Daughters of the Pandavas - ~OS~ [pg 8 Paarth Panchaali Story (7-29)

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An OS by Shyam09

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Paarth and Panchaali - The Match Part 2 (pg 8)
(starring Arjun, Panchaali)


Paarth and Panchaali - The Match (pg 6)
(starring Arjun, Panchaali)

Children's Character Guide (pg 7)
(Just a legend of each character with age, personality, etc.)


Author's Note:
Synopsis of thread:
Our story takes place in the Indraprastha, a prospering kingdom in Bharat Varsha, looked after by the eldest Pandava Yuddhistir. This story will be about the daughters of two Pandavas - Pragiti (Daughter of Panchali and Arjun) and Suthanu (daughter of Panchali and Yuddhistir). The plot itself has not been developed and will be developed as I write it. I hope you enjoy this small piece of art.

The initial style was a chapter type thing, but I like doing these short stories more. Also, since people are commenting so nicely,

**All characters will be StarBharat characters; so when you read Arjun, think of StarArjun... you get the point.

Have about a week off, so I'm thinking about doing a short story or two every day.

Anyway, first 'OS' writing, so enjoy.

** For new visitors of this thread, the first story is below, other stories can be found here (click me) **

What's coming up over the next couple of days?

** Parents vs. Children (Part II) **
** Parents vs. Children (Part III) **
** Suthanu becomes a judge **
** Pragiti and Subhadra visit the city **
**Suthanu and Pragiti - best friends forever**
**Paarth-Panchaali:: A romantic evening for two <<this will be a non-children story. They may appear briefly, but the major focus will be on Paarth and Panchaali>>
**Kaka Bhim teaches Suthanu and Pragiti how to cook**

** Any other requests **
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A Prank

Pit Pat, Pit Pat. The sound of little feet running across the marble floor in Indraprasth makes the guard look up. A flash of yellow, red, green, and purple fly by him as he is shocked. As the flash turns the corner, it laughs in a high pitched, squeaky voice. The guard hears the sound of anklets softly making a chan-chan sound and he smiles. This was far from an enemy and he returns to his statue like position.

The flash was obviously no mythical creature. It wasn't Shukla - the raven bird of the cunning mamashree Shakuni, it was no ploy of Duryodhan, nor was it a gift of the Hastinapura King Dhritarastra, the greedy and selfish uncle of the Pandavas.

As the creature moved past the various candle lamp posts, a figure slowly comes into formation. It was a girl, wearing a yellow, red and green chaniya choli and a purple bow held her long hair away from her eyes. With speed she runs past the various entrances until she stops in front of a large arch. As her eyes trace the arch, she stops at the peak and gazes at it. A bow with a heart-shaped arrow decorated with the mysticism of fire adorned the peak. Her eyes light up and a smile slowly etches across her beautiful face. This was her destination.
She bends down, removes her anklets and places it in the hands of a guard. This was nothing new for the guard, who simply smiled at the girl. Walking on her tip toes, she slowly enters the room. She had been in the room dozens of times, but this particular moment made the room seem different. The shadows caste from the various candles around the room was her enemy; she had to make haste in her plan, before it was ruined. Crouching down, she sneaks up to the left side of the bed post. Like a feline, she slowly climbs onto the bed and approachs the man who was sleeping soundly. She was almost there, soon the mixture of excitement and nervousness would end and usher in a new moment of happiness and laughter.

Being so concentrated, the girl did not realize that her entrance had caused the man's wife (who was also sleeping in bed) to stir. The wife slowly moved to see who it was, and a small smile came to her face. She couldn't miss this, so she purposely turned to her left side to face her husband and the little girl who was slowly approaching the man's face. She closed her such that anyone would think that she is asleep, when she was actually awake and watching.

Seeing the wife turn in bed, the girl got scared. Was she going to get caught? No. Everything was fine, the wife just had to turn. That was all. Phew, she thought. As she brought her lips close to the man's ear, she was caught off guard when two arms can around her and a voice called out "Gotcha!" The girl screamed and closed her eyes, perhaps in fear or more likely because she was caught and her plans were spoiled.

The laughter of the man and woman made her open her eyes. The couple were laughing and shaking their heads at her. Embarrassed, the girl climbed down the bed and was about to run away.

"Statue!" the man called out and the girl had no choice but to freeze and stand still.

The man yawned, looked at his wife who was still laughing, and got out of bed and approached the girl, chuckling.

"Got you again!" the man said.

"That wasn't fair. You cheated!" the girl retorts, clearly upset at being caught and then forced to stand still because of that cursed word 'statue!'

"Admit it darling, your father is awake even when he sleeps, just like Uncle Madhav!" the woman remarks. She too had risen from bed, and a red silk robe graced her body. Even though the couple had just awoken, a certain tej adorned their faces making them look just as fresh.

