^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET II} PRT-155to157 pg-50 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part. Kitna Burma kia us admi ne. Such a bas ***d he is. Its good maan ne use Mara. Lamina
Loved the part. So true ki ese log hote hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsuuum update after long long wait šŸ‘ and finally maan said i love u 😳
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Its been a long tym.. where's updat yr ?
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Sorry for being late, my comp was gone for repairs



PART 158

M-They are scum...lowest of the low. Bhool jao. They will never touch you again they'll go through me first, yes?

She nods

G-I am ok...don't worry

M-Good. Juice piyogi ya soup?

G-I guess I attract those kind of people. Pehle Ranjeet, then those goons, now him

M-No you don't. You are pretty, you attract everyone

G-Chup

M-Yeah including me and Sam...and everyone else

G-Sam?

M-Sure he likes you...not that way but he likes

G-Yes as a SIL

M-Yes...as a sister but kisi bhi ladki ko behen to nahi maan lete naa kuch to hona chahiye jo pasand ayaa to behen banaya

G-hmm

M-Bas... he is decent isliye behen banaya

G-Jaise Aliya tumhari behen

M-oh please! I dont want any relation with her. I would rather forget she even exists

She chuckles

G-You are very nice and brave

She says with an admiring look

M-Thank you

Maan uthta hai and pours her a glass of juice

M-Yeh pii lo

G-Bhook nahi hai

M-Pii lo, it's just a glass you'll feel better trust me

Geet glances at the mirror and her face has a horrified expression jaise bhooth dekh liya ho

She grabs her hair

G-ooohhh!!!! Mera baal!!!!! [She cries out] My hair...ye..kya...ye to.. pure jal gaye

M-It's fine Geet...theek ho jayenge

G-O God...I love my hair... I did so much to grow them

M-To wapas badh jaenge. Don't worry

G- Main kal office kaise jaungi

M- Tum kal office jaogi hi nahii.You will take 3 days leave

G-Kaam hai mujhe, Maan...important meeting hai aur aise jale baal girte hain badhte nahi

She is touching them and feeling worse

M-Geet agar tum aise office gayi to log mujhe wife abuse ke case mein jail mei daal denge and don't worry about your hair it'll be fine

G-Mazaak mat kao !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M-Main mazaak nahi kar raha

G-IT WILL NOT BE FINEEE MAAANNN

Maan looks idhar udhar...oh hell...oh hell...wali situation

Geet pad gai mooh chupake bistar pe

M-oh hell !!!!

Maan bhi sar pakad leta hai then sits near her combing her hair with his fingers

She starts sniffling...sisak ne lagti hai

M-Geet...agar tumhare baal main theek kar doon to khana khaogi?

G-Bekaar ki baatein mat karo Maan. Mujhe mat behlao. Bachchi nahi hoon main

M-Yaar meri har baat tumhe mazaak kyun lagti hai? I am a serious sort of a person, you know

She is still sniffling not paying heed to him

He rubs her neck a little thode massage wale moves mein so that she can feel a bit relaxed

Phir kehta hai 2 min baad

M-I'll be back. Ruko tum

Maan jaata hai aur baal katne ke liye samaan lekar aata hai...rakhta hai uski dresing table par

Phir 4-5 cheezein girate huye, phir jata hai Geet ke paas

She looks at him opening her one eye

M-Utho. Aao

He says pulling her hand gently

She looks at him

G-Kya hai? Chain nahi hai tumko

Maan godh mein utha leta hai

G-oh !!!

Aur laakar baitha deta hai uske dressing table ke stool par

M-Ab hilna mat

He says grabbing the scissors

G-Kya kar rahe ho??????? Mere baal !!!!!!!!

She covers her hair

M-Haan tumhare hi hain. Geet! Hilo mat

G-Tum kar kya rahe ho? Main ganji ho jaungi

M-Mujhpe bharosa nahi hai bilkul bhi?

G-Mazaak nahi hai ye! Tum koi naai ho kya?

