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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: anniec92

Thnx guys :D
I am gonna try my best to give you guys atleast two updates ... long ones lol




Today???? 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Hey guys!!
I am so sorry for not updating yesterday... the thing is, i am currently visiting my family in my hometown, its been a while since i have seen my family and friends, so in these short days i have to meet everyone, and it gets exhausting... i usually come home and go to sleep or so... but but didnt have a hectic day today soo... as planned here you guys have part 7, enjoyyy 👍🏼

PART7:

Veera and Baldev went down to the hall, where the party was held. Veera was looking around to make sure not to cross Karans path. But she didnt see him, she became relieved. Just then Amrit and Sanya came, Veera rolled her eyes.

Veera: Uffo, agayi
(Veera: Uf here they come)
Amrit: Heeey veera, looking nice ha... or jiju... not baaad
She winked. Sanya giggled. Baldev smiled and looked at Veera who was turning red with anger. Baldev was enjoying seeing Veera jealous, so he continued talking to Amrit and Sanya, Veera had enough, she just left the place. Baldev kept looking at her, when she had gone a little far, he followed her.
Baldev: Ohoo, kitthe jarahi hai tu
(Baldev: Oho, where are you going?)
Veera: Kya hai? Chor mennu
(Veera: What is it? Leave me)
Baldev: Kyu, nahi choro ga, ki karle gi?
(Baldev: Why? I wont leave, what are you gonna do about it?)
Veera: Baldev main ke rahi ho chadd mennu, warna... warna main chillane lag jao gi... phir jab guards ake teri pitayi karege na, tab tennu pata chale ga
(Veera: Baldev i am telling you, leav me, or... or i will scream, and then the guards will come and hit you, thats when u will get to know)
Baldev: Oyye, mennu guard kya, koi bi nahi cher sakta
(Baldev: Hey, what guards, no one can touch me)
He laughed. Veera gave up and stood still looking away, thats when she saw Karan. She became worried, especially of the fact that Baldev might see him. She quickly took Baldevs hand and led him to another spot, somewhere a little far away from Karan.
Baldev: Ae ki kar rahi ahi tu?
(Baldev: What are you doing?)
Veera: Oye chup kar
(Veera: Hey shut up)
Baldev: Oyye, mennu kahi marne to nahi jarahi
(Baldev: Hey, are you taking me there to kill me?)
Veera: Ha, tennu kaise pata
(Veera: Yes, how did you know)
She rolled her eyes, and soon they came to a bar where drinks where being served.
Veera: Two soft drinks thanks
The guy behind the desk gave them two soft drinks, Veera handed one glass to Baldev.
Veera: Yeh le, ab chup chap karke pee samjha
(Veera: Here you go, now keep quite and drink it)
Baldev: Nahi peeonga ,
(Baldev: I wont drink it)
Veera: To ja bhar me
(Veera: Then go to hell)
She began drinking her drink, and tried to act normal. But the fact was, inside, she was loosing it all. She didnt know what to think, how to react, should she be happy? That she didnt feel anything towards Karan anymore? Or should she be scared of the fact that Baldev was in the same party as Karan. She just prayed to God that make everything good. Just then a middle aged lady came up to Veera.
Lady: Hello beta
Veera: Hi?
Lady: Pehchana mujhe?
(Lady: did you recognize me?)
Veera: Um... nahi aunty sorry
Lady: Oho beta, itni jaldi mujhe bhool gayi?
(Lady: oho dear, you forgot me so easily?)
Veera: Nahi aunty, yeh baat nahi... i am so sorry mujhe yaad nahi araha
(Veera: No aunty, its not like that... i am so sorry but i cant remember)
Lady: Oho beta, main Karan ki mom ho
(Lady: Oh dear, i am Karans mom)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Wow Veera is soo jealous. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
PART8:
Veera became shocked, she looked at Baldev who at that time had no expressions.
Veera: Um, ji aunty... yaad aya
(Veera: Um, yes aunty... i remembered)
Lady: Kaisi ho beta? Or, Karan se nahi milli? Mujhe lagta hai usse bhi nahi pata tum idhar ho, ek sec main abhi bulati ho
(Lady: How are you dear? And did you meet Karan? I think he doesnt know that you are here, one sec i will call him)
Veera: ah nahi aunty, wo maine mil liya hai usse
(Veera: ah no aunty, i have already met him)
Lady: Acha, yeh kon hai tumhare sath?
(Lady: Okay, who is this with you?)
Veera: Yeh mera... wo dost hai aunty
(Veera: well this is... my friend aunty)
Lady: Acha acha, Karan ke sath main or uske papa aye hai or Karan ka chota bhai... Sunny tum to milli ho na?
(Lady: Okay okay, Me and Karans dad came here with him, and his younger brother... Sunny, you know him right?)
Veera: Ji aunty... ji
(Veera: Yes aunty.. yes)
Veera was getting really scared on thinking of what Baldev would do know. The thing she had tried so hard to avoid was finally taking place, and Karans mom wasnt making the situation any better.
