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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART3:
It was evening, and everyone were getting ready, they were invited to Balwants house for a family dinner. Veera was extra happy and couldnt decide what to wear.

Chaiji: Oho puttar, tune konsa rishta dekhne jana hai jo tayyar nahi ho parahi?
(Chaiji: Oho dear, you are not going to look for a guy that you are taking this long to get ready)
Veera: Chaiji aap bi na?
(Veera: Chaiji, what are you saying)
Chaiji: Kahi Baldev naal tennu pyar te nahi hogaya?
(Chaiji: What if you have fallen for Baldev?)
Veera became shocked. She just stood there with no expression on her face, was it that obvious that she liked Baldev? What would happen now? She would definetly get in trouble. She was mum, she couldnt say a thing.

Chaiji: Hayo Rabba, tennu ki hoya? Main mazak kar raiya
(Chaiji: Oh God, what happened to you? I was just joking)
Veera finally got a relief, and rolled her eyes. Chaiji laughed and went outside. Veera finally picked a dress and got ready. Everyone were standing downstairs.
Ranvi: Veera? Tayyar hai tu? Chale?
(Ranvi: Veera? Are you ready? Shall we go'?)
Veera nodded. They headed towards Balwants house. When they entered they were greeted by Baldev. Veera couldnt hold her laughter so she just looked away. They met Balwant and Bansuri, and then they all sat down on the dining table, and started eating.

Chaiji: Bansuri, waise khana bohot hi changa bana hai
(Chaiji: Bansuri, btw the food is really good)
Bansuri: Shukriya chaiji,
(Bansuri: Thanks chaiji)
Chaiji: Waise enna zada khana banaya hai tune, thaki nahi tu?
(Chaiji: Btw, how could you manage to make so much food, didnt you get tired?)
Bansuri: Kya karo main Chaiji, ab bas koi changi ji bahu mil jaye na
(Bansuri: What should i do Chaiji, now all i want is a good daughter-in-law)
Baldev and Veera looked at each other and smiled teasingly. Suddenly Veera got a call and went up and talked on the phone. Baldev kept looking at her, a little curious, a little insecure. When she came back he couldnt help but ask.
Baldev: Kon si?
(Baldev: Who was it?)
Everyone looked at him a little weirdly.
Veera: Wo, meri Delhi wali teacher ka phone tha, College-get-together party hai
(Veera: Um, my teacher from Delkhi called, there is a college get together party)
Balwant: Ae ki honda hai puttar?
(Balwant: What is that dear'?)
Veera: Wo tayaji, matlab hum sab jo college jate the na, humari liye party rakhi hai, sab ek dosre se mile ge
(Veera: Uncle, it means that we all who went to College are going to have a party, and meet everyone and all)
Ranvi: Veera yeh to changi gall hai na, kab jana hai?
(Ranvi: Veera thats good, when do you have to go?)
Veera: Veerji, kal hai party, matlab kall subha jaana pare ga,
(Veera: Brother, the party is tomorrow, means i have to go early)
Ranvi: Acha Veera, tu ghar jake na, packing karlena
(Ranvi: Okay Veera, when we go homw, pack your stuff)
Veera: Or veerji, uno ne ghar walo ko bhi bulaya hai
(Veera: And brother, they have also called the family)
Ranvi: Veera... subha to tere sath nahi aa pao ga main, shaam tak shaid asako
(Ranvi: Veera... i cant come in the morning, but i will try to come until the evening)
Balwant: Puttar, Baldev chala jaye ga na tere naal kall... Kyu baldev?
(Balwant: Dear, Baldev will go with you... Right Baldev?)
Bansuri: Hai? Baldev kyu jaye ga?
(Bansuri: What? Why will Baldev go?)
Balwant: Bansuri ji tussi chup karo na, kyu puttar jaye ga na Veera de naal?
(Balwant: Bansuri please keep quite, why dear, you will go with Veera?)
Baldev made a serious face, trying to stop the excitment from showing on his face.
Baldev: Ji papaji, agar aap kehte ho to
(Baldev: Yes dad, if you say so)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART4:
Early in the morning, Baldev took his jeep and parked it outside Veeras house. He couldnt describe how happy he was, that he would finally go with Veera, all alone. Veera hugged everyone and went outside. Ranvi followed her out.
Ranvi: Veera, aapna dhiyan rakhna... or Baldev
(Ranvi: Veera, take care of yourself, and Baldev...)
Baldev: Ha?
(Baldev: Yes?)
Ranvi: Veera da dhiyan rakhi, main tere upar yakeen karna wa
(Ranvi: Take Care of Veera. I believe you)
Baldev: Ha Ranvi, tu fikar mat karr
(Baldev: Yes Ranvi, dont worry)
Veera smiled and hugged Ranvi and said Bye.
Ranvi stood there and waved while Baldev drove off.
Ranvi went inside. Until they werent out from Pritanpura, they didnt talk, but as soon as they entered Highway, they started with their nok-jhok. The whole time went by by their arguments etc.
When they reached Delhi, it was one hour left. The college had arranged a room for everyone, so they could relax and stuff before the party started.
Veera: Hayeee, yeh to mera hi kamra hai
(Veera: Ohh, this is my room)
She ran inside and jumped on the bed.
Baldev: Yeh tera kamra si? Enna chota?
(Baldev: Was this your room? So small?)
Baldev looked around.
Veera: Haa, yaha aise hi kamre hai... haye rabba, mujhe yaad hai kaise main or Amrit raat bhar bhet ke baatein karte the uss Kar...
(Veera: Yes, there are rooms like this here... oh God, i remember how i and Amrit would sit here all night talking about Kar...)
She stopped, she just realized what she had said. Thats when something hit her. Karan would also be here, and so was Baldev. Oh God, she thought, just dont make Karan cross our path. Baldev on the other hand heard Veera and became angry.
Baldev: Tu uss insan ka naam kyu le rahi hai?
(Baldev: Why are you taking that persons name)
Veera: Nahi main... wo
(Veera: No i... umm)
Baldev: Ussne ana hai etthe ki?
(Baldev: Is he going to be here?)
Veera: P-pata nahi... shayid
(Veera: I-i dont know... maybe)
Baldev: Mujhe agar wo ik dafa nazar agaya na, main unno othe hi gar dena hai
(Baldev: If i see him only once, i will kill him)
Veera: Baldev, pagal hogaya hai ki?
(Veera: Baldev, are you mad?)
Baldev: Kyu? Tujhe kyu itni fikar hai usski? Kya abhi bhi usse pyar karti hai
(Baldev: Why? Why do you care about him? Do you still love him?)
He sounded angry and jealous. Veera stood up.
Veera: Baldev?? Tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai, tu...
She became angry and left the room.
Baldev: Ohoo Rabji, ae ki main karditta? Naraz kardiya na kuri nu
(Baldev: Oho God, what did i do? I made her angry)
He was about to go out to look for Veera when he saw the door open, and in came Amrit.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Woo wo three updates back to back!!! I loved them all...they got to roadtrip and everything