PART 159

M-Ab hilna mat

He says grabbing the scissors

G-Kya kar rahe ho??????? Mere baal !!!!!!!!

She covers her hair

M-Haan tumhare hi hain. Geet! Hilo mat

G-Tum kar kya rahe ho? Main ganji ho jaungi

M-Mujhpe bharosa nahi hai bilkul bhi?

G-Mazaak nahi hai ye! Tum koi naai ho kya?

M-Geet CHUP!

Geet ka haath hatata hai

G-Maan!

Maan mug se paani lekar baal gile karta hai

G-oh please!

M-Shut up!

G-O God...O God...O God ...O God...O God. Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram

Geet aankhein band karke bole jaa rahi hai

Maan ignores her chanting aur mirror par tauliya dakh deta hai

G-Ram Ram Ram Ram

M-You know taking other guys name right now is not a good strategy

G- Ram bhagwan hain!

Snip!... kainchi chalti hai

G-Aaa !!! Kaat diya!

M-Ram insan ka bhi naam hai

Snip!

G-Awaaaz mat karo atleast

M-Hilna mat!

G-Hey bhagwan!

Maan mazze se kange se pakad pakad ke professionals' ki tarah haath mein lekar kaat raha hai

She starts chanting the hamunam chaalisa

G-Maan, main ladki hoon

M- I have no doubts about your gender

G-Ladki aur ladke ke baal mein farak hota hai

Snip! Snip! Snip!

M-Mujhe pata hai, senorita

She again starts chanting hanuman chalisa

G-Jai kapish gyaan gunn sagar...jai...trilok ujagar

M-Yeh sagar kaun hai? A friend of yours?

G-Gyaan gunn sagar! Hanuman ki jai ! Bolo Hanuman ki jai!

M-Geet hilo mat warna Hanuman bhi kuch nai kar payenge

Maan mazze se baal kaat raha hai...beech beech mein geele bhi kar deta hai... mirror par bhi towel hai ki Geet ko naa dikhe ki ho kya raha hai

G-I know. Tumne kharaab kar dyia naa...mujhe ab wig kharidna padega...mera wig ab hawa mein udd jayega..sab mazak udayenge

She makes a big pout

M-Haan tum to bhagwaan ho sab tumhe hi pata hai. BFF's with that Ram and Hanu huh?

Maan finaly kainchi neeche rakhta hai...Geet ka dryer uthata hai

G-Maan mazak mat karo! Baal kharab kiye na ganjaa kar dungi main, tumhe full body wax kar dungi

M-Tumhe kya pata ki main already fully waxed hoon yaa nahi?

G-Matlab? Ofcourse nahi ho, I know

M-oh tumne mujhe bathroom mein shower lete huye dekha hai?

G-Uski kya zarurat hai waise hi dikhta hai

M-Wo to wapas bhi uug sakthe hai naa...

Maan mzzeae le raha hai...while blow drying her hair

G-I can see aur tum mein itni himmat nahi wax karane ki

M- Baby, you don't know first thing about what I can dare to do or not. You know you are going to regret all bad things you said to me

G- huh !

M-Smile honey

Maan hatata hai towel

She looks at the mirror

She stares at the mirror her lips move into a straight line and slowly part...her eyes light up...dimples appear on her cheek and her pearl like teeth show up as she gives a happy ear to ear grin

M-See, thoda bharosa rakhna seekho

G-It's wowww !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fabbb!!!!!! I mean you are like professionals. I never had it so good. Kaise? Kahan sikha tumne??? You are so good...so very good

M-Trick of trade...