"But Mai ..." the girl mumbled. She looked away, kno
wing her heart would melt when she looked at her mother.

The wife turns to her husband and sternly, though with a spark of jester in her eyes, says, "Look Arya, sometimes let her win!"

"But Panchaali!!!" the man yearns, winking.

Panchaali simply looks at her husband, her Arya, her Gandheeva-dhari Arjun and laughs.
"No. I've said it, that's all, I've said it."

Arjun laughs. He folds his hands and bows to Panchaali who raises her right palm as if to give a blessing. "Oh great Panchaali, forgive me. Your wishes are my command." Arjun then turns to the girl and says "Darling Pragiti, are you still angry with Papa?"

Pragiti couldn't take it any longer. First, her plans were chopped in half (she wanted to be the one who screamed Gotcha!) and second her mom and dad were making this funny. This was humiliating. How would Suthanu react when she tells her about this!

"Yes Pitashree, I am very angry. I'm not going to talk to you anymore. Hmmph."

Arjun smiles. "Teek Hain. Teri Marzi. Whatever you want. Guess I'll just have to give this special present to your Mai!"

Upon hearing the word present,' Pragiti's anger vanishes. She shakes her head and says, "I was just joking Papa. Give me the present, please. pretty please. With cherries on top."

Arjun stands up revealing his huge height. He turns to Panchaali, who was slightly shorter than he was and walks a few paces closer to her.

"Please Pitashree. Please! I'm not angry anymore. I was just joking. You're the best daddy in the whole world!"

Arjun flashes a grin and raises his eyebrows at his wife, but continues to slowly approach her.

Pragiti closes her eyes and rapidly shouts "You're.the.best.daddy.in.the.whole.wide.world. Please.daddy.with.a.bow.and.arrow.on.top!!"

Arjun stops, exchanges a look with his wife and both collapse to the floor laughing. Pragiti just stands there amazed at her parent's behavior. It wasn't anything new, her dad was after all the world's greatest archer, so it was pretty reasonable to assume that adding a bow and arrow to the please would actually get things to work out. It was a new thing to say, she admitted, but this was not the reaction she expected.

After a while, Panchaali and Arjun calm down. After taking a few deep breaths, Arjun looks at Panchaali and says, "Dearest Panchaali. I'm sorry but you know how much I love bows and arrows. I'm sorry, but you don't get the gift anymore. It belongs to Pragiti."

Hearing this, Pragiti forgets she is under the statue pose and starts to jump up and down.
"Uh. You're in statue mode Pragiti. Statues don't jump." Arjun says.

"Aww daddy. Take me out of statue mode so I can hug you!"

The moment Arjun releases her from being a statue, Pragiti runs over to her dad and hugs him. She came with such force, and Arjun was that happy, that they both crashed to the ground, locked in a father-daughter embrace for about 1 minute before they split.
Pragiti holds out her hands. "Ok Daddy, where's my present?"

"This gift isn't something you hold in your hands forever. It has a different place."

"Oh that's interesting. What is it?"

Arjun laughs, gets on his knees and bends forward, kissing his daughter on the forehead. " I Love You." Arjun whispers, so low that even Panchaali couldn't hear him.

"I love you daddy." She whispers back. "Now where's my present!"

Arjun laughs. "I already gave it to you!"

Pragiti's eyes open wide. She didn't see him give the gift. Perhaps it was behind her. Yes, that made sense. She look behind her and scanned the floor. She saw a bowl of ladoos on the table, but that was probably a gift from Kaka Bhim (Kaka Bhim always sent in freshly made ladoos each morning as his way of saying "I Love you" to Pragiti). She looks at her mother who is standing smiling at her.

Have I been tricked? Yes. I don't see a present. Daddy - no - Pitashree lied to me. Oh I'll get back at him, yes I will!

"I don't see a gift. Where is it?"

Arjun gently holds her hand and lifts it until it touches her forehead at the spot where he had kissed her. "This was your gift Pragiti."

"A kiss?"

Arjun nods his head.

Pragiti's intelligent mind begins to work. A kiss was my gift. Hmm. Ooh that's interesting.

"Daddy, can I ask you something?"

"Ask me anything you like sweety!"

"If I didn't want the gift, you were going to give one to Mai right?"

Arjun saw where this was going, but played along. After all, he loved flirting with his wife. "Of course."

"So Mai's gift would have been a kiss and the words 'I Love You'?"

Arjun feigns an embarrassed look and turn to Panchaali. Her eyebrows had risen, her eyes twinkled like the stars in the night sky, and her smile was shy, yet it was obvious she wouldn't have minded such a gift. He turns to Pragiti and gently pats Pragiti's face. "Naughty Pragiti! Naughty Naughty Naughty!"

