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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ashlok OS-Young Love




I read a few beautiful lines about a old couple somewhere...so thought to write a short os on ashlok...hope u will like this short but sweet os...


It was for the first time in their 25 years of married life astha cooked worst lunch for shlok...the vegetables were overcooked,chapattis were burned and salad was tooo salty...

But at the table shlok kept complete silence while she was serving him ...and with a smile on his face he finished his lunch...without even complaining for once...

After that when astha was in kitchen ...shlok quietly came to her ,smiled at her and kissed her forehead...

Why you kissed me shlok?''She asked him not believing what he did...

"Today Your Cooking Reminded Me Of Your Cooking In The First Days Of Our Marriage...Your Cooking As A New Bride!...So I Wanted To Treat You As If You Are A New Bride" ...saying this he gently kissed her lips ...and she really blushed as if she was a newly married girl...

She hugged shlok and said...''waisey kaisa laga real bura khana???😃😃😃...''

Shlok''kya matlab yeh tum ne jaan bhoj kar aisa tasteless khana banaya tha???😲😲😲...''

Astha''haan ..take aap ko bata sakoon ke real main tasteless khana hota kaisa hai...takey agli baar jab varad dada apni family ke saath yahan aayen tu yeh kehney se pehley ke astha ka khana tu tasteless hota hai...aap ko merey iss khana ka taste zaroor yaad aaye😉😉😉...''

Shlok tightened the hug ''arey baba main ne tu mazaq kiya tha na...''

Astha:but hamesha aap ke mazaq se mera dil toot jata hai shlok...aap kab sudharo ge...ab tu hamarey bachey bhi bardhey ho gaye hain...''

Shlok:''i m so sorry ...mera aisa koi intention nahi tha...mujhe maaf kardo astha...''

Astha looked into his eyes and with a naughty smile on her face, gave a peck on his cheek...waisey aisa pehli baar thora hi hua hai...aap hamesha mera dil dhukatey ho pehley aur phir apni kissi baat se mera dil wapis jeet letey hain mr. khadoos...''

Shlok''aur aaj aisi kya baat ki mainey????...

Astha:itna bura khana itni khamoshi se jo khaya aap ne...complain bhi nahi kiya aik baar...

Shlok:nahi tu uss ke badley mujhe waqai kuch chahiye astha????...

Astha:kya chahiye aap ko shlok???...

Shlok:tumhari yes...

Astha:yes...par kyun???

Shlok:hamarey 25th honeymoon ke liye...hum next week paris ja rahey hain...

Astha blushed and hugged him...

Shlok:tu main issey tumhari haan samjhoon astha???...

Astha nodded in yes...

Suddenly a sweet sound echoed in the house...''bhai sunna aap ne mama papa apney 25th honeymoon ke liye paris ja rahey hain...aur aik mera pati hai jissey apney kaam se fursat hi nahi''...

Shlok:''hamarey shaitaan bachey hamesha hamari baatein sun letey hain''...

Astha:''Shaitaan''...haan bilkul aap par jo gaye hain''...both laughed and hugged eachother once more...



Ek pyaar kaa naghamaa hai, maujon ki ravaani hai
Zindagi aur kuchh bhi nahin, teri meri kahaani hai...
Tu dhaar hai nadiyaa ki, main teraa kinaaraa hoon
Tu meraa sahaaraa hai, main teraa sahaaraa hoon

Zindagi aur kuchh bhi nahin, teri meri kahaani hai


''Those who deeply love each other never grow old...they may die of old age,but they die young''...


Sorry for mistakes...

Waiting for ur precious comments...





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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆😆😆😆u here naughty girl...😛...i missed u a lot sweety...love u😛
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oops.. i resed the first place...😳 hey meerab miss you... miss you vanarsena... am on a lil break... so thought of saying hai u to guys 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

😆u here naughty girl...😛...i missed u a lot sweety...love u😛


ek kit kat break toh banta he...😉 😉 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was awesoome meerab..
loved it.
the banner was fab.
tfd pm.
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So sweet potrayal of everlasting love... Great os dear 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

oops.. i resed the first place...😳 hey meerab miss you... miss you vanarsena... am on a lil break... so thought of saying hai u to guys 😊

its ok sweety...i was really missing u dear...but study well and do your best in your exams😛😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meera.rajeev


ek kit kat break toh banta he...😆

yeah...itna break tu definitely banta hai my sweety...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu123.

So sweet potrayal of everlasting love... Great os dear 👏

awww...thank u sooo much dear...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_

that was awesoome meerab..

loved it.
the banner was fab.
tfd pm.

thanks a lot dear...🤗😛

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