G-I can't believe that I can look so good

M-You always look good

G-No bad hair

M-Nope

He says smugly

G-You are a magician


PART 160

G-I can't believe that I can look so good

M-You always look good

G-No bad hair

M-Nope

He says smugly

G-You are a magician

M-Thank you. Ab yahan aao

Maan usse wapase se bed par bitha deta hai...soup dalkar deta hai

M-Yeh piyo

G-Half-half. Tum bhi

Dusre katore mein Maan ko daalke deti hai

M-You are the best husband, you know

She sits with her soup

G-Waise ye sab sikha kahan se

M-hmm...kaafi saal pehle...the lady was shop owner. She wasn't much interested in ...you know... she was just lonely and I wasn't much of a talker anyways so...she decided to teach me about all this, she owned a salon...I only got as far as sweeping floor and cutting hair

G-oh...nice lady I guess

Maan smiles almost ironically

G-What else would she teach you?

M-oh she was quite creative in... umm nothing...

He looks away blushing... he is sort of imagined him and Geet doing something and he is blushing like a virgin...

She smiles a bit

G-If you don't wanna say it, I will not push it

Maan nods and mutters 'thanks'

G-So how was your trip? You said bohot acchha ghar hai

M-oh wo...haan sundar tha architecturally

G-Hamara ghar bhi sundar hai, hai naa

M-Haan..par... kabhi tumhe bhi lekear jaunga

G-Haan le janaa. Photo hi khinchke le aate

M-Naa I'll show you the real thing. Photo se suspense kharab nahi karunga

G-oh unko acha nahi lagega ki ye log baar-baar ghar dekhne aa jate hain

M-Nai nahi unhone hi invite kiya. Nai to tell you what? If the Mauritius thing works of well we'll buy that house from them. We'll have enough capital

G-Kya karna hai wo ghar leke? Rehne do unhe, kahan jayenge wo?

M-Arre free mein thodi lunga.. agar unhe bechna hoga to kharid lunga...that's all

G-Haan to sahi hai

Maan looks at Geet and smiles

M-Haan! Paise se yaad aaya...wo Gayatri hai naa Ranjeet ki biwi

G-hmm

He narrows his eye with all smile gone

G- Wo mujhse uss din keh rahi thi- Pata hai tere pati ke paas sab milake kitna paisa hai? Maine kaha nahi, main hisaab kyun rakhun? Pagal to wo hai hi, hasne lag gayi ki ye bhi nahi pata ye wo. Ajeeb hi pagal hai wo. Kehti hai- mujhe to pata hai, Ranjeet ke paas sab poperty sab milake 75 lacs hain. Maine kaha badiya

Loser...Maan soch raha hai

G-Pagal si kehti- pata nahi hai to alumni kaise mangegi phi--

M-Geet...

G-Haan bolo, kya?

M-Tumhe pata hai aaj tak main jitni ladkiyoon se mila hoon na except my mom

She is looking at him

M-You are the sanest...

She smiles

M-Sweetest

Her cheeks acquire color

M-And nicest

She is red with blush

M-Sach mein... no lies...

G-I know my husband doesn't lie

She puts her arm around his neck

Maan ke sarr mein dard sa hua... he winced a little

G-Kya hua?

Maan ko samajh nai aya ki dard kyun kar raha hai

G-Kuch hua?

Maan ne haath lagaya to bahut dard hua and he makes a bad face

G-Kya ho gaya Maan?

M-It's swelled...

Geet alert ho gayi

G-Dikhao. Show me

M-I think that was your pan

He turns around and she sees that it is badly swelled

G-Hey Bhagwan! Tch tch...ye...to pehle kyun nahi bataya?

PART 161

M-It's swelled...

Geet alert ho gayi

G-Dikhao. Show me

M-I think that was your pan

He turns around and she sees that it is badly swelled

G-Hey Bhagwan! Tch tch...ye...to pehle kyun nahi bataya?

M- I didn't feel it. How bad is it?

G-Abhi baitho. Thik ho jayega

Geet uthti hai bed se aur jaldi daudke bahar jaati hai

After some moments she returns with an ice bag

She comes and sits behind him and starts putting the ice bag where it is swollen

He tries to be silent lekin ek do bar he whimpers a little

G-Bass abhi thik ho jayega

Dheere dheere fook maar rahi hai

M-Thanks and thanks for hiding the knife too. You were really brave. I am very proud of you

She smiles

G-You knew I hid it?

