya left the fire escape to join her friends. She goes to canteen to find all her friends sitting with sad faces and bittu was looking at them furiously. She didn't understand what's the matter..
Taking the chair next to sharon,
Kriya : what's up guys? Bittu ko kisi ne kuch kaha? He is looking angry (turning towrds canteen counter from where bittu is furiously looking at them)
Sharon(sadly) : yeah. I mean we didn't do as anything exactly but yeah he's still angry.
Kriya : what? Impossible. (Looking at bittu again) By his look only I can tell you guys have done something. (Again observing bittus eye's on particular person and when she looks closely it was at rey she can bet on) or may be he is angry on one of you.
Rey immediately looks at kriya. Even everyone looks at rey as soon as kriya says that, confirming her doubt.
Kriya : hmm..so I am right. Rey? (Teasing tone. she thought it's some normal fight between rey and bittu)
Rey (in serious tone) : do you trust me?
Kriya feels something different about his tone. Nothing mischievous hidden in it. It was more of authoritative and demanding type.
Kriya : no doubt (looking at his face keenly to guess what's the matter but fails to do so)
Rey simply gets up and holding her hand says "come with me" . He simply takes kriya to vicky's home on his bike and the gang too join them on different vehicle.
Once they enter the house, rey makes kriya to sit on couch he sits infront of her on his knees. Holding kriya's hand,
Rey : confession time kriya.
Listening that sentence kriya becomes alert.
Kriya : matlab?
Rey : I have done something...back of you
Kriya : against me? (she fears sensing the seriousness in the surrounding)
Rey : according to you, yes, it will be.
Kriya : and according to you?
Rey : no. Never.
Kriya observes him for a minute trying to understand the situation and rey's words.
Kriya : what's it?
Rey : promise me something please
Kriya : what?
Rey : no matter how difficult it will be for you but you will listen to me completely what I have got to say. Promise (before rey completes the sentence, kriya replies)
kriya : promise.
Rey (taking deep breath) : huh. Kriya that day morning I went to meet your Dr. Next morning of your breakdown. (He observes kriya's face for any hurt or disappointment but he doesn't find any, which boosts him to continue further) i wanted to make sure your emotional breakdown on previous night has not affected your health seriously. And I..I...actually. ..wanted to know what's the matter with you. I was concerned about your mental status.
As soon as rey says that kriya withdraws her hands from rey's. She was shocked to learn that rey too thinks her as mental patient. And this new information numbed her all senses. She doesn't understand what's happening with her.
Everyone gets alerted they were about to go to her but rey's next action stops them..
Rey holds kriya's face and leans towards her pressing his forehead on her's. Gently rubbing her cheeks with his thumb where he is cupping her face " please kriya listen to me once. Please. You have promised me kriya. Please" (tears roll down from her eyes and slowly kriya regains herself and after a minute, detaching herself from rey, she wipes her eyes)
Kriya : sorry. Yeah then? (It gives rey a new hope)
Rey : yeah. I wanted to know your mental status because you had bottled up the whole worst past of yourself within you for such a long period of time. Such past which can break any girl, doesn't matter how strong she is. So I asked your dr, he said your condition is a type of depression, which had turned you into serious personality from bubbly girl. But your previous day's revelation may help you to come out of this whole condition if you want to. And I asked him what Does he meant by that? Then dr explained how uncooperative you have been to him since he is been treating you. I asked him i will try and help him in your case. So he said to start with, make you to join some yoga and breathing exercise classes. It's a first step. So I was just trying to do that. I..I am sorry.. just think kriya what you would've done if I was in your place and you were in my place.
The last sentence of rey definitely clicked and kriya understood rey's genuine concerns for her.
Kriya just nods her head looking at her hands, which are clutching and uncltching each other on her lap. Everyone became happy and overwhelmed at her positive and simple gesture but rey who is observing her hands doings got the point that she is nervous, highly nervous. Rey takes her both hands in his hands and slowly sliding his fingers between hers whispers "trust me, i want you to come out of this whole situation because, because I am being selfish here. More than for you, I am doing it for myself. And I NEED YOU in this not the other way".