Pragiti's pushes Arjun away and runs towards the door. Before reaching the end, she turns around with a huge smile and shouts, "Sorry I ruined your present Mai. I'm leaving now! Tell Daddy to give you extras now!" And with that Pragiti rushes out the chambers, leaving a sheepish looking Arjun and a smiling Draupadi in the room.

Arjun turns to face Draupadi. He tries to say something, but Draupadi just smiles and shakes her head.

She winks at Arjun, laughs, and moves towards the clothes room, leaving a stunned Arjun in the background scratching his head. Had he been outsmarted by two ladies he loved dearly?

Edited by shyam09 - 11 years ago
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Links to Future Stuff within this thread

PARENTS VERSUS CHILDREN PARTS
(starring Pandavas and their respective wives in IP and their children who reside in IP)

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THE MAGIC IN THE GARDEN OF THOUGHTS
(starring Yuddhistir, Panchaali, their daughter Suthanu, and a guest appearance by Pragiti (Arjuna and Draupadi's daughter)

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Paarth and Panchaali - A Romantic Evening for Two
(starring Arjun, Panchaali, Yuddhi and Draupadi's daughter Suthanu, and Arjun and Draupadi's Daughter Pragiti, a guest appearance by Bhimsen and everyone's favorite Priyamvada!)

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Paarth and Panchaali - The Match
(starring Arjun, Panchaali)

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Children's Character Guide (pg 7)
(Just a legend of each character with age, personality, etc.)

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Paarth and Panchaali - The Match Part 2 (pg 8)
(starring Arjun, Panchaali)
Edited by shyam09 - 11 years ago
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Loved happy pandava family. 👏
Very cute. 👏
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Really sweet!😳 R u planning to write abt yudis daughter also?? Cos I wanna see some degree of romance between them too😳
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Originally posted by: Paro95

Really sweet!😳 R u planning to write abt yudis daughter also?? Cos I wanna see some degree of romance between them too😳

yep. As soon as I figure out a nice plot.
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I'm back with a plot. This is going to be a multi-part story. (I wrote the first part and am taking a break now).
Parents versus Children
Plot: In this multi-part story, the Pandava children are on a mission to see who can stay up the longest before being caught and forced to go to sleep. Part 1 covers the beginning and introduction of the story. Part 2 will cover the hiding part, and Part 3 will cover the winner,

"Looks like another rainy night!" Suthanu, the daughter of Yuddhistir and Draupadi muttered. She was just approaching her mid-teens and of the many Pandava children, she was close to the eldest. Further, being the daughter of the jyesth Pandu-putra, she sort of had her respective powers.

She was with her other brothers (Abhimanyu, Shrutavindhya, Sutasoma, Srutakirti, Satanika, and Srutakarma) and her beloved sister - the daughter of Arjun and Draupadi - Pragiti, listening to the roar of the wind and the pitter-patter of the raindrops.

"Aargh! This is so boring!" Satanika, the son of Nakul and Draupadi, said. "Come on guys, we have to do something fun!"

Suthanu laughed. Of all her brothers, Satanika was her favorite since he always was up to no good. Him and Abhimanyu were both mischievous little devils.

"You heard the man folks. Move it! Hustle! Let's do something!" Suthanu said.

"But what Di?" Pragiti asked. She was a curious child, young in age, but very intelligent. She was quite shy in front of people, especially in front of her brothers.

They all exchanged questioning looks. It was going to be bedtime soon and if they didn't do anything, it would be curtains closed until the morning.

Abhimanyu smiled cunningly. "I have an idea. Let's play a game of hide and seek."

Shrutavindya, the eldest son from all the other Pandava children and the son of Draupadi and Yuddhistir, was known for his healthy and calm state of mind. He smiled at his younger brother's suggestion and said, "If that is ---"

He was cut off by Pragiti. "Forgive me jyesth, but hide and seek is a game for kids. Please don't give him your word."

Suthanu smiled at what she just heard. Her younger sister was shy, but she had her charm with everyone. "I agree jyesth, how about another game?"

Abhimanyu wasn't ready to let go of what he thought was a marvelous idea. "Oh Di One and Di Two. Let me finish my sentence. Geesh, why can't you ever be as cool as me and Satanika." Satanika, upon hearing his name, perked up in joy, but after a moment, he fell back into deep thought over what game to play.

"The game is hide and seek, but we won't be playing it."

"What?" Srutakarma asked. He was the son of Sahadev and Draupadi and like his father he was incredibly patient and little spoken. "What do you mean by playing but not playing, Bratha Abhi"

Abhimanyu stands up and sits next to Suthanu. "Aare mere pyaare Suthanu, I mean that we'll be playing a game, but we won't be playing it amongst ourselves!"

