SS:Trip to Australia UPDATED Pg 12 NOTE on Pg 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: contactcharu

nice preview...

pls update soon...


thnk u
ill update in afternoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mishraapoorva14

hey..srru fr late rplyyy...very nice concept and the stort is heading nicely...loved the preview as well...waiting fr the nxxtt update...loved the update..continue soon and thnx fr the pm..!!


hey no need to say sorry

nd i ll update in afternoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
I m sorry guys
I told that i ll update in the afternoon
bt my update got deleted
m sorry
I ll have to type it again
I ll post it soon
Once again sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

its ok 😊😊
we will be waiting😊😊😊
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
oh its ok😛 we wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Happy Reading

dnt forget to like nd post a comment


Regards

Priya


In car:


Ram:tum itna late kyu lagati ho

Priya:agar aap itna short notice par kehenge to late hi hongi na mai

Ram:cream rakhi tumne

Priya:koan si cream

Ram: tumhaari sensitive skin waali arre wohi jo tum pichle baar bhool gyi thi

aur phir tumhe hungama kar diya tha Australia mai

Priya(smiling):aapko yaad hai woh cream

Ram(blushing):haa yaada hai


Priya then remembers what Ram had said to her in the Natasha s dress launch party


Ram:Priya mujhe tumhaare saath bitaaya huaa har par detail mei yaad hai


Priya opens her bag to check if she has brought the cream


Priya:ohh godd

Ram:ab kya huaa

kyu bhagwaana ko yaad kr rhi ho

(under his breadth which is not heard by Priya)jab tumhaara apna personal Ram tumhaare saath hai


Priya:woh

Ram:woh kya

Priya:mai...woh cream laana bhool gyi(biting her tongue)

Ram:I knew it

mujhe pta tha ki tum bhool jaaogi

na jaane kitni baar samjhaaya hai ki packing karo to ek organised systematic tareeke se karo

par nhi madam ko to sunna hi nhi hai'

Priya:ab to ghar bhi nhi jaa skti

ab bhugto

Priya:ohh hello

aapki issi over perfection ki vajah se mera bag change ho gya tha aur phir mujhe woh nighty pehenni padi thi

Ram:haa haa yaad hai(smiling)

Priya:has kyu rhe hai

Ram:aise hi has nhi sakta kya

Ram:acha yeh lo

Priya:yeh kya hai

Ram:cream

mujhe pta tha ki tum bhool jaaogi

islye mai la aaya

Priya:thnk u


Natsaha:hi Vikram bhaai aaj itne dino ke baad phone kiya

sab theek hai na

Vikram:kyu tujhe phone nhi kr skta

aur sab theek nhi hai ... i mean hai

Natasha:kyaa huaa bataao

Vikram:tera bhaai yaar

Natasha:kyu kya kiya bhaai ne

Vikram:mujhe lag rha hai ki tere bhaai ka affair chal rha hai

Natasha:aaj 1 April nhi hai

kyaa aap bhi Neha ki tarah baathe kr rhe hai aap

Vikram:tujhe yakeen nhi hota to sun


Vikram tells his suspision about Ram


Natasha:woh spl employ kya bhaai ki executive associate hai kya

Vikram:haa tujhe kaise pta

tu jaanti hai usse

Natasha(laughing):mai kya aap bhi usse jaante hai

Vikram:mai bhi jaanta hu

koan yaar

Natasha:arre apni Priya

Mrs Priya Ram Kapoor

Vikram:what tu sach keh rhi hai na

Natasha:haa mai kyu jhoot bolungi

Vikram:aur mai na jaane kya kya soch rha tha

Ram ko pta chala na peetega mujhe

Natasha:achha mai rakhti hu

doosra call aa rha hai

bye

Vikram:bye


Airport Lounge


Ram:kuch khaaogi

Priya:man nhi hai

aap kha lijiye

m sure aapko bhook lagi hogi

Ram:haa mai abhi aata hu kuch leke

tum yhi rehna

Priya:aap to aise keh rhe hai jaise mai bachi hu

aur khi bhaag jaaogi

Ram(under his breadth this is not heard by Priya):tumse achaa koan hai bhaagne mai

bas mauka chaa hiye

Priya:kuch kha aapne

Ram:nhi aata hu

Priya:hmm

Ram:yeh lo

Priya:yeh kya hai

maine kha tha na mujhe kuch nhi chaahiye

Ram:mujhe pta hai ki tumhe adrak waali chai peene ka mann kr rha hai

to mai le aaya

Priya:aapko kaise pta ki mujhe yeh peene ka mann kr rha hai

Ram:khud se bhi zyaada ache se tumhe jaanta hu

mujhe pta hai ki tumhe kab kya chaahiye hota hai


Airplane


Priya:aap plz mujhe window seat de skte hai

Ram:kyu tumhaare paas apni hai to

Priya:dekhiye abhi aap thodi der mai so jaayenge

to bahaar kuch nhi dekhenge

to mujhe de dijiye na(making a puppy dog face)


Ram:achha achaa le lo

Priya:thnk u

Ram;btw bahaar dekhogi kya

chaand ko dekhogi

Priya:uss chaand ko dekhne ki kya zaroorat jab mera mere saa

(she realizes what she spoke)

Ram:jab tumhaara chaand tumhaare saath ho(Ram knows tht Priya is refering to him bt he thought of teasing her)

koan hai tumhaara chaand

Priya:mai kyu bataau

Ram:kyuki mujhe janna hai

Priya:mai nhi bataaungi

Ram:mai jaan lunga


Priya turns towrds the window


Ram pretends to sleep


Priya turns towrds Ram


Priya:mujhe pta hai ki aap nhi soyenge

mera chaand sirf aap hai

I love u nd u ll always be my man aur mai aapse door nhi rehna chaahti


Priya turns towards the window to hide her tears


Ram(mind):ab hum kabhi door nhi rehenge

i promise u my chaandni

I love u


Both the love birds snuggle close to each other unknowingly with an content smile on their faces


Sorry for the delay

Update delete ho gya tha

so had to type again

Aaaj ke liye itna hi

will be back soon


Priya





Note:can u suggest a soft romantic song for RaYa couple dance

Edited by priyajan12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
finally read, btw.. am first to comment ..

😃

update was so beautiful i loved it every bit.. too goood..

u did the best job
haha vikram know who is the employ and now will vikram tease ram? lol

few dialogues are so prefectly done for the perfect pair RAYA

thanks for the PM

Edited by luvbalh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Thats super super cute yaa..
Obviously dono ek dusre ko khud se behtar jante hai.. Lovely update,,
ab agle me itna time mat lagaiyo.. Jaldi karna update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
chand aur chandani...hmmm..i love it...cnt wait fr raya to be together...sooo love it...m lloving this light hearted journey of raya...m soo excited to read more...beautiful...love it..continue sooon and thnxx fr the pm..

hmm..song...u can use kuch khaas frm fashion...that ll suit raya totally
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
cute update
many cute scene between Raya. Ram taking care of her in all way.
love the cream scene, then chai scene and lastly chand and chandni scene.
loved it all.
thanks for PM...continue soon

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