Seeing rey and kriya looking at each other without blinking and their tears, the gang left them alone and went to guest room. Kriya hugs him and starts crying but this time rey let her cry. After few minutes she got exhausted and slowly sleeps in reys arms. He carries kriya to his room and lay her down on his bed. Ducking her in his blanket, he leaves the room and goes to the gang in guest house. Everyone hugs him conveying their thanks to him.
Rey calls the dr and informs him about whatever happened and dr says it's a good sign, let her join yoga for some days then will go for actually course of action.
Reviews/comments/criticism/likes/silent reading - all are most welcome.
Recap:
Dr : no rey. It's a wrong way. Kriya believes in you. She trusts you a lot that's why she shares everything with you and agree to do anything for you. If you break her trust in you, her condition may worsen. She will never become normal mentally again. She will go back to her silent mode forever.
Rey gets worried to listen the consequences of his plan. Definitely he doesn't want all that to happen in any circumstances.
Rey : tho ab muje kya karna chahie Dr?
Dr : tell her the truth.
Rey : what? Rey gets shocked.
Dr : yes. We don't have any option. If she gets to know the truth you lied to her just to make her join yoga sessions then she will ever let you to help me in any way in the treatment again. She will start doing everything opposite of what we want. which is the last thing we want in this stage.. So.. tell her the truth.
Part 23:
All were looking at rey's worried face so rey didn't have any choice other than to reveal them about his plan and what did Dr suggest moments back. All are worried now listening to rey.
Kriya's condition is not different, who is sitting on a fire escape stairs. Well it's her secret hideout place. Whenever she feels she needs some time alone, kriya goes there. No one knows about it till date. Right now kriya is not worried about joining the yoga classes with rey but she is highly confused as to why is she doing all this for rey? Vicky and swayam, rey's childhood buddies, before they say anything, why did she agree herself to join yoga with rey? For rey? But why?
Kriya started doing the same thing what she usually does when she gets confused about something. She took a paper and wrote the question which is killing her mind right now that's "why did kriya agree to join rey for yoga?". Then she started writing points thinking seriously.
1. Rey is a nice person. He has helped kriya to spit her dark past in front of her friends.
2. rey has revealed to everyone about pari which in turn helped kriya to understand vicky's emotions towards her in more better way.
3. Rey is a very strong will powered person for which kriya adores him.
Kriya started thinking about the next point then she realizes what she wrote just now.
Kriya : "kriya adores rey" ? Kaise? Kab? Universe ji (looking up) what am I doing? Or trying to do? Do I really adore him? (After thinking for couple of mins) yeah. I do. But is it not wrong? Hey bhagwaan. She turns the page and on new page she writes her newly developed and fresh confusion " is 'kriya adoring rey' wrong?"
She thinks a lot then starts writing the points
1. Yes. Because rey is kriya'z brother, Vicky's best friend.
2. Yes because rey treats/considers kriya as his best friend Vicky's sister/close friend.
3. No. Because rey has many positive qualities which makes people to adore him.
Now kriya smiles at the last sentence.
Kriya : yes. Perfect answer to my question. If someone is full of positiveness, then anybody will get attracted to that person. Simple. Yes... oh no. "Get attracted"? Am I getting attracted to rey? No.. cant be. Because (she looks at the 1st and 2nd points on the paper and gulps) does he really treat me special because Vicky considers me as his sister, like pari? Is it why rey takes care of me all the time since the day he has joined college? Am I only Vicky's sister to him?
Kriya gets more and more confused as time passes so finally frustrated kriya decides
Kriya : universe ji kahan phasa diya muje aapne? No. Enough is enough now. Rey ko jo sochna hai sochne do, for me he will be my best friend like my group. And regarding me joining yoga with rey, huh I am just following my sallu's principal "dosti ki hai, nibhani tho padegi"(from mpk movie). Yeah right. Dont think too much kriya.
With that determined resolution, kriya left the fire escape to join her friends. She goes to canteen to find all her friends sitting with sad faces and bittu was looking at them furiously. She didn't understand what's the matter..
Taking the chair next to sharon,
Kriya : what's up guys? Bittu ko kisi ne kuch kaha? He is looking angry (turning towrds canteen counter from where bittu is furiously looking at them)
Sharon(sadly) : yeah. I mean we didn't do as anything exactly but yeah he's still angry.