M-Yup

G-You are very smart

M- Thank you

He looks at them together in the mirror and he thinks that they do look nice together. Of course now they don't match as he is in office wear and she in a slip...now if he was stripped of his shirt... they would look more matched

Maan shakes his head throwing away such thoughts. It's the head injury...he can blame it on that

G-But if I would have been brave, to baat itni aage badi hi nahi...I would have saved myself

M-Bravery is different from strength

G-Huh?

M-You can be Bruce Lee but if you are afraid you will cower away...but you were more like a...you didn't have physical muscle to fight yet you defended yourself and held him off as long as you could. That's bravery

As she finishes giving ice bag, she kisses on top of his head

Ice bag par thoda khoon bhi lag jata hai...dried off blood from his injury...

Geet looks at the ice bag

G-Khoon? You bled? Maan ! Oh God!

She gets some water and cotton and cleans the area

G-oh God! Tumhe kuch ho jata to aur kahan laga hai?

He is protesting all the while to stop her being so frantic that it's just a cut tension mat lo...blah blah...

M-Kahin nahi lagi...that was just once when he hit me

G-MAAN Bolte kyun nahi tum !!!!!!!!

She screeches

G-Bohot gussa aata hai mujhe iss aadat pe. Kuch bolo hi matt! Saamne wala puch puchke mar jaye. Mujhe isse aur tension hoti hai. Par tumhe thode samajh mein ayega

M-Maine kaha naa, it wasn't hurting so I forgot about it and I was worried about you.. .and I didn't remember that I had been hit

G-Hatto! Dikhao mujhe

Geet from tip of his hair se sab jagah scan kar rahi hai Maan ko for any injury

M-I am sure it's not that bad

Geet sunn nahi rahi

Ache se scanning kar rahi hai jaise x-ray laga hai ankh mein

M-Geet...Geet...it's not that bad aur kahin nahi lagi hai mujhe. Stop worrying

After Geet is satisfied...she nods

M-Maine kaha tha na

She keeps her head on his chest while playing with his buttons

He puts his arms around her

M-I've thrown him out.. he won't ever come back.. or his friends.. or anyone...I am closing the bar downstairs

G-Sach??? [She grins happily] Matlab tum bhi nahi piyoge?

M-Yah I've decided. An occasional glass I'll have but not daily

G-Good boy

She nuzzles his chin

He rests his head on her hair and leans back against the head board

She snuggles closer to him in comfort of his arms and he feels relaxed keeping her close and they drifts in sleep

++++++++++++++++++

Few days had passed

Maan was fighting with his inner turmoil had at last came into a decision to move on

He knew he loved Geet...he confessed...she was her present and he imagined a future with her.

A future...that he never planned for...he always had a past and lived in present...but now he had Geet in his present...and dreams with her for future

He decided to get over his ugly past, to bury it's remains forever as if it never existed.

He walks into the storeroom, which he always kept locked and which had all the evidences of his past...the photos, the videos, the clothes, the things...they were his reminder that what he had went through and what he wanted to come out of

But now he decided to throw away his past...as he had a beautiful future smiling at him

He opens the lock and gets into the dusty room

He gathers the things and goes to throw them away but a video cassette falls from the pile

As if his hands worked on its own, he puts the video cassette in the old player and a small TV

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally You updated.. Superb, Mind blowing Part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful updates dear
geet paniced seeing her burnt hair but maan like a professional cut her hair. Loved geets chanting of ram ram and maans teasing šŸ˜†
geet dressed maans wound and scolded him for being careless
maan decided to bury his past and think about his future with geet 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha ...a different side of Maan
Loved it

Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hero ne aa kar villian ki band baja di.
Awesome update.

Finally confession is done.
Maan didn't wait more and spoke out his feelings for geet.

Geet says she is fine but is she?

Love this story.

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow maan is in love with geet...wow

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful amazing love there cute romance please keep updating we love this ff šŸ˜›

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