Looking forward to the next bit😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
plzz update soon cant wait for more loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Superb ...
Plz update soon...
U r too good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
love the ff and plzzz pm me and update me soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum yaar!!!things are spicing up already!!😉 cant wait to read more!!!pls pm me when u update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh!!A twist is coming up??
The updates were awesome!! Don't have veera fall for karan again!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART5:

Amrit: Um... Hi ?

Baldev: Ha hi shi

Baldev looked at her and was about to go out from the room to search for Veera.

Amrit: Hey, tum Veera ke gaon se ho na?

(Amrit: Hey, arent you from Veeras village?)

Baldev: Ha

(Baldev: Yes)

He smiled quickly and was trying to go out from the room, but Amrit stood still infront of him.

Amrit: Lekin, tum yah ape kya kar rahe ho? Veera kaha pe hai?

(Amrit: But, what are you doing here? Where is Veera?)

Baldev: Uffo, agar mennu tu bahir jane de gi to pata chale ga mennu wo kitthe hai

(Baldev: Uff, if you let me go outside , only then will i get to know where she is)

She smiled awkwardly and moved away when the door opened. In came Sanya, Amrits cousin and Veeras college friend.

Sanya: Oh, tum Baldev ho na? Jisse hum Veera ke village me mile the?

(Sanya: Oh, you are Baldev right? Whom we met in Veeras village?)

Baldev rolled his eyes, he didn't understand how Veera could deal with them, they were so annoying.

Baldev: Ha, ab mennu zara jana hai

(Baldev: Yes, i have to go now)

Sanya: Kidhar? Veera kaha pe hai

(Sanya: Where? And where is Veera?)

Baldev: Mere sarr pe, nazar ayi?

(Baldev: On my head, do you see her?)

He was losing his patience, Amrit and Sanya started to laugh.

Amrit: He is so funny

Sanya: Haa, waise tum Veera ke sath aye ho?

(Sanya: Yes, btw are you here with Veera?)

Baldev nodded and was looking at the door.

Sanya: Ohoo waha darwaze pe kyu nazar fix ki hui hai? Kissi ka intezar hai kya?

(Sanya: Oh why are your eyes fixed on the door? Who are you waiting for?)

Both Amrit and Sanya came closer to him. They found him very attractive and wanted to tease him a bit, especially for Veera, because they knew how much they hated each other. Baldev looked weirdly at them. Just then Veera entered the room and looked at Amrit and Sanya standing real close to Baldev. She quickly patted their shoulders. They turned around.

Amrit: Veera??! Hiii yar

Sanya: OMG Veera, so nice to see you yar

They both hugged her. She pushed them away.

Veera: Yeh kya kar rahi thi tum dono?

(Veera: What are you both doing?)

She was giving them a death stare.

Sanya: Bas thori masti kar rahe the, he na Baldev JI?

(Sanya: We were just having a little fun, right mr Baldev?)