Here Srutakirti interrupts. This son of Arjun and Draupadi was the youngest of the Pandavas and he was very timid. "Uhm, Bratha Abhimanyuji. I don't understand."

"I got it!" Everyone looks in the direction of the voice. It was Sutasoma who spoke. This mighty son of Bhim and Draupadi shared a familial characteristic with his father. "What Bratha Abhi is saying is that we will be playing hide and seek, but at the same time we shall have some delicious rasa gullas, gullab jamuns, and my favorite ladoos! We can't do two things at once, so either we will be playing or eating!"

Everyone burst out laughing. "Oh Sutasoma! You love to eat like Kakashree Bhim. Here have a ladoo" Satanika said holding out both his clenched fists. Sutasoma immediately stands up and rushes to where Satanika was sitting and taps the right hand. Nothing. He taps the left hand, but nothing. Everyone bursts out laughing again.

"Satanika! I am going to complain to Kakashree Nakul that you have been teasing me again about my eating!"

"I know you very well bratha Sutasoma. You're going to complain whether I tease you or not. Daddyji always gives you food."

"ok ok everyone calm down! We'll eat later (here Sutasoma became very happy)" Suthanu said. "Let Abhi speak."

"Thank you Di for this opportunity to say a few words. I really appreciate the stand you have taken against our brothers for my sake. This truly is the best day of my life and I would just like to ---"

Suthanu hid her laughter. "Abhiii" she said in a strict tone.

"Right right. Ha. Sorry Di. No. Truly sorry. I mean ... heh ... let's just forget the sorry part and move on... what was I saying?"

"Hide and seek."

"Aah right. My suggestion is to play a little game of hide and seek with our parents. We have 30 minutes until it's bedtime, so why don't we play a game to make that 30 minutes as long as possible. Those who stay up the longest wins. Simple."

Everyone liked that idea. Shrutavindhya, however, said: "Abhi. That's a nice idea, but is it a good one?"

"Jyesth! Please let's play this game. For me!!!" Pragiti said.

"No for me Jyesth!" Srutakarma said.

"No don't listen to him Jyesth. For me!" Srutakirta argued.

"Calm down everyone!" Suthanu giggled. "With all this 'For Me Jyesth' you won't give Jyesth a moment to speak."

Shrutavindhya laughed. "You guys are too cute. What the heck - let's do this! Abhi, since it's your game, it's your rules!"

Abhimanyu's eyes lit up at another chance to thank someone. "Why thank you Jyesth ---"

"That's all Abhi, no need to keep thanking me again and again!" Shrutavindhya chuckled.

"Right. Thank you. I mean ... no thank you ... oh no here i go again. What was I talking about again? Oh right rules. The rules will be simple. We all work in teams. Whichever team member survives the longest, that team wins. And Bratha Sutasoma - the winner gets ladoos!!"

"Whatever happens in the end, we still remain the best siblings forever!" Suthanu declared. She laughed. She loved her brothers and sisters dearly, but she knew how competitions can end up.

Voices of "yes" or "agree" or "ladoos for everyone" rose up. Everyone agreed to the rules and Suthanu's statement. It was time for the games to begin.

"What are the teams Bratha Abhi?" Shrutavindya asked.

Abhimanyu looked around the room, mentally counting everyone there was. 8 people. Hmm how should I divide this, he thought.

"Let's do this Jyesth. We split into two teams of 4. In Team A we have you, me, Satanika, and Srutakirti. Since you are the eldest, you will be our team leader. In Team B we have Di Suthanu, Pragiti, Bratha Sutasoma and Srutakarma. Since Di is the eldest, she leads the team."

Suthanu and Pragiti shared a sisterly smile, while Abhimanyu and his mischievous brother Satanika exchanged a laugh. Shrutavindya caught Srutakirti's eye, while Sutasoma and Srutakarma licked their lips.

"Let the games begin. Best of Luck to everyone!" And they all made imaginary bell sounds signaling the start of the game.

But unknown to them, a spy - the mother of Abhimanyu, Subhadra - had listen to her son's idea. It was now going to be a battle of wits against the parents and their darling children.

Yuddhistir, Bhim, Arjun, Nakul, Sahadev, Panchaali, and Subhadra versus Shrutavindhya, Sutasoma, Srutakirti, Satanika, Srutakarma, Abhimanyu, Suthanu, and Pragiti. 7 parents versus 8 children... who will be the winner?

***END PART 1***
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⭐️👏⭐️
This is getting better and better.

A beautiful story, beautiful plot of beautiful children told beautifully. Great imagination..👍🏼
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Superb piece of write ups Shyam! Enjoyed a lot while reading...⭐️
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Shyam, this is wonderful!!! 😃
Please continue...👍🏼

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