Lady: Okay beta, main ab chalti ho, tumhare uncle ko kal subha subha kam hai office me, lekin Karan or Sunny idhar hi hai,
(Lady: Okay dear, i have to go now, your uncle have to go to the office early in the morning, but Karan and Sunny is here)
Veera: Ji aunty, thik hai...
(Veera: Yes aunty, okay)
Lady: Bye beta,
Veera: Bye aunty
Veera swallowed her last drop of drink. She was afraid, she didnt even want to look at Baldev at the moment. She just wanted to dissappear.
Baldev: Ae ki si?
(Baldev: What was this?)
He sounded furious, like he would kill someone right away. Veera kept mum.
Baldev: Maine kuch pocha Veera, ae sab ki si? Uss insan ki beeji tak tennu jandi hai?
(Baldev: Veera, i asked you something, what was this? Even that persons mother knows you?)
Veera: Baldev... tennu pata hai na, college me,, main wo Karan ke naal...
(Veera: Baldev... you know dont you, in college.. i, karan... i was..)
Baldev: Uss insan ka naam na le,
(Baldev: Dont take his name)
Veera: Baldev... meri baat to sunle puri... college me jab thi to usski beeji ayi thi ek do dafa, bass aise mulakat hui... or kuch nahi
(Veera: Baldev... listen to the whole thing... when i was in college, his mom came once or twice, thats when i met her... nothing else)
Baldev: ek do dafa mulakat? Nahi veera, enna pagal main nahi ho, zaroor koi or gall hai jo tu mennu nahi dass rahi
(Baldev: once or twice? No Veera, i am not that stupid, its definetly something else that you are not telling me)
Veera was too afraid to spill out the truth.
Baldev: Veera main kuch ke raya wa, tu mennu dassdi hai ya main uss Karan nu puch ke awa?
(Baldev: Veera i am saying something, are u gonna tell me or should i ask that Karan?)
Veera: Nahi... acha acha batati ho.. Wo.. jab main college me thi to, jab usski beeji ayi thi, main unse dosti karli thi, yeh sochte hue ke aage jake faida ho ga, jab meri or usski shaadi hogi
(Veera: No... okay i will tell you... that... when i was in college, when his mom came, i befriended her, i thought it would be good for the future.. when i would get married to him)
Baldev: Shaadi na?
(Baldev: Married ey?)
He had totally lost his calm.
Veera: Baldev lekin wo purani gall hai, or tennu achi tara pata hai ab main usse nahi pyar karti?
(Veera: Baldev, but thats old, and you know that i dont love him anynore)
Baldev: nahi nahi, tune to ode naal wyah karna hai na? Main karwata ho
(Baldev: no no, you want to get marriend to him dont you? i will make you both get married)
Veera: Baldev!!! Pagalo jaise galla mat kar, hosh me to hai tu? Main kasam khati ho Baldev, main nahi karti odde nal pyar
(Veera: Baldev!! Dont talk shit like crazy, are you in your sense? I swear Baldev, i dont love him)
Baldev saw the truth in Veeras eyes, he saw her even crying a little, he felt really bad.
Baldev: Wo main... main bas thora darr gaya si, tennu kho na do...
(Baldev: I... i just got a little afraid of loosing you)
Veera: Pagal hai tu ki? Tennu pata hai na ab meri zindagi me uss insan de waste koi jaga nahi?
(Veera: Are you stupid? you know that i dont have any place for that person in my life now)
He nodded feeling guilty, she hugged him.
Baldev: Ae ki kar rahi hai Veera?
(Baldev: What are you doing Veera?)
Veera: Chup oye, ye pritampura nahi hai, koi kuch nahi kahega
(Veera: Shut up, this is not pritampura, nobody will say anything)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Oh my goodness the ending!!?? "Eh Pritumpura Nahi hai, koi kush Nahi kahega" and then the hug..

Loved both the updates...damn thanKaran even his mummy ji is annoying lol!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
And why is his shota pra named Sunny?! Koi hor Nahi lubaya!??

Bunty, Bubbly, Rocky, Rooki whatever else...why Sunny?! LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunny303

And why is his shota pra named Sunny?! Koi hor Nahi lubaya!??

Bunty, Bubbly, Rocky, Rooki whatever else...why Sunny?! LOL


HAHAH man i totally forget everytime, but tbh Sunny name is like the only name that comes to my head after 10 minutes of hard thinking lol :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Ahahahahahahha I can see that...this is the second time gurrrl!!!

I'll take it as a proof that you love me lol!!! But come on...the next brother cousin has to be Bunty chunga?!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
"this is not pritampura, nobody will say anything"..so true line.!LOL!!Continue ASAP!!The hug is so cute!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awesome update! 👏
The last part when veera hugs baldev and she says yeh pritampura nahin hai. 😆 loved it.
Looking forward to the next update.

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