Amrit: Haa, Veera tu kaise isse itni nafrat kar sakti hai, dude he is really goodlooking

(Amrit: Yes, Veera how can you hate him? Dude he is really good looking)

Veera: Oye chup karo tum dono, or tu Baldev, mere saath chal abhi

(Veera: Hey shut up both of you, and you Baldev, come with me)

She took his hand and dragged him along.

Amrit: Are Veera, kya hua? Gussa kyu hai?

(Amrit: Hey Veera, what happened? Why are you mad?)

Veera: Hmm... Let me think... maybe because tum dono mere Boyfriend pe dore dal rahi thi???

(Veera: Hmm... let me think, maybe because you both were trying to woo my boyfriend?)

She looked at them angrily.

Amrit: Kya? Boyfriend?

(Amrit: What? Boyfriend?)

Sanya: Huh? Yeh kab hua?

(Sanya: Huh? When did that happen?)

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PART6:

Amrit: OMG, mujhe yakeen nahi araha, tum dono...

(Amrit: OMG, i cant believe, you both,,,,)

Sanya: But... Itna bara shock bhi nahi laga, Amrit come on, larai se hi pyar bharta hai na

(Sanya: But... its not that big of a shock, Amrit come on, fighting usually leads to love)

She winked at Amrit. Both started laughing. Veera rolled her eyes.

Amrit: Oh, ab to jiju bulana pare ga

(Amrit: Oh, now i have to call you brother-in-law)

Sanya: So Jiju, kan shaadi hai? Yaw o bhi karli?

(Sanya: So brother-in-law, when are you getting married? Or did you already get married?)

Baldev: Oyee abi nahi hui, hojaye gi... tennu itni jaldi kyu hai

(Baldev: Oh we are not married yet, but we will get married... why are you in a hurry?)

He was smiling and laughing, both Sanya and Amrit started having a conversation with him, they were enjoying a lot, especially with his sarcasm. Veera was furious. She went inside the bathroom and got changed. She then threw some clothes at Baldev.

Baldev: Ae ki kar rahi hai tu?

(Baldev: What are you doing?)

Sanya: Oho Veera, jiju ko tang na karo

(Sanya: Oho Veera, dont irritate brother-in-law)

Veera: Chup kar jiju ki chamchi, Baldev jaldi se badal aa kapre, time hone wala hai, or tum dono... Jao kahi or jake kapre badal ao

(Veera: Shut up brother-in-laws tail, Baldev get dressed quickly, its time soon to go, and you both... go somewhere else and change)

Amrit and Sanya giggled and left the room. That's when Baldev looked up and saw Veera. She was looking completely different, and gorgeous. He couldn't believe his eyes. She was wearing a long black dress. It was the theme of the party, girls would wear long dress, and boys would wear a suit.

Veera: Kya hai? Pehn le

(Veera: What is it? Get dressed)

She rolled her eyes and sat down on the bed looking away. Baldev laughed and went to her.

Baldev: Ki hoya? Naraz kyu hai

(Baldev: What happened? Why are you angry?)

Veera: Kuch nahi

(Veera: Nothing)

She almost shouted.

Baldev: Oho, dass wi na

(Baldev: Oho, tell me)

Veera: To sun, kya zaroorat hai tennu Amrit or Sanya de naal enni zada baatein karne di? Or wo bhi enna hass hass ke

(Veera: Then listen, what was the need to talk so much with Amrit and Sanya? And that too laughing alot aswell)

Baldev: Acha to ae gall hai, jalan ho rahi hai ki?

(Baldev: Oh so thats the thing, are you jealous?)

Veera: Nahi, bilkul nahi

(Veera: No, absolutly not)

Baldev: Ab, main inna pyara ho, isme meri ki ghalti

(Baldev: Now, i am so good looking, what can i do?)

Veera: Oyeee, apni shakal dekhi hai? Bandar lagta hai pura

(Veera: Heey, have you seen your face? You look like a monkey)

Baldev: Oye chup! Bandariya tu hai, main to ... oo ki kehnde ne, jo Amrit ke rahi si mere bare... ha handsome... main to wo ho

(Baldev: Hey quite! You are a monkey, i am... what do you call it? That Amrit said... yes handsome... i am that)

Veera pushed him away and rolled her eyes. Baldev smiled and went inside the bathroom to get changed.

Veera: Aye bare mere Baldev ke sath flirt karne, abhi batati ho

(Veera: How dare the flirt with my Baldev, i will teach them a lesson)

Baldev came out with his suit on. Veera couldn't get her eyes off him, he was looking dashing. She couldn't help but smile. She went up to him

Veera: Waise... Change lag raha hai

(Veera: Btw... you are looking nice)

She rolled her eyes and opened the door.

Veera: Chale ab? Der ho rahi hai

(Veera: Shall we go? Its getting late)

Baldev: Acha chalte hai na, lekin tu kuch ke rahi thi na? Main change lag raha ho?

(Baldev: Ok we will go, but you were saying something? That i look good?)

Veera laughed and dragged him along.

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