My new Veeba FF (UPDATED PART8)

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Hey everyone! I couldnt be away from India forums and VeeBa, lol, i got an idea and thought of writing another FF. Hope you guys like it... and sorry if it by any mean is similar to anyone else FF, i didnt to it intentionally, all said, here is part 1. ENJOY :D

PART1:
Baldev: Main ki karaan? Uss Ranvi ki wajah se enni takleef uthani parti hai mennu
(Baldev: What should i do?) Its because of that Ranvi i have to deal with problems)
Jaggi: Praaji, tussi na Ranvi nu dhamkado
(Jaggi: Brother, you should blackmail Ranvi)
Billa: Ha praaji, ae sahi hai
(Billa: Yes brother, thats good)
Baldev: Dhamkawa? Oske sath konsa faida ho ga? Ranvi agar maan bi jaye, uss Veera nu pata chal jaye ga, ussne mennu chorna nahi
(Baldev: Blackmail? What will i gain by that? Even if Ranvi agrees, if that Veera gets to know, she wont leave me)

Baldev, Jaggi and Billa were standing on their usual spot, trying to figure out how to convince everyone, and most importantly Ranvi for Baldev and Veeras marriage. Both Veera and Baldev had decided that, despite poor chances, they would get married only when everyone would give their yes. They hadnt talked to anyone yet, because they didnt know how to tallk to their respectively family.

Jaggi: Praaji, Veera
He pointed towards Veera who was walking to the market with her Chaiji. Both Baldev and Veera exchanged looks, and Veera quickly looked away. Baldev couldnt help but smile, he didnt even realize how his eyes where fixed on Veera.

Chaiji: Oye Baldev puttar
(Chaiji: Hey Baldev dear)
She shook him lightly.
Baldev: Ha? Oh Chaiji Sasriakal
(Baldev: What? Oh Chaiji, Hello)
Chaiji: Puttar tu kyu enna muskurara hai?
(Chaiji: Dear why are you smiling so much?)
Baldev: Wooo chaiji... mennu na, ek bandariya jaise shakal wali koi nazar agayi
(Baldev: Um Chaiji... i saw someone with a monkey like face)
Chaiji looked at Baldev and laughed, unknown of the fact that he was talking about Veera. Veera gave him an angry look and took Chaijis hand and walked away.
Billa: Praaji, lagda hai Parjaai ji naraz hogayi
(Billa: Brother, i think sister-in-law got upset)
Baldev: Oyee koi gall nahi, main Baldev Singh hu, mennu anda hai manana apni sherni nu
(Baldev: Hey no problem, i am Baldev Singh, i know how to pacify my lioness)
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Chaiji: Veera puttar, zara saman andar lee aa rasoi wich
(Chaiji: Veera dear, bring the grocery inside the kitchen)
Veera: Ji chaiji
(Veera: Yes chaiji)
She carried the bags and went inside the kitchen. Suddenly Chaiji started laughing.
Veera: Hayo Rabba, Chaiji aapko ki hoya?
(Veera: Oh God, chaiji what happened to you?)
Chaiji: Oh nahi, mennu Baldev di gall yaad agayi, Bandariya ki shakal wali nu wekha
(Chaiji: Oh no, i remembered Baldevs words. He saw a monkey like faced person)
She continued laughing. Veera got angry, but still deep inside, she wanted to laugh out loud.
Veera: Ohoo Chaiji,aap bi na, uss Baldev ki baaton pe hass rahi ho, kya aap?
(Veera: Ohoo chaiji, you also, are you laughing at that Baldevs words, what are you doing?)
Chaiji: Ha puttar main to bhool hi gayi thi, Baldev ne kaha na, aeswaste tennu te bura hi lage ga, bachpan de dushman jo ho tum dono
(Chaiji: Yea dear, i forgot. Baldev said that, thats why you didnt find it funny, you both are childhood enemies)
She continued laughing, Veera rolled her eyes and went up to her room.
She sat down on her bed, and was lost in her thoughts. Suddenly she burst into laughter. She remembered Baldevs stupid talks, she shook her head.
Veera: Baldeva, tu jitni bhi bakwaas karle, hai tu bara cute.
(Veera: Baldev, how much you even talk bullshit, you are very cute)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh u r back wid a new stry..tfs dear..nyc strt..do continue asap😊
waitin 4 d nxt
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Nice start!👏
Continue soon!😃
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Thanks for writing another FF anniec!!And thanks for the PM too!!
The start is awesome!!Looking forward for the story!!
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awww loved it!!!update soon yaar!!!i love reading ur stories!!!😃
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Yay...a new story!