Kriya : what? Impossible. (Looking at bittu again) By his look only I can tell you guys have done something. (Again observing bittus eye's on particular person and when she looks closely it was at rey she can bet on) or may be he is angry on one of you.
Rey immediately looks at kriya. Even everyone looks at rey as soon as kriya says that, confirming her doubt.
Kriya : hmm..so I am right. Rey? (Teasing tone. she thought it's some normal fight between rey and bittu)
Rey (in serious tone) : do you trust me?
Kriya feels something different about his tone. Nothing mischievous hidden in it. It was more of authoritative and demanding type.
Kriya : no doubt (looking at his face keenly to guess what's the matter but fails to do so)
Rey simply gets up and holding her hand says "come with me" . He simply takes kriya to vicky's home on his bike and the gang too join them on different vehicle.
Once they enter the house, rey makes kriya to sit on couch he sits infront of her on his knees. Holding kriya's hand,
Rey : confession time kriya.
Listening that sentence kriya becomes alert.
Kriya : matlab?
Rey : I have done something...back of you
Kriya : against me? (she fears sensing the seriousness in the surrounding)
Rey : according to you, yes, it will be.
Kriya : and according to you?
Rey : no. Never.
Kriya observes him for a minute trying to understand the situation and rey's words.
Kriya : what's it?
Rey : promise me something please
Kriya : what?
Rey : no matter how difficult it will be for you but you will listen to me completely what I have got to say. Promise (before rey completes the sentence, kriya replies)
kriya : promise.
Rey (taking deep breath) : huh. Kriya that day morning I went to meet your Dr. Next morning of your breakdown. (He observes kriya's face for any hurt or disappointment but he doesn't find any, which boosts him to continue further) i wanted to make sure your emotional breakdown on previous night has not affected your health seriously. And I..I...actually. ..wanted to know what's the matter with you. I was concerned about your mental status.
As soon as rey says that kriya withdraws her hands from rey's. She was shocked to learn that rey too thinks her as mental patient. And this new information numbed her all senses. She doesn't understand what's happening with her.
Everyone gets alerted they were about to go to her but rey's next action stops them..
Rey holds kriya's face and leans towards her pressing his forehead on her's. Gently rubbing her cheeks with his thumb where he is cupping her face " please kriya listen to me once. Please. You have promised me kriya. Please" (tears roll down from her eyes and slowly kriya regains herself and after a minute, detaching herself from rey, she wipes her eyes)
Kriya : sorry. Yeah then? (It gives rey a new hope)
Rey : yeah. I wanted to know your mental status because you had bottled up the whole worst past of yourself within you for such a long period of time. Such past which can break any girl, doesn't matter how strong she is. So I asked your dr, he said your condition is a type of depression, which had turned you into serious personality from bubbly girl. But your previous day's revelation may help you to come out of this whole condition if you want to. And I asked him what Does he meant by that? Then dr explained how uncooperative you have been to him since he is been treating you. I asked him i will try and help him in your case. So he said to start with, make you to join some yoga and breathing exercise classes. It's a first step. So I was just trying to do that. I..I am sorry.. just think kriya what you would've done if I was in your place and you were in my place.
The last sentence of rey definitely clicked and kriya understood rey's genuine concerns for her.
Kriya just nods her head looking at her hands, which are clutching and uncltching each other on her lap. Everyone became happy and overwhelmed at her positive and simple gesture but rey who is observing her hands doings got the point that she is nervous, highly nervous. Rey takes her both hands in his hands and slowly sliding his fingers between hers whispers "trust me, i want you to come out of this whole situation because, because I am being selfish here. More than for you, I am doing it for myself. And I NEED YOU in this not the other way".
Seeing rey and kriya looking at each other without blinking and their tears, the gang left them alone and went to guest room. Kriya hugs him and starts crying but this time rey let her cry. After few minutes she got exhausted and slowly sleeps in reys arms. He carries kriya to his room and lay her down on his bed. Ducking her in his blanket, he leaves the room and goes to the gang in guest house. Everyone hugs him conveying their thanks to him.
Rey calls the dr and informs him about whatever happened and dr says it's a good sign, let her join yoga for some days then will go for actually course of action.
Reviews/comments/criticism/likes/silent reading - all are most welcome.
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