My new Veeba FF (UPDATED PART8)

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

@Sunny: you are getting popular in this ff huh?😆!

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Great updates, thanks for the pm. loved the " this is not Pritumpura:" line[U][/U]

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

the ending was awesum yaar...aaw..luving it...do continue asap...🤗

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Annie

@anniec92

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

thnx guys :D I am writing two ff:s now, so i will probably update one ff one day, and the other one the other day :D peace

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy
@Sunny: you are getting popular in this ff huh?😆!

Well in Annie's fics for sure lol!!! It's cuz she loooves me! 😃

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Annie

@anniec92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sunny303

Well in Annie's fics for sure lol!!! It's cuz she loooves me! 😃

indeeed :D

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

I just read your entire FF and I loved everything about it right from VeeBa on a journey together to jealousy session and their nokjhoks. Loved Baldev being possessive about Veera. His love is clearly reflected in his anger but at some points, he went overboard. He should understand that Karan being in the party has nothing to do with Veera. Really excited to know what happens next and I want Karan to see VeeBa hugging, please :P In fact he should see them together and realize that they are so in love with each other. Mazaa aayega ;) update fast!

Edited by _Bidzie_ - 11 years ago