Well that didn't take too Long at all lol!!! Looking forward to seein where this goes!
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Yayy you started another fanfic
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Lovely ...
Waiting for the next update.

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nice 👍🏼
plzz update asap
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PART2:

Ranvi: Veera, yeh le agayi teri coffe

(Ranvi: Veera, here you have your coffee)

Veera: Thanks Veerji

She hugged him.

Ranvi: Chal ab, idhar hi rukh, main tere waste bana ke aata ho

(Ranvi: Now, stay here, i will go and make you coffee)

Chaiji: haye Ranvi, tu kyun itna bigar raha hai issko? Shaadi ke baad iski saas ne isske koi nakhre nahi uthane

(Chaiji: Oh Ranvi, why are you spoiling her? Her mother-in-law wont deal with her attitude after marriage)

Veera: Oho chaiji, saas nahi to pati utha le ga na

(Veera: Oho chiaiji, if mother-in-law wont, then my husband will)

She started laughing. Ranvi smiled and went inside the kitchen.

Chaiji: Waise Ratan, main kya keh rahi si, aab Veera de waste bhi rishta dhoondna shuro kardena chahiye, Gunjan teri nazar main hai koi?

(Chaiji: Btw Ratan, i am thinking that we should now start looking for a alliance for Veera. Gunjan do you know any)

Gunjan: Hmmm... Nahi chaiji, lekin aap kaho to main baat karo beeji naal? Unko shaid pata ho koi

(Gunjan: Hmm... No chaiji, but if you say i can talk to my mom? Maybe she knows ?)

Ratan: Nahi Gunjan, koi gall nahi, agar hoga main Bansuri parjai ji se gall karlo gi, tu abhi choti hai, iss mamle me na par sarr dard hai sab

(Ratan: No Gunjan, no worry, if its needed, i will talk to Bansuri sister-in-law, you are still young, dont stress over these stuff now)

They all laughed. Veera just smiled awkwardly, Ranvi came with her coffee. She took it and started drinking it. Ranvi sat down next to her. They all were having a random chat when Veera got a message. She looked at it and saw Baldevs message:

"Kheto ke pas mill"

( " Meet me in the fields")

She smiled and drank her coffe quickly.

Ranvi: Kitthe ja rahi hai Veera?

(Ranvi: Where are you going Veera?)

Veera: Wo veerji, main naa... Priya se milne jarahi ho, usse na, angrezi sikhni hai... aapko to pata hai aaj kal usse kitna shauk hai angrezi ka

(Veera: Um brother, i... am going to meet Priya, she wants to learn englis.. you know how much she is obsessing over English nowadays)

Ranvi nodded, Veera smiled and went out. She started going towards the fields. She saw Baldev sitting there. She went up and sat next to him.

Veera: Ab tujhe nyota do Hello bolne ka?

(Veera: Should i give you an invite to say Hello?)

Baldev: Tujhe kissko Hello bolna hai?

(Baldev: Who wants to say Hello to you?)

Veera: Acha? Thik hai, main chalti ho phir

(Veera: Really? Fine, i will go then)

He took her hand and made her sit down again. He smiled and hugged her.

Baldev: Arree, naraz kyu horahi hai

(Baldev: Hey, why are you getting angry?)

Veera: Nahi naraz kaha ho, main to bohot khush ho, nazar nahi araha?

(Veera: No i am not angry, cant you see how happy i am?)

Baldev: Acha chor na gussa,

(Baldev: Okay forget your anger now)

Veera: Kyu? Meri shakal gusse me bandariya se bhi buri lagti hai?

(Veera: Why? Does my face look worse than a monkey when i am angry?)

She rolled her eyes. He started laughing. She hit him and they started to hit each other innocently.

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